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Rona !~! - 3rd November 2005, 11:37 PM

Koi dikha ke roye ,
Koi chhipa ke roye ,
hume rulane wale
hume rula ke roye
marne ka maza to tab he yaaro
jab qatil bhi janaze pe aake roye !!!!


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3rd November 2005, 11:43 PM

Prachi ji

Bohat hi umda .. seedha aur simple... aah pe wah kehne pe majboor

likhte rahiyega yuN hi ...

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3rd November 2005, 11:47 PM

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3rd November 2005, 11:55 PM

Thank u Kunal Ji and thanks u Parul Ji

Thanks for liking it !!

I know I am the most irregular of all the people here , but will try to post few of them regularly ~~~

Thanx again !!


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3rd November 2005, 11:59 PM

Prachi ji

ye ghar aap ka hi hai .. ye shayri parivaar aapka hi hai ... jab marji aaeyN ... par aate raha kariye .. ronak bani raheGI...

umeed hai aap likhti rahengi .. aur apne khayal hum tak pahunchati rahengi

aapka apna

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4th November 2005, 12:04 AM

thank u kunal ji

Koshish rahegi ki aap logo ko niraash na karu !!


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4th November 2005, 04:51 AM

hi prachi...bahaut accha likkha hai...keep writing.take care


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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4th November 2005, 04:55 PM

Koi dikha ke roye ,
Koi chhipa ke roye ,
hume rulane wale
hume rula ke roye
marne ka maza to tab he yaaro
jab qatil bhi janaze pe aake roye !!!!


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4th November 2005, 09:03 PM

prachi ji bas dil ko choo gaye aapke ye sher.bahut hi pasand aaya hume ye.bas dil se sirf daad hi daad nikal rahi hai.aapse bas yahi darkhwast hai ki aap yahaan aate rahiye.taki hume itne umda kalaam padhne ka awsar milta rahe.

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4th November 2005, 09:13 PM

prachi ji

bahut kam shabdo me bahut kuch keh diya hai

kuch hamari koshish

Is jahaan me koi nahi hai aisa,
jis se hum gale lagkar roe.

Haal-e-dil ka imtehaan kya dediya,
azmaane wale hume azmaakar roe.

Hum ne woh aaine to dekhe hai, jo tootkar ansu baha.e,
aaj pathar bhi dekhliya, jo aaina todkar roe.

Apne naseeb se koi gila nahi hume
na jaane kyun Khuda taqdeer likhkar roe.....


kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai

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