Bachpan aur Maa...!!!

naacheez · **Bachpan aur Maa...!!! -** 16th December 2007, 06:06 PM

bachpan ki har shararat yaad hai mujhe
maa jab apne haath se khilaati
toh dheere se uski ungali kaat lena
jab wo mujhe nehlaati toh
khud se zyaada usse bhigo dena
school ke liye tayyar karti toh
apni kitaaben chhupa dena
aur chhodne jati toh raaste mein
chocolate ke liye zid karna
kabhi baarish mein bheeg kar aana
toh daant-te hue uska mujhe ponchhna
aur sardi ke dinon mein chupke se
ghar se baahar khelne jaana
aur bahut si shararton se usse sataana
par ab main bada ho gaya hoon
magar maa ye nahin samjhati
isi liye toh har roz subah
pehla niwala apne haath se khilati hai
taaki main kabhi toh apne bachpan mein lautoon
aur phir se uski ungali kaatoon
par main chahte huye bhi aisa nahin karta
kyonki main jaanta hoon ki usse taqleef hogi
wo niraash ho jaati hai
aur agle din phir se
isi ummeed se pehla niwala deti hai
ki shayad aaj main apne bachpan main lautoon

sunita thakur · 21st January 2008, 05:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naacheez

bachpan ki har shararat yaad hai mujhe
maa jab apne haath se khilaati
toh dheere se uski ungali kaat lena
jab wo mujhe nehlaati toh
khud se zyaada usse bhigo dena
school ke liye tayyar karti toh
apni kitaaben chhupa dena
aur chhodne jati toh raaste mein
chocolate ke liye zid karna
kabhi baarish mein bheeg kar aana
toh daant-te hue uska mujhe ponchhna
aur sardi ke dinon mein chupke se
ghar se baahar khelne jaana
aur bahut si shararton se usse sataana
par ab main bada ho gaya hoon
magar maa ye nahin samjhati
isi liye toh har roz subah
pehla niwala apne haath se khilati hai
taaki main kabhi toh apne bachpan mein lautoon
aur phir se uski ungali kaatoon
par main chahte huye bhi aisa nahin karta
kyonki main jaanta hoon ki usse taqleef hogi
wo niraash ho jaati hai
aur agle din phir se
isi ummeed se pehla niwala deti hai
ki shayad aaj main apne bachpan main lautoon

bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....dil ko chu lene wali thi aapki yeh poetry.....maa to maa hi rahti hai.....baccha bachpen chorr jawaan ho jata hai...par maa...maa hi rahti hai.....!
heart touching.....

Dr. Preet Chhou · 22nd January 2008, 04:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by naacheez

bachpan ki har shararat yaad hai mujhe
maa jab apne haath se khilaati
toh dheere se uski ungali kaat lena
jab wo mujhe nehlaati toh
khud se zyaada usse bhigo dena
school ke liye tayyar karti toh
apni kitaaben chhupa dena
aur chhodne jati toh raaste mein
chocolate ke liye zid karna
kabhi baarish mein bheeg kar aana
toh daant-te hue uska mujhe ponchhna
aur sardi ke dinon mein chupke se
ghar se baahar khelne jaana
aur bahut si shararton se usse sataana
par ab main bada ho gaya hoon
magar maa ye nahin samjhati
isi liye toh har roz subah
pehla niwala apne haath se khilati hai
taaki main kabhi toh apne bachpan mein lautoon
aur phir se uski ungali kaatoon
par main chahte huye bhi aisa nahin karta
kyonki main jaanta hoon ki usse taqleef hogi
wo niraash ho jaati hai
aur agle din phir se
isi ummeed se pehla niwala deti hai
ki shayad aaj main apne bachpan main lautoon

sach mein dost pdte pdte hi bachpan mein chle gae , dil k bhut hi kreeb se gujr gae yeh apki kwita , bhut hi rongte jkhde kr dene wali kwita hai ,

naacheez · **thanks -** 22nd January 2008, 07:11 PM

thank u very much sunita ji and dr. preet ji. thanx a lot

Dhaval · 22nd January 2008, 08:23 PM

saaHeb:

namaskaaR..!

aapko aaj maiNe aaj pehli baar paRhaa hay.. aur sach maaniYe ees kavviSh ko baar-baar paRhaa ees dil ne.. aapke ees jaZbaatoN ko maiN salaam kartaa huuN.. baRii hi umdaah koShiSh hay aapki.. YuuNhi meHfil ki ranaq baRhaate rahiYe..!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval