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DIl diya gallla DIl hi jaane --->>duniya da dastur keho jeha -
21st January 2005, 09:02 PM
Tuttey dil nu aaj me jod vi ni sakdi
hanju girde paye ne in'ha nu rok vi ni sakdi Saahnu oh samajh ke vi samjheya na par, har insaan di apni marji hai yaaro, me usnu tok vi nahi sakdi Diwale hoye ne anjaan saade kolo is tarha me chah! ke vi dil dilla gallla khol nahi sakdi kainde si meri awaaz de naal changa nikal da din jisda, aaj wekho, pyar bhare do bol vi usna bol nahi sakdi Duniya da dastur keho jeha samajh ni aaunda......... Tuttey dil nu aaj me jod nahi sakdi........ hanju girde paye ne , rok vi nahi sakdi........... Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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22nd January 2005, 11:22 AM
luvpriya i like ue shyri veru much.
So keep it up for ur friends. Have a Nice Day Saurabh A Lover |
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22nd January 2005, 02:24 PM
HI Priya Ji,
Oho, itni mayoosi!!! Ki hogaya kudiye??? Kalaam to bohot pasand aaya priyaji bus dua karte hai ke aap humesha khush rahe. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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23rd January 2005, 03:26 AM
priya..meri dost aye mere haunsle vadhaan vali kudi aaj aap kive haunslaa har baithi hai...kayi rishte shayad tuttan joga honde hi nahi...shayad kadi asi vi...
phir cheete aayiyan dil diyan galan dil to hun dil mod nahi sakdi taare tutte ambar to vakh hovan mein vakh hoya vi tod nahi sakdi... tera apnaa anu Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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24th January 2005, 03:54 AM
dear saurabh thanks for liking this shayri of mine, it means a lot when there are friends to appreciate what we do and write, thanks
 ------------------------------- dear candyboy ji, aapne pasand kiya hamara likhna aur kya chhaiye, ki ho gaya, ki dassa te ki nahi......bas inj samajh lo ki zindagi jaado jaado ulaj jaandi hai suljhana bara hi mushkil ho jaandaa hai, insaan de hath vaas kuch hoke vi nahi hunda...kayi baar...thanks dear for being here cuz it means a lot to me --------------------------------- dear anu, taare tutte ambar to vakh hovan mein vakh hoya vi tod nahi sakdi... bara hi sahi keha hai tusi, tusi kuch na keh ke vi kayi bar kinna kuch keh dainde ho par tuahda mere nal hona has always made a postive diference in life and thats what it all counts trust me....i always feel more strengthen to know that you r with me and by my side ------------------------------ Luv ya all and thanks PRiya. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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24th January 2005, 03:57 AM
Hi Priya,
It was a real good peice that u had written. Do continue to post such wonderful thoughts. Thanks Rohin |
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24th January 2005, 09:42 AM
Tuttey dil nu aaj me jod vi ni sakdi
hanju girde paye ne in'ha nu rok vi ni sakdi Saahnu oh samajh ke vi samjheya na par, har insaan di apni marji hai yaaro, me usnu tok vi nahi sakdi Diwale hoye ne anjaan saade kolo is tarha me chah! ke vi dil dilla gallla khol nahi sakdi kainde si meri awaaz de naal changa nikal da din jisda, aaj wekho, pyar bhare do bol vi usna bol nahi sakdi Duniya da dastur keho jeha samajh ni aaunda......... Tuttey dil nu aaj me jod nahi sakdi........ hanju girde paye ne , rok vi nahi sakdi........... Hey! Very very nice thoughts priya.. and equally beautiful words..... Doo keep posting such beautiful things... Jab Dil ki baat ati hai punjaabi me to mujhe ke sher yaad aa jaata hai....not mine... but i like it a lotTere dil diyan gallan too jaane, mere dil vich dhadkan teri hai... To jinna chir mainu pyaar kare, mainu unni umar bhateri hai. Do keep the good work up.. TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th January 2005, 09:48 PM
kainde si meri awaaz de naal changa nikal da din jisda,
aaj wekho, pyar bhare do bol vi usna bol nahi sakdi Priya ji...... thuada ek hausala aala kalam khasa chir pehlaan padya si..... te aaj bade dinaan baad thuvaanu ihdaan paya..... ek gal kehnda jaavan aaj na rok hanjuaan nu...... inha di raah saare dard..... aaj vagh jaan de....... ki miluga inha nu seene naal la ke...... dil da har zakm...... aaj vagh jaan de...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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26th January 2005, 09:46 PM
dear rohin i am glad to know that u liked the thoughts that were conqureing in my mind and heart, its always a good feeling to hear from friends that they dolike the wriitngs, thanks and do keep in touch.
----------- dear Pulikit ji hai aapne to gajab hi dha diya. i luvwed what u said, shayad jo me itni sari pankityon me keh na saki aane do me keh diya  Tere dil diyan gallan too jaane, mere dil vich dhadkan teri hai... To jinna chir mainu pyaar kare, mainu unni umar bhateri hai. wow this is so good thanks and do keep us posted on shers like this, it touched my hrt. ---------------------------------------------------- dear aman,aaj na rok hanjuaan nu...... inha di raah saare dard..... aaj vagh jaan de....... ki miluga inha nu seene naal la ke...... dil da har zakm...... aaj vagh jaan de some things in life so natural that we cant stop them like when u see someone so special and close to hrt ' the smile' that comes on your lips.....when someone departs ' the tears' etc etc, shayad tusi theek keha ki let it go and may be its for good..i m glad to know u liked the thoughts i wrote.. thanks it makes a lot of difference to me when my friends reply and like what i write --------- luv and regards to all Priya tusi kinna sach ekha hai ki: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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8th March 2005, 10:32 PM
aman
bas was reading this one again and i thought about your words saying that dil da dard aaj vaag jaan de shayad kade kade dil inna bhara ho jaanda hai aman ki asi..i mean dil pehle i inna full hai ki..us which hor kuch nawa paanna mushkil ho jaandaa hai.....dil da dard bahar aa jave ta hi asi kuch nawa kar sakde haan... hanjuya ch baha dena aaj sara dukh asi, ki tainu vi phula dena aaj asi? tu vasda siga mere naina which, ki tainu vi baha dena aaj asi? mere buliya te haase si- naw si tera, aaj kainde ne saare, baha dava tainu......apne hanjuya ch..... waqt kehar da aya hai....aaj jaane ki karna asi? pata ni yaar what i amg etting into chalo karde haan gal...... Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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9th March 2005, 03:14 PM
us which hor kuch nawa paanna mushkil ho jaandaa hai.....dil da dard bahar aa jave ta hi asi kuch nawa kar sakde haan...
Priya..... eh dard nu ek vaari vag jaan do....koi nava roop inha aakhan vich vasa ke.....apne dil nu pher khil jaan do..... thuvaade vaaste ek hor gazal punjabi vich...... Writer: Raoof ji. Singer: Ghulam Ali Sahab Khaure kyun mainu shaam vele sooraj vi sharabi lagda ae….. Aeveen nahi laali mukhde te, koi rind hisaabi lagda ae…. Khaure kyun mainu shaam vele sooraj vi sharabi lagda ae….. Aeveen nahi laali mukhde te, koi rind hisaabi lagda ae…. Lagde ne hullare shaakhan vich mainu sajna teriyaan bahvaan de….. Phoolaan vich tere chehre da mainu rang gulabi lagda ae….. Khaure kyun mainu shaam vele sooraj vi sharabi lagda ae….. Majnu ne vekh ke laila ne ae apne dil vich sooch laya….. Vekhan vich paanve majnue ae, parr thaat nawabi lagda ae…. Khaure kyun mainu shaam vele sooraj vi sharabi lagda ae….. Duniya de bagaan vich dithaa rutaan sir buute falde ne…. Ek buta jehya shakhawat di jihnu faall sharabi lagda ae…. Khaure kyun mainu shaam vele sooraj vi sharabi lagda ae….. Gazlaan vich ravaani raavi di, geetan vich chanbi challan ne…. Sab lok ^RAOOF^ nu kehnde ne, eh shehar punjabi lagda ae… Khaure kyun mainu shaam vele sooraj vi sharabi lagda ae….. Aeveen nahi laali mukhde te, koi rind hisaabi lagda ae…. thuvade naal gal karna changa lagda hai..... jahdon vi dil bhari hove.....nave yaraan nu yaad karo..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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