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zakhm dete haiN dil ke tumhe ye duaa (Ghazal) -
15th May 2015, 04:15 AM
aadaab hazreen,
koi 13 saal pehle yeh Ghazal post ki thi, do ek tabdiiliiyoN ke saath phir se post kar raha hooN, kisi kaam ki ho na ho kambakht dil halka zuroor ho riya hai , mulaiiza kijiye zakhm dete haiN dil ke tumhe ye duaa tum salaamat raho apna, "haafiz khudaa" kab mujhe thii tere jism kii aarzoo ? paak thii ye nigeh, saaf thaa dil mi'raa dard-e-dil meiN hai shiddat baDii, shaikh ji raastaa maikadey ka, bataaiye zaraa ab ye haalat hamari hai shaam-o-sahar aaNkh bheegi huii, chehraa utraa huaa khat jalaa daale tasveereiN bhi phaaD diiN dil se yaadeN na ho paayiiN phir bhii judaa ab naa "maikasH" mulaaqaat hogi kabhii un kaa kuchh, apna kuchh ho gayaa raastaa Ya Ilaahi................... is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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15th May 2015, 09:26 AM
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kamaal ka kalaam likhaa hai aapne bas dil ko jaise qaraar aa ggaya hai...... aapko reps dene ki zahmat ki hai bhai... janata hoon ke sooraj ko diyaa dikhaana huaa magar mujh haqeer ki taraf se tohfaa smajh kar qubool kijiyegaa........ Allah aapko apni hifz o amaan me rakkhe...... shaad o aabaad rahen.... Shaad....... |
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15th May 2015, 09:32 AM
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Maikash ji...aik aik lafz dil ke kareeb rha, aapke ehsaasoN ko bakhoobi samaj rhi hu...khat jalane se ya tasveer ke tukde kar dene se kisi ko bulaya ja sakta to aaj ki tareekh meiN koi bhi kisi ke liye yu tadap na rha hota...! bahut dard hai aapki shayri meiN...ab dard par kya daad du. apna khayal rakhiye rabb raakha  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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15th May 2015, 10:47 AM
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I'm speechless. Simply superb. Har ek sheyr ek DaastaaN liye huye aaya hai. Dil se dheroN daad aur duaayeiN qubool farmaayeiN. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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15th May 2015, 11:17 AM
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Ye nayab ghazal hamse ek baar fir share ki bahut shukriya aapka...merI khush naseebi ki isi bahane mujhe padhne ko mili ye bemisaal peshkash..... dher sari duayein aur daad kubool kijiyega meri taraf se... khush rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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15th May 2015, 12:43 PM
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beshak aik nageena rakha hy aap ny meHfil meiN... aap ki yeh ghazal daad o tehseen se kahiN bhaD kar hy ... is ki qadar sirf woh johri hiii pehchaan sakta hy ... jissy heeray ka mool pata hoo... aur kia kahooN! salamat rahen.. khush rahen.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th May 2015, 01:22 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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15th May 2015, 02:10 PM
Maikash bhaiya
SSA ...pranaam Kyaa kahuuN bas aik ajeeb saa sukooN miltaa hai jab aapki Ghazal ko paDhtaa huuN to... Matle ne dil jeet liyaa...dil se daad aur duaaen Jsk Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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16th May 2015, 12:54 AM
mujhe aap ki ghazal ki rwangi.bahut pasand aayee..Ek ek ashar mukammal
tha apne aap.meiN. Hamdam khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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16th May 2015, 10:08 AM
ज़ख्म देते हो दिल के ...........
'हाफिज खुदा' । Maikash sahab sabse pahle to is nacheej ka adaab..kabool farmaayega. Ek muddat baad yahaa aana hua...our aate hi aapke is behtareen kalaam ke darshan ho gaye...Ghazal ki shuruaat hi bataayi hai ki poori ghazal phir kya hogi . Waah janaab samaa baand diya....har sher apne me ahsaas baandhe hue ..waah...meri jaanib se iss khoobsoorat peshkash par dhairon daad... |
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17th May 2015, 07:09 AM
bahut achhe ashaar hain dobara se bantane ke liye shjukriyaa
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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