Re: Dillagi -
6th November 2003, 03:13 PM
janab arvind saheb
bahoot khoob likha hai aapne....hamari daad kubool kijiye....aap ke sher ke upar is naacheez ne bhi apna ek sher likhne ki gustakhi ki hai,,,,,mulaiza farmaiyega huzoor....
mohabbat mein jeene ke bahane dhoondte hai
naadan hai jo chupe khazane dhoondte hai
sab ke haathon mein nahin hoti mohabbat ki rekha
ham nahin wo jo guzre jamane dhoondte hai.
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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