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juudai .plz ease my pain by ur replies - 20th June 2006, 11:35 AM
raatey lambi lagne lagti hai

saanse chubhne lagti hai

ishque tere bahut tadpaye

sanam ab to jiyaa bhi na jaaye

milan ye dharti amber ka hai aasaan nai lagta

tere bin mere sanam ab kahi dil nahi lagta

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20th June 2006, 11:59 AM
nice written....

"sanam" chahe zindagi se bas itna
aik mutthi main kaid kar loon,
yeh aasman hai jitna!"
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20th June 2006, 12:49 PM
Good one, keep it continue..!

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Re: juudai .plz ease my pain by ur replies - 20th June 2006, 02:45 PM
raatey lambi lagne lagti hai

saanse chubhne lagti hai

ishque tere bahut tadpaye

sanam ab to jiyaa bhi na jaaye

milan ye dharti amber ka hai aasaan nai lagta

tere bin mere sanam ab kahi dil nahi lagta



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SHIKASTH LIKHI HAI JISMEIN ISHQ AISA IMTIHAAN HOTA HAI
GAR CHAHAT HAI MANZIL KI TO CHALNA BACH KA JINDAGI MEIN..
JAWANI KI DAGAR PAR MAUJOOD FISALNE KA SAMAAN HOTA HAI

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