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hai khushi intzaar ki hardam
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लफ्ज़-ए-तस्सली तो
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jaan lenii thii saaf kah dete
kyaa zaruurat thii muskuraane kii
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लफ्ज़-ए-तस्सली तो
एक तक्कलुफ है साहब
वरना...
जिसका दर्द उसी का दर्द,
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jaan lenii thii saaf kah dete
kyaa zaruurat thii muskuraane kii
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bahut khoob intekhaab doston......
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vo samne baithe hain yakeen hamko nahi hai..
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na phir hogaa kabhii ham se muhabbat jaawidaanaa* hai
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na phir hogaa kabhii ham se muhabbat jaawidaanaa* hai
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Musalsal dard sahkar dil mera patthar na ho jaye
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waahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kuyaa bata hai kya abaat hai madhu sahaiba... dil jeet liyaaa aapke is sher ne........
kamaal ki adaaygee huii aapki jaanib se is baar ke bas mih se amooman waahh nikal gaya.....
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waahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kya baat hai kya baat hai madhu sahaiba... dil jeet liyaaa aapke is sher ne........
kamaal ki adaaygee huii aapki jaanib se is baar ke bas mih se amooman waahh nikal gaya.....
duaa hai ek aap aise hi acha acha likhti rahen.... khuhs rahen... salaamat rahen
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Chhalak jane ko hai betab ankhon se mere darya
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Ulfat mai ahvaal-e-tabiyat na pooch
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kyaa baat hai...... shaandaar sher , laajawaab
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Shukriya ....................
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Bahut khoob........................
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Gustakhi maaf shaad ji....Aapke sher pe ek khayaal kuch yun aaya .....
Mahaz ye ashq hee to gham me mere sathi hain.
Jo ye bhi sookh gaye dil na tanha ho jaye...
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Tadapta hai sisakta hai jo tanhai me ashiq dil
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yeh bhi amanat hai unki... jo saanseN chal rahi hai...
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Waah.!! Bahut khoob kaha aapne.....
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bahut hi haseeen sher pesh kiye hain aapne madhu ji aur Purvi ji.....
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ek taaza khayaal dekhiye....
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behtar huaa auqaat pataa chal gayee is ko......!!
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ek taaza khayaal dekhiye....
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behtar huaa auqaat pataa chal gayee is ko......!!
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Uff......sher seedha dil pe chot kar gaya shaad sahab...
Likhte rahein.......
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ek taaza khayaal dekhiye....
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behtar huaa auqaat pataa chal gayee is ko......!!
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka madhu ji aur purvi ji...........................
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khamoushi beysabab nahen houti
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qatl hai ye sher mohtarmaa ...... bahut aalaa sher ....
salaamat rahen...
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Waah..saba ji...kamaal ka sher pesh kiya hai aapne...
Bahut hee khoob.....
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bahut hi sacchaa aur chubhtaa huaa sher pesh kiya ahai aapne sabaa saahibaa.....
Allah aapko sukoon de , khush rahiye, salaamat rahiye
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Zami Ko Aasmaan Se Mila Ne Ki Sazish Kar De..
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Yeh jo sargashta se phirtey hain kitaabon waley..
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Ab hume dil ko batana padta h hume pyaar hua hai...
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