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17th July 2015, 06:24 AM
koi 13 saal puraani Ghazal ke chaNd ash'aar haiN, thoDi marammat ke saath pesh-e-khidmat haiN
furqat ke Gham ne maut kii Khuuraak kar diyaa aashiq ko tere, duuriyoN ne Khaak kar diyaa dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa jalte hue diye meN Khushii kaa nishaan thaa bujhte hue chiraaGh ne namnaak kar diyaa dhariyo na kaan baat pe "maikash" ki shaikh jee is baav'ley ko dard ne be-baak kar diyaa is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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17th July 2015, 07:35 AM
Namashkar Maikash bhai,
Behad khoobsurat sher hain bhai, mazaa aa gaya padhkar. Yeh 2 sher mujhe bahut hi zyada pasand aaye: dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa dhariyo na kaan baat pe "maikash" ki shaikh jee is baav'ley ko dard ne be-baak kar diyaa Meri dil se dheron daad, yunhi mehfil ki raunak badhaate rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th July 2015, 09:54 AM
WaaH ! Bahut UmdaaH Janaab
Kyaa Kahne ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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17th July 2015, 10:11 AM
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waahh saahab waahhhhhh................ ye ghazal hai yaa paini kkoii talwaar..... subhaan Allah is sher ne to qurbaan kar diyaa... dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa bahut khoob bahut aala..... tahe dil se daad ke phool ka nazrana pesh hai maikash bhai... kubool karen.. shaad.... |
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17th July 2015, 10:34 AM
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Kyaa ashaar huye hain Maikash saahb ! Lajawaab. Ilfaaz nahi hain mere paas. Dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal Tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa Waah. Bemisaal.. Likhte rahiye jenab. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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17th July 2015, 11:16 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th July 2015, 01:18 PM
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behad khoobsoorat ashar rahe janaab aapke likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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17th July 2015, 03:52 PM
umda ashaar maikash ji.....
dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa... bahut hee khooob.... daad kubool karein..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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17th July 2015, 05:05 PM
Maikash ji.........khoobsurat gazal par daad hazir hai.
yeh sher bahutttttttt khaas lga...sachaiii ke bahutttt kareeb hai sher...kyuki tajurbe se hi ensaan samjadaar banta hai  dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa rabb raakha .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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17th July 2015, 09:14 PM
Bhaiya... SSA... pranaam
Ghazal ke ashaar dilkash... aapka andaaz bhii dilkash.. dheron daad Jsk Aapka Dhaval |
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Wah Wah -
18th July 2015, 10:29 PM
dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal
tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa dhariyo na kaan baat pe "maikash" ki shaikh jee is baav'ley ko dard ne be-baak kar diyaa waah maikash sahab kya kehne. kya khoob ashaar aur kya khuub andaaz-e-bayaaN. khaksaar Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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19th July 2015, 07:48 AM
dikhte haiN pech-o-Kham tirii baatoN meN aaj kal
tujh ko bhii tajrabaat ne chaalaak kar diyaa Ye ek sher jaise dil mein chubh gaya. Aur kaafi arse tak yaad rahega. Poori ghazal hi bohut khoobsurat. Maikash bhaiya aap itna acha likhte ho magar Eid ke chaand ki tarah itne kam kyun nazar aate ho? Thoda waqt hum sab mureedon ke liye bhi nikaalein aur thoda zyada likhen taaki hum apko thoda zyada pad sakein. Aur ho sake to hum shayari ka shounk rakhne wale kam tajurbekaron ko sikhaaein aur humaari kamiyan bhi bataaien. Apki choti behn Sarika |
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6th August 2015, 03:00 AM
hazreeN, aap sab se muaafi ka talabgaar hooN
waqt ki qillat kuch aisi rahi hai ke chaahte hue bhi aapki murravvatoN ka shukurguzaar nahiiN ho paaya yeh post faqat ek raseed hai, pehli fursat meiN alehdaa-alehdaa aap sab dostoN ki daad-wa-hauslaa-afzaaii ka shukriya adaa ba-haq haazir karooNga rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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7th August 2015, 12:37 AM
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amaa Pulkit miyaaN, kam se kam tumse yeh ummeed nahiiN rakhta ke "formal" lehje meiN guft'gu ho  ba-har-haal adab ka takaaza hai ke bhai jis zabaan-o-taqalluf meiN meherbaani aaye usi raNg meiN mashkoor-o-mamnoon bhi hua jaaye behadd shukriya Pulkit bhai rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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