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dil.... - 30th October 2003, 11:05 AM

Hi all
hume shayer likhna nahi aata
yeh to hume kissi ne e-mail me bheja tha
vo hii likh rahe hai shayad aap logon ko pasand aye

Dil ka zakham zuban per laya nahin kartay
Hum apni ankhon say ansuu bahaya nahin kartay
Zakham kitnee gehray kyun na hoon
Hum apnay hontoon say muskarahat hataya nahin kartay
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HI - 30th October 2003, 01:32 PM

REALLY VERY NICE EKTA JI ,BAHUT HI ACHI SAIRI APNE BHEJI HAI.....I LIKE THIS TYPE OF SAIRI..JAHA INSAN APNA DARD CHUPA JATA HO.........TAKE CARE..BYE
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hello - 30th October 2003, 04:42 PM

Ekta ji,

jisne bhi aapko yah sher likh bheja hai. bahut hi ummda likh bheja hai.unhe hamari badhaie dijiyega. aapka dhanyvaad jo aapne ese yaha post kiya.



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30th October 2003, 08:26 PM

Hi Deepak jii and Akant jii
thank you so much.
kaash muje bhi shayer likhne aate hote
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lakin koshish zror karke dekhungi
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31st October 2003, 10:02 AM

Dil ka zakham zuban per laya nahin kartay
Hum apni ankhon say ansuu bahaya nahin kartay
Zakham kitnee gehray kyun na hoon
Hum apnay hontoon say muskarahat hataya nahin kartay


bhut khub ekta ji kya baat hai is sher ki dil mein utar gya hai.thanx ise yahan send karne ke liye
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hi - 31st October 2003, 10:16 AM

hi
thaks yaar aap ne itne aache shyari hum se share ke
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Tum itni khoobsuraat ho - 31st October 2003, 11:40 AM

hI eKTA jI,
bAHUT kHOOBSURAT lAG rAHI hAIN aAP. mUJHE eK sHER yAAD aA gAYA lIKH rAHA hOON. sIRF iSSEY sHER hI sAMJHIYEGA. jK
bEWAFA tERA mASOOM cHEHRA bHOOL jANE kO kHABIL nAHI
tUM iTNI kHOOBSURAT hO lEKIN dIL lAGANE kE kHABIL nAHI



kABHI kABHI mERE dIL mEIN kHAYAAL aATA hEI...
kI dUNIYA iTNI kHOOBSURAT hOTE hUE bHI bEZAAR sI kYON lAGTI hEI.

kABHI kABHI kYON lAGTA hEI bIN mAUSAM bADLE.. tUFAAN kA aNDESHA sA

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Re: dil.... - 31st October 2003, 11:48 AM

hi ekta ji
bahot acha sher likha hai aapne....isi baat par ek sher yaad aa gaya.....


Aansoon ko aankhon ki dehleez par laya na karo
Apne dil ki haalat kisi ko bataaya na karo
Log muth-thi bhar namak liye ghooma karte hain
Apne Zakham kisi ko dikhaaya na karo


likhte rahiye..
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hi - 31st October 2003, 01:31 PM

Dil ka zakham zuban per laya nahin kartay
Hum apni ankhon say ansuu bahaya nahin kartay
Zakham kitnee gehray kyun na hoon
Hum apnay hontoon say muskarahat hataya nahin kartay



iske ans mein jo sher manoj ji ne likha hai woh ek behtreen combination hai iske saath mere hisaab se--

Aansoon ko aankhon ki dehleez par laya na karo
Apne dil ki haalat kisi ko bataaya na karo
Log muth-thi bhar namak liye ghooma karte hain
Apne Zakham kisi ko dikhaaya na karo

apka bhut bhut sukriya jo apne ye sher yahan likha manoj ji
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31st October 2003, 03:46 PM

Kya ladke log
jaha par ek ladki dekhi aise aa jaate ho
jaise pata nahi kya
tum logo ko aur koi kaam dhanda nahi hai kya
jidher ladki dekhi udher ghuse chale aate ho


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31st October 2003, 06:20 PM

Hi all namely Sakhi ji,Arvind Ji,aryan ji and Manoj ji
thanks
muje bohat khushi hui ki aapne ye shayer passand kiya
but this is not mine
ye muje mere ek dost Gaurav Agarwal ne
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Re: hi - 31st October 2003, 06:50 PM

shukriya sakhi ji
bahot acha laga yeh jaan kar ki aap ko mera sher pasand aaya...bahoot bahoot aabhari hoon mein aapka,,,magar yeh shermeine nahin likha hai,,,bahoot makbool sher hai yeh,,,,ekta ji ke sher ko padha to barbas jehan mein yeh sher ubhar aaya,,,aur meine yahan likh diya.....aap ki izzat afzai ka ek baar fir shukriya kehta hoon..
apna khayal rakhiyega.
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hi - 31st October 2003, 07:37 PM

hi ekta ji ye mere ko pata hai ye sher apka nahi but apne yahan post kiya na thanx for it.


manoj ji


apka sher bhi bhut acha tha aap dono ne bhut ache sher hamein padne ka muka dita thanx.

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hi - 31st October 2003, 07:40 PM

hi ekta ji ye mere ko pata hai ye sher apka nahi but apne yahan post kiya na thanx for it.


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apka sher bhi bhut acha tha aap dono ne bhut ache sher hamein padne ka muka dita thanx.

sakhi

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31st October 2003, 07:45 PM

Hi Thanks Sakhi jii
muje to agar aisa koi shayer mila to main
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31st October 2003, 11:08 PM

Ekta..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..woh TULSI nahi hai koyii uskii ID se bat karr raha hai..ap bura na mane..jalld pata pad jayega ye kya hoo raha hai...hum koshish mai hai tulsi se baat karne kii parr woh nahi mila rahii hai..jese hii pata padta hum sach kya hai ap ko batayenge...bass maaf kare uskoo..woh chota sa bachha hai joo iss taraha ki har kat nahi karr sakta haii.....sachh mai...Sanjay!!


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