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Love Kaash unhe bhi hota humse pyaar - 22nd December 2008, 11:31 AM

Hume bhi huwa tha kisi se pyar
Aayi thi humari bhi zindagi mei bahaar

Lutate the unpe hum chahaten hazaar
Zhum uthti thi ruh jab hota tha deedar
Zhuki zhuki nazron se hum karte the ikraar
Ishq ki pahelu mei aayi thi husun pe nikhaar
Par ab na paheli si zindagi hai na zindagi ki bahaar
Lutau kis par ab bhi chahaten hai beshumaar
Tadapti hai ruh par na hoti hai deedar
Naren hai bechaen karne ko ikraar
Vo ishq bhi kho gaya kho gayi husun ki nikhaar
Zindagi mei rah gayi hai ab sirf intezaar
Bikhri huwi zindagi ko vo dete sawaar
Kaash aakar kahete unhe bhi hai humse pyaar


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22nd December 2008, 02:37 PM

Praneeta jee:

bohat hi saade lafz par aap apni dili ki baat bayaa.n kar jaati hai aur woh bhi behad dilkash andaaz me.n, is tarah ki paDhne waale ke dil par asar karta hai.............aap ki poetry par jyada kuchh to kah nahii sakta..........par ek sher yaad aa raha hai aap ki poetry ko paDhkar.......

Kyo.n hijr ke shikave karataa hai kyo.n dard ke rone rotaa hai
Ab ishq kiyaa hai to sabr bhii kar is me.n to yahii kuchh hotaa hai

likhti rahe.n.....


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22nd December 2008, 03:19 PM

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Praneeta jee:

bohat hi saade lafz par aap apni dili ki baat bayaa.n kar jaati hai aur woh bhi behad dilkash andaaz me.n, is tarah ki paDhne waale ke dil par asar karta hai.............aap ki poetry par jyada kuchh to kah nahii sakta..........par ek sher yaad aa raha hai aap ki poetry ko paDhkar.......

Kyo.n hijr ke shikave karataa hai kyo.n dard ke rone rotaa hai
Ab ishq kiyaa hai to sabr bhii kar is me.n to yahii kuchh hotaa hai

likhti rahe.n.....


Mayank

Shukriya...ek baar fir aap ke reply ne mujhe encouragement di hai. Asha hai aapko mera har likha pasand aye...shukriya ik baar fir


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22nd December 2008, 11:13 PM

Hume bhi huwa tha kisi se pyar
Aayi thi humari bhi zindagi mei bahaar

Lutate the unpe hum chahaten hazaar
Zhum uthti thi ruh jab hota tha deedar

Zhuki zhuki nazron se hum karte the ikraar
Ishq ki pahelu mei aayi thi husun pe nikhaar

Par ab na paheli si zindagi hai na zindagi ki bahaar
Lutau kis par ab bhi chahaten hai beshumaar

Tadapti hai ruh par na hoti hai deedar
Naren hai bechaen karne ko ikraar

Vo ishq bhi kho gaya kho gayi husun ki nikhaar
Zindagi mei rah gayi hai ab sirf intezaar

Bikhri huwi zindagi ko vo dete sawaar
Kaash aakar kahete unhe bhi hai humse pyaar



ahsaas bahut acche lage....likhti rahiye.....behatr koshish hai.....accha laga aapko padna.

god bless u


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Love 23rd January 2009, 08:12 AM

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Hume bhi huwa tha kisi se pyar
Aayi thi humari bhi zindagi mei bahaar

Lutate the unpe hum chahaten hazaar
Zhum uthti thi ruh jab hota tha deedar

Zhuki zhuki nazron se hum karte the ikraar
Ishq ki pahelu mei aayi thi husun pe nikhaar

Par ab na paheli si zindagi hai na zindagi ki bahaar
Lutau kis par ab bhi chahaten hai beshumaar

Tadapti hai ruh par na hoti hai deedar
Naren hai bechaen karne ko ikraar

Vo ishq bhi kho gaya kho gayi husun ki nikhaar
Zindagi mei rah gayi hai ab sirf intezaar

Bikhri huwi zindagi ko vo dete sawaar
Kaash aakar kahete unhe bhi hai humse pyaar



ahsaas bahut acche lage....likhti rahiye.....behatr koshish hai.....accha laga aapko padna.

god bless u

Thank you Sunita ji aap ke reply ke liye...koshish jari hai ki aur bhi bahetar likhu

Regards
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Well written Praneeta. Keep it up


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Well written Praneeta. Keep it up

Thanks mate......glad u like it

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