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jab se tum mile - 13th July 2006, 09:39 AM

..............JAB SE TUM MILE.............

Chand kal bhee tha , aaj bhi hai............
bas chandi ki thandak bad gayee!
jo dil ko sakoon de
wo chahat bhari nazar mil gayee!
raat kal bhee thi
aaj bhee hai..................
bus raat ki
umar bad gayee............
rang kal bhee the aaj bhee hain.........
bas unki kadar bad gayee.
hum kal bhee the
aaj bhee hain
magar..................

Lagta hai
ki mujhe
jindgi mil gayee
yah sab hua hai

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Kasam se kafi acha tha.gr8 job.....

sach mein yar mujse to is tra kuch likha nhi jata phir bhi i m trying



yar plz maf karna piochli mail ki liye.i thought u will be happy ki aapne muje khush kar diya apni shyri se anyway


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hi - 11th September 2006, 10:55 AM

sonia dear,

aapki kavita bahut achchhi lagi.. mujhe lagata hai ki shayri se kahi achchhi aap kavita likhati hongi.. yah kavita aapki dil ke bahut kreeb se gujari...

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11th September 2006, 11:25 AM

bahot achha likhti ho sonia

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Arrow aapka dost - 11th September 2006, 03:55 PM

hi,
soniya
aap aacha likhti hai meine aapke kai sher pede hai


teri bevfai ke jakhm jab jab yaad aay,
bebas ask meri ankho mein jhalak aay,
vefao se tola hai usene meri vefao ko,
koi kisi ko is tereh kabhi na aajmay,
derta hai dil ab to apni hi tanhai se,
kahi 'jaam "a" vefa' chalak na jay!!!!!




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hi - 11th September 2006, 04:34 PM

Chand kal bhee tha , aaj bhi hai............
bas chandi ki thandak bad gayee!
jo dil ko sakoon de
wo chahat bhari nazar mil gayee!
raat kal bhee thi
aaj bhee hai..................
bus raat ki
umar bad gayee............
rang kal bhee the aaj bhee hain.........
bas unki kadar bad gayee.
hum kal bhee the
aaj bhee hain
magar..................

Lagta hai
ki mujhe
jindgi mil gayee
yah sab hua hai

............jab se tum mil gaye

sonia ji appko raj ka namaskaar....appki nazam kaya hai ek chalta phirta ehsaas hai.....kaya baat likhi hai appne......bhut khub meri daad kabool karna.......raj.....


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Re: jab se tum mile - 11th September 2006, 04:43 PM

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..............JAB SE TUM MILE.............

Chand kal bhee tha , aaj bhi hai............
bas chandi ki thandak bad gayee!
jo dil ko sakoon de
wo chahat bhari nazar mil gayee!
raat kal bhee thi
aaj bhee hai..................
bus raat ki
umar bad gayee............
rang kal bhee the aaj bhee hain.........
bas unki kadar bad gayee.
hum kal bhee the
aaj bhee hain
magar..................

Lagta hai
ki mujhe
jindgi mil gayee
yah sab hua hai

............jab se tum mil gaye
sonia

tumne mujhe kaha tha ki sirf main waise hi tumhari likhi shayri ki tarif karta hoo.n or tum kuch kha s nahi likh pati........... is liye maine tumhe abhi tak reply nahi diya tha.......... per jab aaj tumhe mere bade bhai mr. rajveer ka reply mil gaya to samjh lo ki ab ye kahne ki jaroorat nahi hai ki tum accha nahi likh pati..... tum bakai main bahut khoob surat likhti ho........... bakai

ek begana sa dost
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15th September 2006, 04:26 PM

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Kasam se kafi acha tha.gr8 job.....

sach mein yar mujse to is tra kuch likha nhi jata phir bhi i m trying



yar plz maf karna piochli mail ki liye.i thought u will be happy ki aapne muje khush kar diya apni shyri se anyway


Ab KOI DIL DILEGI KE LYAK NA REHA
kOI BHI IZHARE MHOBBAT KI LYAK NA REHA
IS DIL MEIN BAS GYI HAI TASVEER TERI
kI AB CHAND BHI DEEDAR KI LYAK NA REHA
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Re: hi - 15th September 2006, 04:27 PM

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sonia dear,

aapki kavita bahut achchhi lagi.. mujhe lagata hai ki shayri se kahi achchhi aap kavita likhati hongi.. yah kavita aapki dil ke bahut kreeb se gujari...

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bilkul thik pahchana ji aapne main sirf kavita hi likhti hoo.n
or wahi mujhe pasand bhi hain

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bahot achha likhti ho sonia

keep it up

aapka dost
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aapka bhi shukriya jo aap kimti waqt nikal kar aaye

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Re: aapka dost - 15th September 2006, 04:31 PM

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hi,
soniya
aap aacha likhti hai meine aapke kai sher pede hai


teri bevfai ke jakhm jab jab yaad aay,
bebas ask meri ankho mein jhalak aay,
vefao se tola hai usene meri vefao ko,
koi kisi ko is tereh kabhi na aajmay,
derta hai dil ab to apni hi tanhai se,
kahi 'jaam "a" vefa' chalak na jay!!!!!




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bebas dil ji kyoun aap itna mazboor hain apne dil ke hatho.n
aapne tarif ki is ke liye shukriya janab or ligiye maine reply bhi kar diya......... ab to khus hain aap

or haan ese hi aate rahiye ga mei post per
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Re: hi - 15th September 2006, 04:34 PM

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Chand kal bhee tha , aaj bhi hai............
bas chandi ki thandak bad gayee!
jo dil ko sakoon de
wo chahat bhari nazar mil gayee!
raat kal bhee thi
aaj bhee hai..................
bus raat ki
umar bad gayee............
rang kal bhee the aaj bhee hain.........
bas unki kadar bad gayee.
hum kal bhee the
aaj bhee hain
magar..................

Lagta hai
ki mujhe
jindgi mil gayee
yah sab hua hai

............jab se tum mil gaye

sonia ji appko raj ka namaskaar....appki nazam kaya hai ek chalta phirta ehsaas hai.....kaya baat likhi hai appne......bhut khub meri daad kabool karna.......raj.....
raj
aapka reply padkar mujhe bada accha laga
lagta hai kafi dil se likha hai aapne..
aapne itne acche word kahe mere liye aapka bahut bahut thnx
aap ese hi aate rahiyega meri post per

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Re: Re: jab se tum mile - 15th September 2006, 04:37 PM

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tumne mujhe kaha tha ki sirf main waise hi tumhari likhi shayri ki tarif karta hoo.n or tum kuch kha s nahi likh pati........... is liye maine tumhe abhi tak reply nahi diya tha.......... per jab aaj tumhe mere bade bhai mr. rajveer ka reply mil gaya to samjh lo ki ab ye kahne ki jaroorat nahi hai ki tum accha nahi likh pati..... tum bakai main bahut khoob surat likhti ho........... bakai

ek begana sa dost
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oho hazoor e aala aap hain

ye kya baat hui maine likha to tumhe to reply dena hi chahiye na
or aapke bade bahi kab huye mujhe bataya nahi.... abhi abhi mile hain kya poori baat batao .........
or main accha likhti hoo.n tarif ke liye shukriya aapka
ese hi aate rahoge to jaan pahachan bani rahegi

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Re: jab se tum mile - 15th September 2006, 10:20 PM

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..............JAB SE TUM MILE.............

Chand kal bhee tha , aaj bhi hai............
bas chandi ki thandak bad gayee!
jo dil ko sakoon de
wo chahat bhari nazar mil gayee!
raat kal bhee thi
aaj bhee hai..................
bus raat ki
umar bad gayee............
rang kal bhee the aaj bhee hain.........
bas unki kadar bad gayee.
hum kal bhee the
aaj bhee hain
magar..................

Lagta hai
ki mujhe
jindgi mil gayee
yah sab hua hai

............jab se tum mil gaye
marhabba marhabba.........

masha allah kya khoob farmaya hai aapne bhi sonia ji

ab humare pyare mitr dhaval ji, veer ji, dilip ji ne itna kuch likhdiya hai to meri kahin zaroorat hi nahi parti hai ji.

likhiye likhiye hum hai na pasand karne ke liye. ok ji. fikar ko ek side me rakhiye aur likhti rahiye. humari dua aapke pichhe aa rahi hai dont worry

gratse

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