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bahot bahot khoob sher pesh kiye hain aap ne Madhu saahiba aur sunita dee......
aaj kaa sher...
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maiN., maiN se hum., phir hum se tum ho gya..
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सिर्फ चेहरा ही नहीं शख्सियत भी पहचानो ,
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_Bashir Badr
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Kah do in hasraton se kahiin aur ja basen..
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Nm
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"Dhoop nikali hai muddaton ke baad
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-Bashir Badr
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
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Waah bahut khoob di....
Kuch tujh me ana bhi thi to mujh me guroor tha
Har haal me hamko bichadana zaroor tha....
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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स्टेच्यू-स्टेच्यू खेलते-खेलते इंसान
कब पत्थर का बन गया पता ही नहीं चला...!
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27th April 2015, 09:29 AM
"mere saath tum bhi dua karo yu kisi ke haq mai bura na ho,
Kahi aur ho na ye haadsa koi raaste me juda na ho"
-Bashir Bdar
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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"mere saath tum bhi dua karo yu kisi ke haq mai bura na ho,
Kahi aur ho na ye haadsa koi raaste me juda na ho"
-Bashir Bdar
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waaah .. waaah baaji ...
mukhlis haiN jab hi tanha haiN!
matlabi hote to hujoom hota...
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28th April 2015, 03:50 PM
Bahut khoob dii..waah hassan jii..
Bahut khoob sher..
Aaj ka sher..
Aadmii bulbula hai pani ka.
kya bharosa hai zindgani ka.
Nm
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Bahut khoob dii..waah hassan jii..
Bahut khoob sher..
Aaj ka sher..
Aadmii bulbula hai pani ka.
kya bharosa hai zindgani ka.
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waaaaaaah
dil agar be-naqaab hote!
socho! kitne fasaad hote......
(not mine)
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waaaaaaah
dil agar be-naqaab hote!
socho! kitne fasaad hote......
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Waaaaaaah....
Har admii me hote hain das bees admii..
jise bhi dekhna ho kai baar dekhna.
Nida fazli.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Waaaaaaah....
Har admii me hote hain das bees admii..
jise bhi dekhna ho kai baar dekhna.
Nida fazli.
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us yaar ki kia dosti jo yaar ho dus bees ka!
us chaand ko kia dekhna jo chaand ho tees ka
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30th April 2015, 11:07 AM
Aaj ka sher...
Duniya mein hooN duniyaa ka talabgaar nahi hooN
Bazaar se guzraa hoon kharidaar nahi hooN
Akbar Allahabadi
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Aaj ka sher...
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Bazaar se guzraa hoon kharidaar nahi hooN
Akbar Allahabadi
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kia baat hy .... waaah waaaah................
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waaah jeee.. ...
us yaar ki kia dosti jo yaar ho dus bees ka!
us chaand ko kia dekhna jo chaand ho tees ka
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Waah jii waah...par chaand to ek hee hai...ab use tees ka kahein ya hazaron ka.....milta kisi ko bhi nahi.........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Aaj ka sher...
Duniya mein hooN duniyaa ka talabgaar nahi hooN
Bazaar se guzraa hoon kharidaar nahi hooN
Akbar Allahabadi
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Waaah...kya baat hai..bahut khoob janaab...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Aaj ka sher..
Ai aasmaan tere khudaa ka nahiN hai Khauff
Ai zameen tere aadmi se darte hai hum
NM
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thama do mujhe phir se school ka basta 'maa'
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"dil meiN Allah bhi rakheN, dil meiN Bhagwaan bhi rakheN,
sahi raah ke liye Geeta bhi rakheN Kuraan bhi rakheN"
-nm
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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"dil meiN Allah bhi rakheN, dil meiN Bhagwaan bhi rakheN,
sahi raah ke liye Geeta bhi rakheN Kuraan bhi rakheN"
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Waah bahut khoob sher share kiya di..
Na mandir me sanam hote na masjid me khuda hota..
hami se ye tamasha hai na ham hote to kya hota..
Nm
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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5th May 2015, 12:54 PM
Aaj ka sher.....
itnee teekhii zubaaN se ham se bolte ho tum
lab-e-naazuk jo chhil gaye to museebat hogee...
Shaad.....
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Aaj ka sher.....
itnee teekhii zubaaN se ham se bolte ho tum
lab-e-naazuk jo chhil gaye to museebat hogee...
Shaad.....
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Wah wah! Bohut khoob............
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"dil meiN Allah bhi rakheN, dil meiN Bhagwaan bhi rakheN,
sahi raah ke liye Geeta bhi rakheN Kuraan bhi rakheN"
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Beautiful thought........
Isi par mera vichaar
Mandir masjid kyun khoje, wo aan basaa tere Mann Mein
Ankhe mal aur dekh Zara, basaa hai wo har tan man mein
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Waah bahut khoob sher share kiya di..
Na mandir me sanam hote na masjid me khuda hota..
hami se ye tamasha hai na ham hote to kya hota..
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waaaahhhh kyaa baat hai Sarika jee...... khoob sher kaha hai aapne.... dil me utar ggayeen ye panktiiyaan..........
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Beautiful thought........��
Isi par mera vichaar
Mandir masjid kyun khoje, wo aan basaa tere Mann Mein
Ankhe mal aur dekh Zara, basaa hai wo har tan man mein
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Dear sarika....bahut khoobsurat ehsaas....god bless u my dear
"वो थका हुआ मेरी बाहों में ज़रा सो गया था तो क्या हुआ
अभी मैं ने देखा है चाँद भी किसी शाख़-ए-गुल पे झुका हुआ"
"wo thakaa hua meri baahoN meiN jara so gya tha to kya hua,
abhi maine dekha hai chaand bhi kisi shaakh-e-gul pe jukka hua"
-Bashir Badr
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Dear sarika....bahut khoobsurat ehsaas....god bless u my dear
"वो थका हुआ मेरी बाहों में ज़रा सो गया था तो क्या हुआ
अभी मैं ने देखा है चाँद भी किसी शाख़-ए-गुल पे झुका हुआ"
"wo thakaa hua meri baahoN meiN jara so gya tha to kya hua,
abhi maine dekha hai chaand bhi kisi shaakh-e-gul pe jukka hua"
-Bashir Badr
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kamal hii kamal hy baaaji ......
dil khush ho gaya ...
salamat rahen ...
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Shukriya sarika ji....
Bahut khoob sher di......
Aaj ka sher
Tumhara dil mere dil ke barabar ho nahi sakta..
vo shiisha ho nahi sakta ye patthar ho nahi sakta.
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Aaj ka sher
Tumhara dil mere dil ke barabar ho nahi sakta..
vo shiisha ho nahi sakta ye patthar ho nahi sakta.
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kya baat hai....................bahut khoob
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6th May 2015, 05:25 PM
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Shukriya sarika ji....
Bahut khoob sher di......
Aaj ka sher
Tumhara dil mere dil ke barabar ho nahi sakta..
vo shiisha ho nahi sakta ye patthar ho nahi sakta.
nm
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superb......................................
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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