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Kisi aur se dil laga na sake - 21st July 2015, 07:49 PM
Kisi se door jaa na sake, kisi ke paas aa na sake
Chah kar bhi yeh dil kisi aur se laga na sake

Dekha hai oonhe hi jab bhi dekha hai aaine mai humne
Dikhayi degi soorat oonhi ki ke samne aaine ke jaa na sake

Who kehte hain apna haal e dli bayan karne ko humse
Aur hum hain lafzon mai haal dil ka apne bata na sake

Poochne per oonke chuppi si cha jaati hai labon par
Kitni mohabbat karte hain oonhe yeh samjha na sake

Jaan le who beintehaan mohabat ko dekh aankhon mai
jaane kyon dasta e mohabbat hum oonhe suna na sake

Zindagi wahi jise khul ke Jiya jaaye, apne armaanon ko pankh lagaa udhne do...
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21st July 2015, 08:21 PM
Sweet ji...bahot achche se bayaan huye hain ehsaas..bahut achcha likha hai aapne...dil se daad aur mubarakbaad...
likhti rahiye....aati rahiye...


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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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22nd July 2015, 10:22 AM
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Kisi se door jaa na sake, kisi ke paas aa na sake
Chah kar bhi yeh dil kisi aur se laga na sake

Dekha hai oonhe hi jab bhi dekha hai aaine mai humne
Dikhayi degi soorat oonhi ki ke samne aaine ke jaa na sake

Who kehte hain apna haal e dli bayan karne ko humse
Aur hum hain lafzon mai haal dil ka apne bata na sake

Poochne per oonke chuppi si cha jaati hai labon par
Kitni mohabbat karte hain oonhe yeh samjha na sake

Jaan le who beintehaan mohabat ko dekh aankhon mai
jaane kyon dasta e mohabbat hum oonhe suna na sake


Jiya, bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai, accha lga aapko padna, likhti rhiye aur khush rhiye.

god bless u

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23rd July 2015, 01:05 AM
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Kisi se door jaa na sake, kisi ke paas aa na sake
Chah kar bhi yeh dil kisi aur se laga na sake

Dekha hai oonhe hi jab bhi dekha hai aaine mai humne
Dikhayi degi soorat oonhi ki ke samne aaine ke jaa na sake

Who kehte hain apna haal e dli bayan karne ko humse
Aur hum hain lafzon mai haal dil ka apne bata na sake

Poochne per oonke chuppi si cha jaati hai labon par
Kitni mohabbat karte hain oonhe yeh samjha na sake

Jaan le who beintehaan mohabat ko dekh aankhon mai
jaane kyon dasta e mohabbat hum oonhe suna na sake
Itni khoobsurati aur saadgi ke saath aap likhti hain aur fir kehti hain lafzon me haal e dil bayaan karna nahin aata. Mujhe to aapki bayaani bahut khoobsurat lagi aur meri dil se daad kubool kijiye... Yunhi mehfil sajaati rahiye.. Aona khayal rakhiye!

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23rd July 2015, 12:11 PM
Bohot achha likhaa hai Jiya ji.

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23rd July 2015, 12:21 PM
wah bahut sundar lage aapke ehsaas
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath

Aapka Apna
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23rd July 2015, 08:32 PM
Madhu ji, shukriya jaankar khushi hui aapko koshish acachi lagi.

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Didi...shukriyaa aapko aapki Jiya ka likha hua pasand aaya...aap bas apna aashirwad aur pyar aise hi banaye rakhen...lots of hugs to you.

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23rd July 2015, 11:30 PM
Jiya

Namaste

Ehsaas achchhe haiN... mehnat zaare rakhen... duaa hay zor-e-qalaam aur badhen zyaadaah...

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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