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Safar me dhoop to hogi... - 19th August 2004, 12:57 PM

Safar me Dhoop to hogi, jo chal sako to chalo,
Sabhi hain Bheed me, tum bhi nikal sako to chalo...

Yehi hai Zindagi, Chand Khwaab, Kucch Ummeedein,
Inhi Khilonon se tum bhi Behel sako to chalo...


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hi - 19th August 2004, 12:59 PM

Its very nice...
chal sako to chalo...



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19th August 2004, 06:09 PM

Hi Shivangi!

Thx for the appreciation


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hi - 19th August 2004, 07:02 PM

Pulkit dear...
bahut achhe ...kya baat hai aajkal amrita ke gum mein bahut serious ho gaye ho...bade dard bhare sher likhte ho....
khair bhagwaan aapko is dard mein sambhalne ki himmat de..
bas yahi dua kar sakte hai....
take care,
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19th August 2004, 07:47 PM

Dear..Pulkit.......merii bhii pasandiida ghazlo mai ye shumar rakhtii hai....iss ko humne post kiyaa hai....jo sher tum chhode ho mai uskoo bhii pura kar du..ummid hai tumhe bura nahi lagegaa.....bye


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safar men dhuup to hogii jo chal sako to chalo
sabhii hain bhiid men tum bhii nikal sako to chalo

idhar udhar kai manzil hain chal sako to chalo
bane banaaye hain saanche jo Dhal sako to chalo

kisi ke vaasate raahen kahan badalatii hain
tum apane aap ko Khud hi badal sako to chalo

yahi hai zindagii kuchh Khvaab chand ummiden
inhin khilaunon se tum bhii bahal sako to chalo

har ik safar ko hai mahafuus raaston kii talaash
hifaazaton kii rivaayat badal sako to chalo


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Jindagi se to khair shikvaa tha,

muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..

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Shukriya dostoN - 19th August 2004, 08:31 PM

Shukriya Pulkit ise ham dostoN ke saath share karne ke liye...

Shukriya Sanjoo...iska poora link post karne ke liye.

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19th August 2004, 08:42 PM

pulkit ji do dil baat ek ..... aabhi aabhi sanjoo ko is ghazal ka reply de kar hata hoon.....phirse tareef karte huye khushi dugni ho rahi hai...aapne itni aachi ghazal hamare nazar kari aapka bahut bahut shukriya
Yunhi likhte RahiYeGaa

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20th August 2004, 12:31 PM

Pari,

Kaisi ho? Long time no See? Busy in Pardes

Yaar, ab mujhe samajh me aata hai ke rumours kaise bante hain.... Who told you ke mujhe Amrita ka gham hai..... We both r very happy

Jahan tak raha Dard ka sawal, Well I've had a shift from Shayri-E-Dad to Ishq section recently only ....

Himmat badhane ke liye Tum Ho Naa...my Saggi Frnd

Tum Dua karti raho, Dua rahegi ki tumhari Dua kubool ho....

Till the time... Do TC of urself and ur Mr. Perfect....... Keep Smiling n B in Touch


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20th August 2004, 12:46 PM

Sanjoo Dost,

Arrey tum bura manne ki baat karte ho..... I was dying to find out the writer of this beautiful Sher.....

Tumne to bonus de diya.... Complete Ghazal and writers name... I liked it before and love it now after reading the complete one.....

Thx again Sanju.... Now in future, If I wanna find details about ne Shayri, Sanjoo Hai naa....

So... Do Tc, Keep Smiling and keep Writing


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Pulkit bhai bahut khooob likha hai janab keep writin
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21st August 2004, 11:13 AM

Chaand Dost,

Aapko pasand aya jaankar khushi huyi... Vakayi bahut sundar bol hain is rachan ke.....

Isis tarah likhte rahiye... Do Take Care


Dear Mast ,

Aapki khushi me hi aapke dost ki khushi hai Appko accha laga jaankar khushi hui...Yun hi hausla badate rahiye TC..


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Fareed,

Thx for appreciating the effort... Do keep writing..TC..


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