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Ab tum aaoge---ek rubaaii -
12th January 2002, 02:58 PM
Ab tum aaoge mujhko ye lagta nahiN
ye dil ka dard roke se ruktaa nahiN seene se lagaa kar dhokhe diye mujhe maiN phir bhi unhe bewafa kehta nahiN maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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nice one... -
12th January 2002, 11:57 PM
hello maikash jee
i've read ur pretty good at poetry n stuff...ab khud parh ke dekh rahi hoon to pata chal gaya log aapke itne gun kyoon gaate hain...  ....well i'd say this one was absolutely astounding...anyhoo...take care...fari maanga khuda se raat din tere siwa kuch bhi nahin |
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13th January 2002, 08:35 AM
Mohtarma fari ji....aadaab kabuul kijiye....!!
pehle to mehfil-e-sukhan meiN aapka isteQbaal .... duuje aapne khaaksaar kii jo izzat-afzaaii kii...uske liye tah'e dil se shukriya.... abhi to nachiiz ne is faN ko kariib se dekhaa bhi nahiN....abhi to aghaaz-e-safar hai....dekhiye ye rehguzar kahaN le jaati hai.... iss rubaaii ko ghazal kii suurat dene kii koshish meN huN...do sheyr arz hain.... jinkii khaaTir sab kuch bhulaa diya unko mera khayaal tak aataa nahiN ab khwahishoN kii aag bhujh chukii dhuvvaN bhi kambakhT se uThta nahiN aadaab maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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salaam... |
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salaam... -
14th January 2002, 02:24 AM
the next two shers were awesome too. bas kuch logo ke andar hi hota hai itna acha talent creative writing ka....n i'm sure ur one of them....
 ...i wonder how u do it.... ...anyhoo....aap likhte rehye n hum parhte rahein ge...have fun....fari maanga khuda se raat din tere siwa kuch bhi nahin |
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14th January 2002, 08:55 AM
Fari ji...Tasleem
Phir se izzat-afzaii karne ka shukriiya....aapkii inayat hai... bahot mamnoon huN.... aadaab maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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