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Tere pyar ki mahak - 2nd January 2006, 04:20 PM

Tere pyar ki mahak ne mere man ko mahakaya hai
Isiliye tum par behtasha pyar aaya hai
Aadat ho geyi hai tumhare sparsh ki
Tumhare aankhon mai basi chahat wo kasish ki
Ek gahraee si dekhi hai aakhon mai teri
Mere hone k ehsas ki ,mere pyar ke pyas ki ,
Jab bhi Pyar jagana chaha hai tumne apne hoton se
Mera tan man mahka hai tumhari khushbu se
Badi minnton se milte hain tumhare pyar k pal
Sahej kar rakhti hoon main wo deewane pal
Har lamhe hote ho khyaalon mai mere
Har lamhe sochti hoon tere saath gujare pal
Kaash kuch aisa ho jaaye ,Jo hai socha sach ho jaaye
Tum aa jaao pass mere aur sach ho jaye ye sare pal
Mere pal, tumhare pal , ye hamare pal


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Re: Tere pyar ki mahak - 2nd January 2006, 04:40 PM

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Tere pyar ki mahak ne mere man ko mahakaya hai
Isiliye tum par behtasha pyar aaya hai
Aadat ho geyi hai tumhare sparsh ki
Tumhare aankhon mai basi chahat wo kasish ki
Ek gahraee si dekhi hai aakhon mai teri
Mere hone k ehsas ki ,mere pyar ke pyas ki ,
Jab bhi Pyar jagana chaha hai tumne apne hoton se
Mera tan man mahka hai tumhari khushbu se
Badi minnton se milte hain tumhare pyar k pal
Sahej kar rakhti hoon main wo deewane pal
Har lamhe hote ho khyaalon mai mere
Har lamhe sochti hoon tere saath gujare pal
Kaash kuch aisa ho jaaye ,Jo hai socha sach ho jaaye
Tum aa jaao pass mere aur sach ho jaye ye sare pal
Mere pal, tumhare pal , ye hamare pal


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2nd January 2006, 05:16 PM

dd bahut khubsurat aur meethi rachna pasand aayi


meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
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ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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3rd January 2006, 06:21 AM

Diggaz ji
khushi hui aapko yaha dekh kar .aap aaye iske liye sukriya. aate rahiyega .

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dear mehul ,
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3rd January 2006, 12:59 PM


Tere pyar ki mahak ne mere man ko mahakaya hai
Isiliye tum par behtasha pyar aaya hai

Aadat ho geyi hai tumhare sparsh ki
Tumhare aankhon mai basi chahat wo kasish ki

nice words...!


Ek gahraee si dekhi hai aakhon mai teri
Mere hone k ehsas ki ,mere pyar ke pyas ki ,

Jab bhi Pyar jagana chaha hai tumne apne hoton se
Mera tan man mahka hai tumhari khushbu se

Beautifully expressed feelings...!


Badi minnton se milte hain tumhare pyar k pal
Sahej kar rakhti hoon main wo deewane pal

Har lamhe hote ho khyaalon mai mere
Har lamhe sochti hoon tere saath gujare pal

Very nice...!


Kaash kuch aisa ho jaaye ,Jo hai socha sach ho jaaye
Tum aa jaao pass mere aur sach ho jaye ye sare pal
Mere pal, tumhare pal , ye hamare pal

Beautiful....!

Hi Shraddha,

a very sweet and simple expression once again... Ur words ahve some innocence about them...I love it...Aise hi likhti rahiye...Do TC...!


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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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4th January 2006, 07:37 AM

shraddha ji,

aap ke ehsaas parh ke achha laga, bahut achha likha hai. take care!
   
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behatreen - 4th January 2006, 07:52 AM

romantic nazmon main bahaut pyaree nazm hai ye. dil se nikle alfaz dil kee awaz bahut kuch kahtee huyee great aaj kis ubaha musan se khushboo se shuroo huyee aur mujhe bhee meree ek nazm yaad aa gayee dec main hee likhee maine
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bas mujhe lagane lage
tum mere nazdeek ho
mujh ko bahon main bhare
baat kuch aise karo

ankhon se choo lo jahan jahan
tare khil jayen wahan
jahan labon se choom lo
chand sa ugane lage
tum mere nazdeek ho
bas mujhe lagane lage

har sheh main tilism tum bharo
kam kuch aisa karo
neend base koyee aur ghar
aur meree rat jagane lage
tum mere nazdeek ho
bas mujhe lagane lage

mujh main kya hai likha huya
zahir bhee aur chipa huya
mere badan kee kitab tumhare
honth ye parhne lagen
rat phir ye barhe nahee
aur bat kuch barhne lage

bas mujhe lagane lage
tum mere nazdeek ho
mujh ko bahon main bhare
baat kuch aise karo
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5th January 2006, 05:48 PM

pulkit ji
pata nahi kyu aapka aana hamesha se hi achha lagta hai aur aapko meri koi bhi kalam pasand aaye to bhaut hi khushi hoti hai .keep coming

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5th January 2006, 05:49 PM

parul ,
thnx for appreciation .aapki sarahna sir aankho par .keep coming .take care of ur self

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anil ji ab main kya kahun meri choti si kavita k aage aapne apni itna badi aur achhi kavita likhkar behj di .u r really a gud shayer .
bhaut hi achha lagta hai aapko padkar .aise hi likhte rahiye .aur saath rahiye

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ek shayr - 5th January 2006, 09:02 PM

good effort...keep writing...shayari ka amal jaari rakhiye..
ek mera shayr hai..ek ghazal ka matla jis meiN kuch had tak aap ka unwaan ya topic ada hota hai:

mujhe lahad meiN bhi yeh soch kar qaraar nahIn
ke tere dil mein meri yaad ka ghubaar nahiN
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Re: ek shayr - 14th January 2006, 12:17 PM

daanish ji
main muafi chati hoon late reply dene k liye
achha laga ki aap aaye mujhe pada .aapko pasand aayi meri ye choti si kosish uske liye sukaragujar hoon
bus aise hi aate rahiye .apna khyaal rakhiyega

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good effort...keep writing...shayari ka amal jaari rakhiye..
ek mera shayr hai..ek ghazal ka matla jis meiN kuch had tak aap ka unwaan ya topic ada hota hai:

mujhe lahad meiN bhi yeh soch kar qaraar nahIn
ke tere dil mein meri yaad ka ghubaar nahiN
lahad=grave


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