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Love Dukh - 17th August 2008, 03:53 AM

na dukh daseya geya
na lukaya hi geya
akhaan vich si hanjoo
saathon phir vi muskraya geya
rog hi si kujh aisa
ke jarron na metaya geya
hawa ch ram geya
oh mehak jehi ban ke
na usnu phariya geya
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oh sagar si te main ek lehar
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17th August 2008, 08:42 AM

preet ji bahut hi sohna likhiya hai,
eh lines ta kamaaal diya han

oh mehak jehi ban ke
na usnu phariya geya

na hi door jaya geya
oh sagar si te main ek lehar
bass usse which hi samaya gaya


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17th August 2008, 09:07 AM

oh sagar si te main ek lehar
bass usse which hi samaya gaya

bahut hi khoob Preet ji
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18th August 2008, 01:15 PM

Tpic vadhiyaa si. Par oh asar nahi ban sakiyaa. keep writing anyways


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19th August 2008, 04:31 AM

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preet ji bahut hi sohna likhiya hai,
eh lines ta kamaaal diya han

oh mehak jehi ban ke
na usnu phariya geya
na hi door jaya geya
oh sagar si te main ek lehar
bass usse which hi samaya gaya
thankyou so much Heer ji es poem nu parnh lai atte enna sohna reply den lai.
   
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19th August 2008, 04:34 AM

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bahut hi khoob Preet ji

Thankyou very much Babbu ji ke tusi apne kimti time vichon time kadh ke es poem to pareha.
   
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19th August 2008, 04:38 AM

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Tpic vadhiyaa si. Par oh asar nahi ban sakiyaa. keep writing anyways

Tilak ji thankyou very much for replying to this post. i will try next time...ke dohra behtar likh saka. umeed hai ke tusi apne keemti sujhav es tara hi dinde rahoge.
   
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