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' Bahut GhazaleiN Likhta Hai ' Amanush ' - 6th March 2013, 12:55 PM

DeewaroN ke bheetar aatish hai aakhir kya karuN
Baahar pattharoN ki baarish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kadam kadam par thokareiN lamhe lamhe pe dard
Raah-e-zindagi se na khwaish hai aakhir kya karuN

Zamaane bhar ka bhoj mujh par aur chalna hai akela
NahiN kissi ki bhi nawaazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Baat sayaasat ki ho ki mohabbat ki chupchaap houN
DostoN ki rakeeboN se saazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Man ki baat man maiN liye man hi man ghuT raha meiN
Iss mulk main lagi houi bandish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kehna hai logon ka bahut ghazaleiN likhta hai ‘Amanush’
GhazaloN ki hi or meri kashish hai aakhir kya karuN





Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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6th March 2013, 01:30 PM

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DeewaroN ke bheetar aatish hai aakhir kya karuN
Baahar pattharoN ki baarish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kadam kadam par thokareiN lamhe lamhe pe dard
Raah-e-zindagi se na khwaish hai aakhir kya karuN

Zamaane bhar ka bhoj mujh par aur chalna hai akela
NahiN kissi ki bhi nawaazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Baat sayaasat ki ho ki mohabbat ki chupchaap houN
DostoN ki rakeeboN se saazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Man ki baat man maiN liye man hi man ghuT raha meiN
Iss mulk main lagi houi bandish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kehna hai logon ka bahut ghazaleiN likhta hai ‘Amanush’
GhazaloN ki hi or meri kashish hai aakhir kya karuN




MashaAllah...behad umda ghazal hai danny ji....sabhi ashaar lajawaab hain....

Bohat acchha lagaa aapko padhker...yuhi likhte rahiye...




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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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6th March 2013, 01:44 PM

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DeewaroN ke bheetar aatish hai aakhir kya karuN
Baahar pattharoN ki baarish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kadam kadam par thokareiN lamhe lamhe pe dard
Raah-e-zindagi se na khwaish hai aakhir kya karuN

Zamaane bhar ka bhoj mujh par aur chalna hai akela
NahiN kissi ki bhi nawaazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Baat sayaasat ki ho ki mohabbat ki chupchaap houN
DostoN ki rakeeboN se saazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Man ki baat man maiN liye man hi man ghuT raha meiN
Iss mulk main lagi houi bandish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kehna hai logon ka bahut ghazaleiN likhta hai ‘Amanush’
GhazaloN ki hi or meri kashish hai aakhir kya karuN




bahot khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne........... Matlaa hame khaas pasand aaya....

aur kuch ek sher kaafi sanjeedah se maloomhue... allah aapko sukoon de... khush raheN.. apna khayal rakkheN...

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Danny Bhaiyaa...behad khoobsurat ahsaas...poori gazal tareef ke kabil hai...yeh aik sher bahut apna sa lga.

Zamaane bhar ka bhoj mujh par aur chalna hai akela
NahiN kissi ki bhi nawaazish hai aakhir kya karuN


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6th March 2013, 05:31 PM

danny jee bahut khoobsurat ghazal lagi aapki....sabhi aashaar dil ko chu gaye gaye.



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7th March 2013, 01:08 AM

Danny bhai

aapki yeh kaavish bohat pasaNd aayi, khaaksaar ki daad "Tikaa" lijiye

rab raakha
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DeewaroN ke bheetar aatish hai aakhir kya karuN
Baahar pattharoN ki baarish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kadam kadam par thokareiN lamhe lamhe pe dard
Raah-e-zindagi se na khwaish hai aakhir kya karuN

Zamaane bhar ka bhoj mujh par aur chalna hai akela
NahiN kissi ki bhi nawaazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Baat sayaasat ki ho ki mohabbat ki chupchaap houN
DostoN ki rakeeboN se saazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Man ki baat man maiN liye man hi man ghuT raha meiN
Iss mulk main lagi houi bandish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kehna hai logon ka bahut ghazaleiN likhta hai ‘Amanush’
GhazaloN ki hi or meri kashish hai aakhir kya karuN



Aadaab Danny Bhaee,

Ayk taweel arsay ba'd aapki koee naee kaavish parhnay ko milee, parhkar, samajh kar dil ki haalat dil he jaanta haye, ayk ajeeb si gahrayee wa sanjeedgee mayn dubotee ayk alag hi qism kay gham o dard say tar mahsoos huyee yay aapki tahreer hamayn! Aapkay fan ko tahay dil say Salaam janab aur aapkay kalaam ko bayaan karnay kay liyay alfaaz kam hayn!
Khaaksaar ki jaanib say bayshmaar daad paysh e qidmat haye, qaboul farmayayn!


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8th March 2013, 10:55 AM

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DeewaroN ke bheetar aatish hai aakhir kya karuN
Baahar pattharoN ki baarish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kadam kadam par thokareiN lamhe lamhe pe dard
Raah-e-zindagi se na khwaish hai aakhir kya karuN

Zamaane bhar ka bhoj mujh par aur chalna hai akela
NahiN kissi ki bhi nawaazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Baat sayaasat ki ho ki mohabbat ki chupchaap houN
DostoN ki rakeeboN se saazish hai aakhir kya karuN

Man ki baat man maiN liye man hi man ghuT raha meiN
Iss mulk main lagi houi bandish hai aakhir kya karuN

Kehna hai logon ka bahut ghazaleiN likhta hai ‘Amanush’
GhazaloN ki hi or meri kashish hai aakhir kya karuN



Kyaa Kahne ... Danny Bhai !! WaaH !!

BehtareeN FikR O Khayaal

Asar Angez Ashaar

Purwaqaar Ghazal Huii Janaab ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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