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Wah Shaad saheb kya baat hei. Umda sher hua hei.
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Meri amma ki dua.oN ka asar hei shayed
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maine dekhaa hai bahaaron ka chaman se jaanaa,
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Shaad....
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Wah Shaad saheb kya baat hei. Umda sher hua hei.
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Meri amma ki dua.oN ka asar hei shayed
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Kya kahne fakhri ji..badi sadgi se aapne umda sher kaha hai....
Waahh!!
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Ye khaak ka bana hua insaaN bhi hai ajab
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Har baab par bayaa.n hai qissa e dil shikasta
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Har baab par bayaa.n hai qissa e dil shikasta
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bahut hi laajawaab sher kahaa hai aapne is baar waahhh hi waahhhh
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bahut hi laajawaab sher kahaa hai aapne is baar waahhh hi waahhhh
daad qubool kijiye
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गजल की बज्म जैसा है... तुम्हारा चाँद सा चेहरा..
निगाहें शेर पढ़ती हैं तो लब इरशाद करते हैं...✍
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गजल की बज्म जैसा है... तुम्हारा चाँद सा चेहरा..
निगाहें शेर पढ़ती हैं तो लब इरशाद करते हैं...✍��
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ma sha Allah...... khoobsurat sher se nawaaza hai aapne aaj raat bazm ko.....
subhaan Allah....... aate rahen, qayaamat barpaate rahen
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Toofa.N se bhala kya Darna, himmat jo agar hai
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Toofa.N se bhala kya Darna, himmat jo agar hai
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nice one fakhri ji................................................ ........
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le de ke apne paas faqat ik nazar to hai
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गजल की बज्म जैसा है... तुम्हारा चाँद सा चेहरा..
निगाहें शेर पढ़ती हैं तो लब इरशाद करते हैं...✍��
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Waaah waah behad khoobsoorat sher kaha hai aapne..
Bahot khoob...aate rahiyega..
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Toofa.N se bhala kya Darna, himmat jo agar hai
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Waaaahhhhh...........
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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le de ke apne paas faqat ik nazar to hai
kyuu.n dekhe.n zindagii ko kisii kii nazar se ham
Sahir Ludhianvi Sahab
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Waahhhh!!!
Behad umda aur mera pasandeeda sher share kiya hai apne ..
Shukriya.........
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zaroorat thi bhala ab kya nighaahein chaar karne ki
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9th September 2016, 03:59 AM
Shukria himmat afzaii ka Shaadji aur Madhu Saheba.
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Waaah.... Khoob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nayaab sher kaha hai shaayar ne.... thanks for sharing dee
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waah di bahot khoob sharing................
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Ek tarz E taGhaaful hai so wo un ko mubaarak
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Ek tarz E taGhaaful hai so wo un ko mubaarak
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faiz ahmed faiz.....
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wahhhh bahut khoob.................................
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faiz ahmed faiz.....
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Umdaa share Madhu Faiz sahab ka aandaaz-e-bayaan niraala hai
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faiz ahmed faiz.....
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What lovely sharing madhu sahiba
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What lovely sharing madhu sahiba
Keep sharing Faiz sahab madhu sahiba
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shukriya aap dono ka...............
ishq dil me.n rahe to rusavaa ho
lab pe aaye to raaz ho jaaye
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shukriya aap dono ka...............
ishq dil me.n rahe to rusavaa ho
lab pe aaye to raaz ho jaaye
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Bahut khoob kya baat hai.........
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Aur Toh kiya tha bechnay k lein
Apni Ankho k Khawab bechy hai...
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waahhh!!!! bahot khoob...............
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umda sharing.................... wahhh!!!!
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dil muddaii ke harf-e-malaamat se shaad hai
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[harf-e-malaamat=word of criticism]
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-Madhu
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जुनून, हौसला, और पागलपन आज भी वही है
मैंने जीने का तरीका बदला है तेवर नहीं..!!
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maine jeene ka tareeka badka hai tevar nahi"
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Nawazish di..............
Salamat rahein......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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