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Ghazal: hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke.....! -
19th November 2007, 02:37 PM
Mere pyaare dostoN: aadaab aur namaskaaR.. " aaj kaafi dinoN baad liKhane kaa man hu'aa.. aur aaj dil ne bhee saath diYaa.. bazm meiN fir sey haaZir huuN maiN apnii aik naYii taazaah Ghazal ko lekar.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeH chhoTii sii koShiSh pasaNd aaYeNgii.. aapki qeemtee raa'eY aur sujHaav kaa iNtezaar raheNgaa.. mulaa'iizaa farmaaYeN.." ****************************************** beHr: 2222/2222/2222 ****************************************** hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke faraaham : i'kaTThaa naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke ****************************************** |
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19th November 2007, 02:45 PM
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kush raho chottu  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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fantastic dhaval |
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fantastic dhaval -
19th November 2007, 02:55 PM
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bahut j mast,adbhoot ane sundar ghazal chhe tari keep writing it is wonderful to read u regards manu |
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19th November 2007, 03:58 PM
...waise to tumne bahut baar dard pe likha hain...par is ghazal mein kuch jyada hi dard nazar aa raha hain....har ashaar apne aap mein ek chubhan liye huve hain.........aur dard pe wah wah kaise kare..ghazal ki nazar se bahut khubsurti se likha hain......Is ghazal ko padhke ek baat zehan mein aayi...par isse yaha nahin likhti tumse kisi aur din baat kar lungi.........Ek sher kehna chahungi is ghazal ko leke..
Bewafa na hum the na woh. YunhiN raaste juda ho gaye Apna khyal rakhna... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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19th November 2007, 04:10 PM
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hello ji Dhaval ji kaise hai aap? umeed hai acche se honge or rehna bhi chahiye....hai na sacch apki yeh dard bhari ghazal seedhey mere dimaag mein uttar gayi hai...or mere bite lamhe mujhe yaad kara gayi.... beete lamhe to bhuln ahi behtarr hai kyunki wo acche nahi thae..lekin apki is ghazal mein pyar ki cchhott khakar phir usi pyar ko bhulaane ka ik hausla sa nazar aaya hai...jo ki sahi bhi hai.. [B]naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke[/B yeh do sher mujhe bahut........ bahut....... bahut..... bahut........ bahut........ pasand aaye hai bas aap yu hin likhte rahiye...baki hausla to hum sab badhaate hi rahenge  tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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19th November 2007, 04:25 PM
Aadaab Dhaval bhai.........................
Janaab ke mijaaz ? Waah bhai kya umda gazal pesh ki hai aapne mehfil ko chaar chaand laga diye aapke is kalaam ne har ek sher dilazeez aur bahut umda laga kai baar pada aur dil ko chugai yeh gazal dili daad kubool ho............khush rahiye Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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19th November 2007, 04:40 PM
asslam malekum dhaval miyaa.n
aaj kya baat hai dil ke jani bada dard ikTTha kare fir rahe ho........... maine kitni baar kaha hai tumhe......... Log MuTthiyo.n main namak liye firte haiN Yu.N apne Zakhm Har kisi ko dikhaya na karo........ bahut sundar dard se bharii or behad apni si dil ke kareeb lagne wali gazal likhi hai aaj aapne....... har ek sher kafi apna sa lagta hai... poori gazal main kahin mujhe kuch kami si nazar nahi aayii per is word per jara sa dhyan chala gaya.......... naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke is word ki jagah agar aap koi doosra word use karte to meri raai main shayad accha lagata. hunar mand shayar ho yaar doond ke dekho urdu main koi word mil hi jayega....... haan ek ishara kar sakta hoon "DAFAN" ab apni jaroorat ka aap doond lo..............  shuru se hi aapki shayri ka kayal raha hoon..... to aaj to fir aapne ek kamal ki umda gazzl likhi hai....... dil se nikli huyii daad kabool farmaiyega.......... shukriyaa........ aapke dil ke behad kareeb ka dost Dilip (begana)  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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19th November 2007, 06:48 PM
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dhaval, ateet bhoola nahi jaata, zindagi me kabhi kabhi aise mod aate hain, jahan naa chaahate hue bhi chalna par jaata hai, or vaapsi ka raasta nahi hota....bahot kuch kahana hai, kabhi or din aapki post pe fir reply karungi......baaki kuch jo likh nahi sakti vo baad me kahungi...... aapki shayri bahot rula rahi hai dil ko aaj....guzre pal nazro se hat nahi rahe... grazie Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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19th November 2007, 07:22 PM
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hey DHAVAL, kya khub likha hai aap ne...ek ek sher, jaise dil-o-dimag par cha gaya ho....mere dost, chahe jitni bhi koshish kar lo muhobbat ko kabhi bhula na paoge....bahut pasand aayi aap ki ye ghazal....uhi likhte rahiye,aur hum uhi padhte rahenge...god bless u....take care.... AAP KI DOST,  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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20th November 2007, 02:14 PM
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Pranaam Sister: aapko apnii koShiSh pe deKh ke mujHe bahot hi KhuShii hoti hay.. Sister jaise kii maine aapko kahaa hay kii yeH sirf aik Ghazal hay.. ees meiN mere ehsaas nahiiN hay.. ab ees Ghazal meiN mere Khud ke ehsaas hote to Ghazal comedy ban jaati...  kyaa kaurN Shaitaan dimaaGh jo huuN.. .. Sister aapko pataa hay kii maiN kis taraH aur kitani had tak liKh skataa huuN.. kyuuNki maine aapkaa haath thaam ke hi to ees safar meiN pehalaa kadam baRhaayaa tha.. to bhalaa maiN aap sey kuch chhupaa saktaa huuN kyaa?? maiN aisaa soch bhee nahiiN saktaa.. fir bhee Gar mere aise liKhane sey aapke dil ko TheNs pahuNchi ho to maiN m'waafi maaNgtaa huuN.. aur koShiSh karuNgaa kii aage sey aapko maiN maayus na karuN.. aap hay to maiN bhee huuN yahaaN.. bas apnaa aaShirwaad YuuNhi banaaye raKHiyeNgaa mujH pe.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN aapkaa chhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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20th November 2007, 10:49 PM
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Agar jo likha woh mehaz shayri hai to Dili daad kuubul kare agar Dil ka payaam hai to daad ka lihaaz na kare.... Alfaaz nahi kuch kehne ke liye yahan Alfaaz chun kar fir maujood hota hun... Duaon ke saath Ijazat.... Abrar....  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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20th November 2007, 11:02 PM
naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke ****par dhavl ji yaisa nahi hota hai...muhabat ko kahtam karna aasan anhi hai. ye woh shay hai jo hamesha hamare andar hai...sher bahut khub likha hai*** tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke jindagi ko jahannum karna asan nahi hota hai par jab sab khushiya chali jaye to ye jahunnum hi hai na. bahut khub gazal laye ho meri dili daad sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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21st November 2007, 09:19 AM
achchhaa likha hai dost!!! you are improving day by day!!
do aik jagah meter me ghalatii hai aur makte kaa dusra misra qafiye me baiThta nahii! inhe zaraa door karne ki koshish karo, ghazal aur sundar ho jayegi! likhte raho! Dheer |
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bahut khoob -
21st November 2007, 10:03 AM
dhaval tumhre kadam bahut achee tarah aage badh rahe hain bahut achee tahreer hai
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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23rd November 2007, 01:35 PM
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dil-azeez manu BHaa'ii: aadaab-o-taSleemaat.. Ghazal kii pazeerA'ii ke liYe maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN.. aapne ees Ghazal kii baareekiYoN ko samjHaa aor dil sey paRhaa bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii.. aur har Sher par aapne jo apne Khayaalaat peSh kiYe usske liYe maiN aapka SHuKra-Guzaar huuN.. aapne yahaaN aakar ees Ghazal ki raunaq afzaa'ii ki hay.. koShiSh karuNgaa kii aage aur bhee behtar liKhuN taa.K aapka saath YuuNhi miltaa raheN.. apnaa Khayaal rakheN.. KhuSh raheN.. duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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23rd November 2007, 07:10 PM
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dhaval aesi poetry kab se likhne lage ho tum ye mayoosi tum per suit nahi kerti isliye wesi hi likha karo ankhain band ker ke muskurate howe hahahaha .....hmm ab aati hoon poetry ki taraf to shayri ke lihaaz se bohat hi khubsurat koshish rahi tumhari aur dhaval ye faraham word jo hai na ye yahan theek nahi rahega ise change kerlo to acha hai.... faraaham ka matlab hota hai muhaiyaa kerna jahan tak mujhe maloom hai ikatha nahi banta is ka matlab totum koi aur acha sa word choose karo to ye sher theek lage ga ok na dear agar kuch bura laga ho to maaf kerna apna bohat khayal rakhna aur ayenda se woh muskurati tehreerain honi chahiye khush raho chottu humesha..apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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24th November 2007, 05:47 AM
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sryyyyyyyyyyy bhai bahut dino baad aayi hoon, aapki ghazal par nazaar padhi toh padhe bina raha hi nahi gaya. bahut achi likhi hai, har baar app itni dil ko choo gaye aisi ghazal likhte ho, ki daad ke liye shabd kan padh jate hain. God bless u yunhi likhte rahnaaaaaaaaa. aapki nira di |
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24th November 2007, 10:42 AM
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Maanii didi : aadaab.. jee haaN kabhee kabaar liKh letaa huuN didi aisii koShiSheN.. didi maiN urdu bhaasaa ka itanaa jaankaar to nahiiN.. chuuNki maiN abhee urdu lafzoN ko seeKh rahaa huuN.. aur maiN jiss meiN sey seeKh rahaa huuN uss meiN faraaham lafz jo asal me Faarasi bhaasaa kaa lafz hai.. aur ba'taur viSheShan [adjective] ees kaa istemaal kiYaa jaataa hay aur uss meiN faraaham lafz ka hiNdi meiN do anuvaad diYe the aik to i'kaTTHaa aor doosaraa saNgrahit.. didi aapne kahaa booraa mat lagaanaa..aapko bhee aur sab ko pataa hay kii maiN yahaaN tak apnii GhaltiYoN sey hii seeKh seeKh ke hi pahuNchaa huuN to aaj bhalaa kyuuN booraa lagaauNgaa.. aur aapki baat kaa kabhee yeH Shaitaan boraa lagaayeNgaa kyaa.. fir bhee Ghalti merii hay.. maiN koShiSh karuNgaa kii aage sey aise Ghalat lafz koShiSh meiN na aaYeN.. ees Ghazal ko pasaNd karne ke liye maiN aapka be-had mamnuun huuN..apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka chhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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29th November 2007, 11:55 AM
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kaise hain aap? dhaval ji, kya kahe hum? hamare paas aapki tarif k liye Alfaz nahi hain, dhaval ji mafi chahte hain,k aapki itni umda,or dil ko chhu jane wali ghazal ko humne itne dino k baad padha. sach bohot hi khoob likha hai aapne, khush rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye, ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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30th November 2007, 12:39 AM
hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke naam mi'TaaYeNge teraa dil kii har dhaRkan par sey tujH sey juRi hu'i yaadoN ko dil sey kam kar ke Kyaa baat hai... khoob likha hai dost... bhoolaa duuN tujH ko achchhaa'ii ee'sii meN hay karuN kyaa guzre laMhoN ko dil meiN faraaham kar ke naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke Nice words... tumne hii banaayi thi ZiNdagi jannat si "Dhaval" kii KhuSh ho aaj u.sii ziNdagi ko jahannam kar ke Hmmmmm... Dear Dhaval, Humesha ki tarah baht khoob likha hai... ek udaasi dikhi tmhaari ghazal me... mere bhai aajkal zyada emotional hone se kucch nahi milta... Ladkiyan baht chant hoti hain Thou most here won't agree magar yehi sach hai...Likhte raho khush raho Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th November 2007, 07:17 AM
Dhaval,
pehle paRhi thee aapki yeh rachna, lekin reply nahin kar saki... bahut achcha likha hai aapne, regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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30th November 2007, 11:35 AM
is kadar koi yaad aa rahein hai,
jaise koi apni jaan liye jaa raha hai, kaise samjavu is pagal dil ko k vo kisi aur ki amanat hai ye jaan kar bhi kambakt us ise mohabbat kiye jaa raha hai. |
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1st December 2007, 02:27 AM
Well expressed Mr Dhaval... very touchy.. Daad hazir hai ....kabul kijiyega..  “Zamana Gour Se Daikhey, Jisey Is Ne Khuda Samjha Hai Woh Is K Hath Ka Pather Tarasha Ho Bhi Sakta Hai Main Apney Jism O Jaan Ko Sath Rehtey Daikh Ker Samjha Nibhana Ho Jisey Mushkil Woh Rishta Ho Bhi Sakta Hai Nikal Ker Bund Kamrey Se Zara Baazar Main Aao Ager Tum Daikhna Chaho, Tamasha Ho Bhi Sakta Hai”
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1st December 2007, 10:01 PM
Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho
Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge Ye ehsas janna ho to dil haar kar dekho |
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3rd December 2007, 11:32 PM
Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,
sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai, Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar, To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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6th December 2007, 10:26 PM
jsk dhaval bhaii,
humesha ki tarah, yeh ghazal b bahut pasand ayyi. lekin janab, itna dard aap laye kahan se? aur har sher mein dard aur mayusshi jalakati hai. hum to yehi dhua karenge k app khush rahein. dil se nikli daad ko kabul kijiye. urs manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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bhut khub |
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shayri is my life
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bhut khub -
7th December 2007, 06:52 PM
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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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10th December 2007, 09:19 PM
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Mausam didi : Jai mata di.. didi jaisaa kii maine aapko pehle bhee kahaa kii yeh sirf aik Ghazal hi hay mere liYe.. maine to bas dard bhare ehsaaSoN ko peSh karne kii ik chhoTi sii koShiSh ki hay ees Ghazal ke Zar'iiYe.. aur haaN aage sey maiN aapki baatoN kaa Khayaal raKHuNgaa jo aapne kahi thi kii aage jab bhee dard par maiN liKhuN to Ghazal ke ooper liKh duN kii yeH sirf aik Ghazal hay na ki mere ehsaas.. aur rahi baat dard kii to ees Shaitaan sey to dard bhee door bhaagtaa haii.. aapne Ghazal ko pasaNd kiYaa. be-Had KhuShii hu'ii.. bas YuuNhi saath dete rahiYe..!KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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17th December 2007, 03:22 PM
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Shweta jee : namaskaaR.. aap sab dostoN ki duaaoN sey maiN bilkul Theek huuN.. aapne ees Ghazal ko samjHaa bahot hi achchhaa lagaa jaan.K.. bas YuuNhi paRhte rahiYeNgaa aage bhee.. duaa hay Khudaa aapko haMeShaa KhuSh raKheN aur dard sey door hi raKheN.. apnaa achchhe sey Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheNduaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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25th December 2007, 02:30 PM
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mijaaz to BHaa'ii Theek Thaak hai.. janaab aap merii Ghazal par aake Ghazal kii raunaq afzA'ii karte haiN.. mujhe baRii hi KhuShii hotii hai ees baat kii k merii Ghazal paRhne waaloN ke dil pe dastak detii hay.. aapkii daad sar'aaNkhoN par.. ummid kartaa huuN aapkaa saath YuuNhi miltaa raheNgaa aage bhee..! ShuKriyaaH BHaaijaan ! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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28th December 2007, 11:04 AM
bhaiya namaskaar
aapko bahut padha hai but sabse jya daa dar laga muje isme....aapne bahu aahchi tarah se pesh kiye he aapne ehsaso ko....aise hi likhete rahna....aage bhi aapki post ka intzar rahe ga...dilse nilki daad kubul kijiye aapki choti behan sandhya tc |
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8th January 2008, 10:15 PM
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Dilip Bhaa'ii: namaskaaR..! sach me be-Had KhuShii hu'ii aapko merii chhotii sii koShiSh pe deKh ke.. pooraane sey din yaad aa gaYe.. aapsey bas yahi kahuNgaa jo maiN aapko roz kehtaa huuN.. ki bazm ke liye bhee thoRaa waQt nikaal deejiYe.. aur jaise kii maine kahaa thaa aapki naYii aur taazaah Ghazal ka mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa.. Ghazal ki pazeerA'ii ke liye maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN.. yuuNhi saath dete raheN.. ShuKriyaaH..! apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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Salam -
9th January 2008, 08:59 AM
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Dhaval ji ko shaan ka salam, Aaj bahut din baat mujhe aane ka waqt mila or aapke khubsurat andaaz ne mujhe padhne ko majboor kiya.. Aap ki post per har baar daad dene ko dil karta hai. bas aap yu hi likhte rahe. Hamesha haste or muskurate rahe..... Aapka Dost SHAAN Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. ........Shaan...... |
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21st January 2008, 11:33 AM
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ShuKriyaaH pooja.. tumHaaraa dost ~ Dhaval |
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25th January 2008, 11:27 AM
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namaskaaR..! Ghazal ki pasaNdagee ke liYe maiN aapka be-had mamnuun huuN.. ummid kartaa huuN aap kaa saath YuuNhi miltaa raheNgaa..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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3rd February 2008, 11:11 AM
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kaise haiN aap?? dost.. aapkii daad dil sey qabUl haii.. maiN aapka ShuKraGuzaar huuN kii aapne merii ees Ghazal ko pasaNd kiYaa.. aur dil sey paRhaa.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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3rd February 2008, 07:27 PM
very nice awasome.
Kabhi mukurake roye, kabhi mukura ke roye, Teri yaad jab bhi aye, tujhe bhula bhula ke roye. Ek teri he naam tha jise hazar bar likha, Jise se khush hue the likh kar, mita-mita kar roye. Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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27th February 2008, 01:45 PM
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namaskaaR mujHe baRii hi KhuShii hu'ii merii koShiSh pe aapki raa'ey ko paRh ke.. bas YuuNhi saath dete rahiYeNgaa aage bhee.. maiN aapka tah-e-dil se ShuKraGuzaar huuN..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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6th March 2008, 06:10 PM
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namskaaR..! pehle to aapko Shaadii ke liye bahot bahot baDhaa'iiYaaN..! jee maiN apnii taraf sey poorii koShiSh karuNgaa kii aage sey apnii GhaltiYoN ko kam karuN aur ees safar meiN aage baRhuN.. maiN aapka ShuKraGuzaar huuN..! bas YuuNhi saath dete rahiYe..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat..! aapka ~ Dhaval |
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6th March 2008, 06:25 PM
Kuch Masoom Say Jazbey Hain,
Kuch Un-dekhay Sapney Hain, Mager Woh Naheen Janta Shayad...!!! Meri bhi Zindagi To .............Hai..!!!!!! Tufan mein kashti ko kinare bhi milte hain jahaan mein logon ko sahare bhi milte hain duniya mein sabse pyari hai zindagi kuch log zindagi se pyare bhi milte hain. Har kadam pe imtihaan leti hai Zindagi Her waqt naye sadme deti hai Zindagi Hum Zindagi se shikwa kaise kare? Aap Jaise Pyaare Dost Bi tho deti hai Zindagi. Zindagi mein hamesha naye log milenge Kahi Zyaada tho kahi kam milenge Aitbaar zara sochkar karna Mumkin nahi her jagah tumhe DANY jaisey milengay. |
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