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KyuN ja rahe ho.....? - 30th July 2016, 08:25 PM

Khuda ki rahmat thi tum jo aaye khuda hee jane kyun ja rahe ho
Dayaar e dil me charag e ulfat jala ke phir se bujha rahe ho

Chura ke nazreiN yuN mujhse jana qarar dil ka kyuN looTte ho
HuN door tumse maiN kitni mujhko Sitam yuN karke bata rahe ho

maiN chahtoN ki tamaam bateiN jo tum kaho to bhula bhi dooNgi
Ye kaise bhooluN tumhi to mere laboN pe bankar dua rahe ho.

nahi muhabbat ye kahte kahte chhalak gayiiN kyuN tumhari aNkheiN
tadap ye kaisi nigahoN me hai Ye dard kya jo chipa rahe ho

sitare gardish me yuN haiN apne har ek shai ne kiya kinara
khata tumhari bhi isme kya hai jo tum bhi daman bacha rahe ho...

Madhu...



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31st July 2016, 05:40 AM

taGhazzul ba-kamaal hai!!

jo nikhaar aapke sukhan meiN kuch maah se dekh raha hooN, rooh taq raushni pahuNchti mehsoos hoti hai


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Khuda ki rahmat thi tum jo aaye khuda hee jane kyun ja rahe ho
Dayaar e dil me charag e ulfat jala ke phir se bujha rahe ho

Chura ke nazreiN yuN mujhse jana qarar dil ka kyuN looTte ho
HuN door tumse maiN kitni mujhko Sitam yuN karke bata rahe ho

maiN chahtoN ki tamaam bateiN jo tum kaho to bhula bhi dooNgi
Ye kaise bhooluN tumhi to mere laboN pe bankar dua rahe ho.

nahi muhabbat ye kahte kahte chhalak gayiiN kyuN tumhari aNkheiN
tadap ye kaisi nigahoN me hai Ye dard kya jo chipa rahe ho

sitare gardish me yuN haiN apne har ek shai ne kiya kinara
khata tumhari bhi isme kya hai jo tum bhi daman bacha rahe ho...

Madhu...
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Madhu sahiba kya kehne

Aapka kalaam dil ka har gosha gosha roomanvi hogaya

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Khuda ki rahmat thi tum jo aaye khuda hee jane kyun ja rahe ho
Dayaar e dil me charag e ulfat jala ke phir se bujha rahe ho

Chura ke nazreiN yuN mujhse jana qarar dil ka kyuN looTte ho
HuN door tumse maiN kitni mujhko Sitam yuN karke bata rahe ho

maiN chahtoN ki tamaam bateiN jo tum kaho to bhula bhi dooNgi
Ye kaise bhooluN tumhi to mere laboN pe bankar dua rahe ho.

nahi muhabbat ye kahte kahte chhalak gayiiN kyuN tumhari aNkheiN
tadap ye kaisi nigahoN me hai Ye dard kya jo chipa rahe ho

sitare gardish me yuN haiN apne har ek shai ne kiya kinara
khata tumhari bhi isme kya hai jo tum bhi daman bacha rahe ho...

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Madhu madam....isey kehta hain sixerrrrrrrrr.....

Mazaa aa gaya. Main itne dino se jo padna chaah rahi thi , madhu special dil ki baat dil se . Aaj puri hui.

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taGhazzul ba-kamaal hai!!

jo nikhaar aapke sukhan meiN kuch maah se dekh raha hooN, rooh taq raushni pahuNchti mehsoos hoti hai


rab raakha
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Dil se shukriya...

Salamat rahein..



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Khuda ki rahmat thi tum jo aaye khuda hee jane kyun ja rahe ho
Dayaar e dil me charag e ulfat jala ke phir se bujha rahe ho

Chura ke nazreiN yuN mujhse jana qarar dil ka kyuN looTte ho
HuN door tumse maiN kitni mujhko Sitam yuN karke bata rahe ho

maiN chahtoN ki tamaam bateiN jo tum kaho to bhula bhi dooNgi
Ye kaise bhooluN tumhi to mere laboN pe bankar dua rahe ho.

nahi muhabbat ye kahte kahte chhalak gayiiN kyuN tumhari aNkheiN
tadap ye kaisi nigahoN me hai Ye dard kya jo chipa rahe ho

sitare gardish me yuN haiN apne har ek shai ne kiya kinara
khata tumhari bhi isme kya hai jo tum bhi daman bacha rahe ho...

Madhu...
wah madhu jee lajwaab har ashar ek se badhkar ek
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Madhu sahiba kya kehne

Aapka kalaam dil ka har gosha gosha roomanvi hogaya

Mubarak ho iss behtareen ghazal pe
Bahot shukriya mujahid sahab...aapka comment padhkar hame bhi khushi huyi...aap hamesha aise hee khush rahein...salamat rahein
Yahi dua hai....

Ek baar phir behad shukriya hausla afzai ka....

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Khuda ki rahmat thi tum jo aaye khuda hee jane kyun ja rahe ho
Dayaar e dil me charag e ulfat jala ke phir se bujha rahe ho

Chura ke nazreiN yuN mujhse jana qarar dil ka kyuN looTte ho
HuN door tumse maiN kitni mujhko Sitam yuN karke bata rahe ho

maiN chahtoN ki tamaam bateiN jo tum kaho to bhula bhi dooNgi
Ye kaise bhooluN tumhi to mere laboN pe bankar dua rahe ho.

nahi muhabbat ye kahte kahte chhalak gayiiN kyuN tumhari aNkheiN
tadap ye kaisi nigahoN me hai Ye dard kya jo chipa rahe ho

sitare gardish me yuN haiN apne har ek shai ne kiya kinara
khata tumhari bhi isme kya hai jo tum bhi daman bacha rahe ho...

Madhu...


agar ye kahun ke aapne is baar kalaam nahii kahaa , kuch aur hi hai jo bayaani ki saari hadon ko todta huaa sukhan ki bheed se bahut aage ka kuchh hai.....

ye na to kisii bandish me aata hai na hi kisii meyaar mein... bas bahut apnaapan, bahut muhabbat aur bahut hi tadap hai aapke is kalaam me.....

har rang har andaaz ek daastaan hai, har lafz ek shiqaayat hai... thake hue se magar zindaa ehsaas...... aur chamak aisi ke kaaynaat ko jalaa den.....

salaamat rahiye.... likhtii rahiye.... dard baanTtee rahiye

Shaad..........


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Khuda ki rahmat thi tum jo aaye khuda hee jane kyun ja rahe ho
Dayaar e dil me charag e ulfat jala ke phir se bujha rahe ho

Chura ke nazreiN yuN mujhse jana qarar dil ka kyuN looTte ho
HuN door tumse maiN kitni mujhko Sitam yuN karke bata rahe ho

maiN chahtoN ki tamaam bateiN jo tum kaho to bhula bhi dooNgi
Ye kaise bhooluN tumhi to mere laboN pe bankar dua rahe ho.

nahi muhabbat ye kahte kahte chhalak gayiiN kyuN tumhari aNkheiN
tadap ye kaisi nigahoN me hai Ye dard kya jo chipa rahe ho

sitare gardish me yuN haiN apne har ek shai ne kiya kinara
khata tumhari bhi isme kya hai jo tum bhi daman bacha rahe ho...

Madhu...

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Madhu madam....isey kehta hain sixerrrrrrrrr.....

Mazaa aa gaya. Main itne dino se jo padna chaah rahi thi , madhu special dil ki baat dil se . Aaj puri hui.

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agar ye kahun ke aapne is baar kalaam nahii kahaa , kuch aur hi hai jo bayaani ki saari hadon ko todta huaa sukhan ki bheed se bahut aage ka kuchh hai.....

ye na to kisii bandish me aata hai na hi kisii meyaar mein... bas bahut apnaapan, bahut muhabbat aur bahut hi tadap hai aapke is kalaam me.....

har rang har andaaz ek daastaan hai, har lafz ek shiqaayat hai... thake hue se magar zindaa ehsaas...... aur chamak aisi ke kaaynaat ko jalaa den.....

salaamat rahiye.... likhtii rahiye.... dard baanTtee rahiye

Shaad..........
Aap jab bhi kalaam par aate hain dil ko is baat ki tasalli hoti hai ki jitni shiddat aur muhabbat se likha gaya hai..utne hee dil se kisi ne padha aur mahsoos kiya hai....likhne wale ko isse badi khushi aur kya hogi....meri ankkon me chamak aa gayi aapka jawaab padhkar.....

Dil se shukriya aapka...yun hee hausla afzai karte rahiyega...
Aapka bhi bahut sath raha hai ki jo bhi aaj main thoda bahut likh pati hun....

Salamat rahein.......

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