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zaalim - 10th July 2002, 01:04 PM

zaalim thaa vo aur zulm kii aadat bhi bahut thii
majabuur them ham un se muhabbat bhi bahut thii

us but ke sitam seh ke dikhaa hi diya hamne
yuun apni tabiyat mein bagavat bhi bahut thii

vaaqif hi na thaa rasm-e-muhabbat se vo varna
dil ke liye thodi si inaayat bhi bahut thii

yuun hi nahi mashahuur-e-zamanaa mera qaatil
us shaqs ko is fan mein mahaarat bhi bahut thii

kyaa daur-e-gazal thaa ke lahuu dil mein bahut thaa
aur dil ko lahuu karne kii fursat bhi bahut thii

har shaam sunate the hasinon ko gazal ham
jab maal bahut thaa to sakhavat bhi bahut thii

bulavaa ke ham 'aziiz' ko pashemaan bhi bahut hain
kya kijiye kambakht kii shohrat bhi bahut thii


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kya baat hai sagar saab!waa!subhanalla!!
maza aa gaya!!


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Bahut Aachhe saahab - 21st August 2002, 10:57 AM

Waah Sagar sahab,

aapki ye ghazal waqai bahut achhi hai, yooNhi likhte rahiye.



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waah sagar saab!
aap to ustad hai shayri kay!
kya khoob likhga hai!
aapki agli rachna ka intezaar rahegaa!


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27th September 2002, 05:49 AM

sagar sahab.....

mazrat chahta huuN lekin janaab "kaleem ajiz" sahab ki iss ghazal ke do ashaar aur haiN...aapki ijaazat ke saath maiN pesh kar raha huuN

ghazal ka matla yuuN hai

har chaNd gham-o-dard ki keemat bhi bahut thi
lena hi padaa humko zaroorat bhi bahut thi

go tarq-e-taa'lluQ meiN sahuulat bhi bahut thi
lekin na huaa humse ke Ghairat bhi bahut thi


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