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Thumbs up "POOJA aur DHAVAL ka KALAAM" ....... "PYAAR KA RISHTA" - 4th October 2006, 09:45 AM

"" dostoN aap sabhi ko mera namaskaar. aaj maiN ek aur peshKsh leke haZir huN dosto pyaar ek aisi khusi hai jo sab ke nasib me to nahi hoti aaj ye pyaar hi hai jiski wajah se main kuch likh raha hun warna meri kuch likhne ki hesiyat nahi yaha pe aap sabhi ne meri peshkas ko pasand kiya aaj tak aur ummid hai aaj ki ye peshkas bhi aapko pasand aayegi jispe pooja ne dil se likha hai ehsaas is bar uske hai .....aapke jawab ka besabri se intezar karunga.... """






unke pyaar ka sooroor
aaj bhi hai hum''pe kuch
halka-halka
lal chunar odhi to laga mano
asmaan me lali bikher gaya suraj
dhalta-dhalta
nasha hai unki ankho me jaise
saaki ke haath se jam, bas
chhalka-chhalka
khushbu thhi is gulshan me foolo ki
aaj ye gulshan unke pyaar se lage
mahaka-mahaka
kho gaye hai hum to kahin pe
bin piye sabko lage ye ''DHAVAL'' aaj
bahaka-bahaka
na ji, sirf vaham thha humara ke
door jaa raha hai pyaar ''POOJA'' ka
raffta-raffta
kaas khushi ka har ek lamha
anchal me rahe jaye sada ke liye
simta-simta





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Re: "POOJA aur DHAVAL ka KALAAM" ....... "PYAAR KA RISHTA" - 4th October 2006, 09:51 AM

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"" dostoN aap sabhi ko mera namaskaar. aaj maiN ek aur peshKsh leke haZir huN dosto pyaar ek aisi khusi hai jo sab ke nasib me to nahi hoti aaj ye pyaar hi hai jiski wajah se main kuch likh raha hun warna meri kuch likhne ki hesiyat nahi yaha pe aap sabhi ne meri peshkas ko pasand kiya aaj tak aur ummid hai aaj ki ye peshkas bhi aapko pasand aayegi jispe pooja ne dil se likha hai ehsaas is bar uske hai .....aapke jawab ka besabri se intezar karunga.... """






unke pyaar ka sooroor
aaj bhi hai hum''pe kuch
halka-halka
lal chunar odhi to laga mano
asmaan me lali bikher gaya suraj
dhalta-dhalta
nasha hai unki ankho me jaise
saaki ke haath se jam, bas
chhalka-chhalka
khushbu thhi is gulshan me foolo ki
aaj ye gulshan unke pyaar se lage
mahaka-mahaka
kho gaye hai hum to kahin pe
bin piye sabko lage ye ''DHAVAL'' aaj
bahaka-bahaka
na ji, sirf vaham thha humara ke
door jaa raha hai pyaar ''POOJA'' ka
raffta-raffta
kaas khushi ka har ek lamha
anchal me rahe jaye sada ke liye
simta-simta





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yaar tum dono ne to aaj kamal kar diya bakai bahut khoobsurat likha hai yaar....................
tum dono ka chaman yu.n hi mahkata rahe mari dil se yahi kamana hai.................

dono meri daad kabool karo.... yaro....

apna khyal rakhna
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hi - 4th October 2006, 12:38 PM

unke pyaar ka sooroor
aaj bhi hai hum''pe kuch
halka-halka
lal chunar odhi to laga mano
asmaan me lali bikher gaya suraj
dhalta-dhalta
nasha hai unki ankho me jaise
saaki ke haath se jam, bas
chhalka-chhalka
khushbu thhi is gulshan me foolo ki
aaj ye gulshan unke pyaar se lage
mahaka-mahaka
kho gaye hai hum to kahin pe
bin piye sabko lage ye ''DHAVAL'' aaj
bahaka-bahaka
na ji, sirf vaham thha humara ke
door jaa raha hai pyaar ''POOJA'' ka
raffta-raffta
kaas khushi ka har ek lamha
anchal me rahe jaye sada ke liye
simta-simta

poooooooja or dhaval tum dono ko raj ka bhut sara pyaar......kaya baat hai ajj chaand or chakore saath saath.....phool or khushbu saath saath.....dil or dharkan saath saath......bhut acha laga tum dono ko ek saath parhna.....bhut pyare ehsaas hai khuda se yahi duaa karta hoon ki tum dono ko tumhari manzil zaroor mile.......take care.......ur .....BIG-B.....raj......


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4th October 2006, 01:21 PM

pranam dilip ji,

apne humari iss koshish ko parha and thanks for liking

bas unhi saath chahiye apka.

meine aapki daad kabool kar li. mr. cute ka javab aana baki hai abhi.

ok ji

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4th October 2006, 01:23 PM

pranam veer ji,

thanks for coming and liking

aapka ashirvaad chahiye hume to bas, fir to mil hi jayegi.

ok ji unhi saath dete rahiyega.

grazie

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4th October 2006, 03:14 PM

great work nice feelings

yaar tum dono ne to aaj kamal kar diya bakai bahut khoobsurat likha hai yaar....................
tum dono ka chaman yu.n hi mahkata rahe mari dil se yahi kamana hai.................

dono meri daad kabool karo.... yaro....

apna khyal rakhna
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poooooooja or dhaval tum dono ko raj ka bhut sara pyaar......kaya baat hai ajj chaand or chakore saath saath.....phool or khushbu saath saath.....dil or dharkan saath saath......bhut acha laga tum dono ko ek saath parhna.....bhut pyare ehsaas hai khuda se yahi duaa karta hoon ki tum dono ko tumhari manzil zaroor mile.......take care.......ur .....BIG-B.....raj......


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4th October 2006, 03:19 PM

HI POOJA

aaj tumhari ye peshkas ko maine subha subha hi padhi thi pehle to main jaise tham sa gaya kuch pal k liye bas main dekhta hi raha ye tumhari likhi hui peshkas ko pooja main shayad hi kabhi tum jaisa likh pau aaj aisa laga ehsaas ko bayan karne me mujhse jyada tum mahir ho

bas aaj tumne mujhe bahot khus kar diya

meri daad kubul kijiyega

apna khayal rakhna aur hamesha khus raho

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pooja dear aur dhaval aapp donon hamesha sath rahain meri yehi dua hai aur aik doosrey ka aesa hi sath dete rahain ameen aur aap donon ki sitara wali post bhi parrhi hai woh bhi buhut achi hai yahin reply ker rahi hoon kionki time nahi hai app ko pata hai dhaval reason bhi phir baat hogi ok takecare n always be happy both of u
   
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HI POOJA

aaj tumhari ye peshkas ko maine subha subha hi padhi thi pehle to main jaise tham sa gaya kuch pal k liye bas main dekhta hi raha ye tumhari likhi hui peshkas ko pooja main shayad hi kabhi tum jaisa likh pau aaj aisa laga ehsaas ko bayan karne me mujhse jyada tum mahir ho

bas aaj tumne mujhe bahot khus kar diya

meri daad kubul kijiyega

apna khayal rakhna aur hamesha khus raho

aapka dost
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mr. cute

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grazie

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pooja dear aur dhaval aapp donon hamesha sath rahain meri yehi dua hai aur aik doosrey ka aesa hi sath dete rahain ameen aur aap donon ki sitara wali post bhi parrhi hai woh bhi buhut achi hai yahin reply ker rahi hoon kionki time nahi hai app ko pata hai dhaval reason bhi phir baat hogi ok takecare n always be happy both of u


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pooja and dhaval aap dono ne bahut hi badhiya likha hai.


best regards
aarya

hi aarya aap kaisi ho?

aap yaha aayi aur peshkas ko pasand kiya bahot hi achha laga ispe pooja ne bhaot mehnat ki hai ise banaen me maine to sirf pesh ki hai par is baar ehsaas uske hai

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"" dostoN aap sabhi ko mera namaskaar. aaj maiN ek aur peshKsh leke haZir huN dosto pyaar ek aisi khusi hai jo sab ke nasib me to nahi hoti aaj ye pyaar hi hai jiski wajah se main kuch likh raha hun warna meri kuch likhne ki hesiyat nahi yaha pe aap sabhi ne meri peshkas ko pasand kiya aaj tak aur ummid hai aaj ki ye peshkas bhi aapko pasand aayegi jispe pooja ne dil se likha hai ehsaas is bar uske hai .....aapke jawab ka besabri se intezar karunga.... """






unke pyaar ka sooroor
aaj bhi hai hum''pe kuch
halka-halka
lal chunar odhi to laga mano
asmaan me lali bikher gaya suraj
dhalta-dhalta
nasha hai unki ankho me jaise
saaki ke haath se jam, bas
chhalka-chhalka
khushbu thhi is gulshan me foolo ki
aaj ye gulshan unke pyaar se lage
mahaka-mahaka
kho gaye hai hum to kahin pe
bin piye sabko lage ye ''DHAVAL'' aaj
bahaka-bahaka
na ji, sirf vaham thha humara ke
door jaa raha hai pyaar ''POOJA'' ka
raffta-raffta
kaas khushi ka har ek lamha
anchal me rahe jaye sada ke liye
simta-simta





-pooja & dhaval-

hye mai.n mar java, mera chottu aur gudia (matko) saath. kaya baat hai, bahut khoob, par maine esko phele dekha hi nahi. thanks dhaval eska link dene ke liye. accha lagga dono ladako (fighters) ko saath saath dekh kar.

dua hai yu saath saath raho, etne hi pyar se raho.

lots of love

tum dono ki didi

aree tumey saath dekh kar etne kushi hue ki shayri ki tareef karna hi bhool gaye, ab phir se edit kar rahi hu. ki bahut accha likha hai. jazbaat bahut khoobsurat hai.n

deeeeeeeerrrrrrr saara pyar


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hye mai.n mar java, mera chottu aur gudia (matko) saath. kaya baat hai, bahut khoob, par maine esko phele dekha hi nahi. thanks dhaval eska link dene ke liye. accha lagga dono ladako (fighters) ko saath saath dekh kar.

dua hai yu saath saath raho, etne hi pyar se raho.

lots of love

tum dono ki didi

aree tumey saath dekh kar etne kushi hue ki shayri ki tareef karna hi bhool gaye, ab phir se edit kar rahi hu. ki bahut accha likha hai. jazbaat bahut khoobsurat hai.n

deeeeeeeerrrrrrr saara pyar
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chaliye ji aaj mein bhi javaab de'deti hu.....well moona diiiii, aarya ji, sunita diiiiiii, khwahish ji, dheer ji, sandhya ji.......sabhi ko bahaot bahot shukriya ise pasand karne ke liye. akhir jo mehanat ki hum dono ne safal hui. well hum dono ate rahenge. ek saath. don worry ha.....well dhaval to likhte hi achha hai humesha hi. vo hi idea dete rahate hai. aur hum hai ki unki baat mante rahate hai. hahaha..achha ji shukriya once again. bye

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bhai nice work !! kaafi achi lagi is jugalbandi ki peshkash....!! dili daad haazir hai ...

dheer bhaiya namskaar,

deri se jawaab dene k liye muaafi chhaunGaa..aapko hamari juGalbandhi pasaNd aayi jaanke baRii hi khusHi hui mujhe..

aapki daad sar, ankhoN par dheer bhaiya ..aise hi sath dete raheN..

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pooja and dhaval bahoot achh likha hai

namskaar sandhya ji,

aapko hamari yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi bahot hi khusHi hui..kosisH karenGe ki aage bhi kabhi sath me fir se nazar aayeN hum dono...

apna khaYaal raklheN aur khusH raheN

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chaliye ji aaj mein bhi javaab de'deti hu.....well moona diiiii, aarya ji, sunita diiiiiii, khwahish ji, dheer ji, sandhya ji.......sabhi ko bahaot bahot shukriya ise pasand karne ke liye. akhir jo mehanat ki hum dono ne safal hui. well hum dono ate rahenge. ek saath. don worry ha.....well dhaval to likhte hi achha hai humesha hi. vo hi idea dete rahate hai. aur hum hai ki unki baat mante rahate hai. hahaha..achha ji shukriya once again. bye

grazie

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hmm achha khasa channe ke jhad pe chada diya aapne .

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"" dostoN aap sabhi ko mera namaskaar. aaj maiN ek aur peshKsh leke haZir huN dosto pyaar ek aisi khusi hai jo sab ke nasib me to nahi hoti aaj ye pyaar hi hai jiski wajah se main kuch likh raha hun warna meri kuch likhne ki hesiyat nahi yaha pe aap sabhi ne meri peshkas ko pasand kiya aaj tak aur ummid hai aaj ki ye peshkas bhi aapko pasand aayegi jispe pooja ne dil se likha hai ehsaas is bar uske hai .....aapke jawab ka besabri se intezar karunga.... """






unke pyaar ka sooroor
aaj bhi hai hum''pe kuch
halka-halka
lal chunar odhi to laga mano
asmaan me lali bikher gaya suraj
dhalta-dhalta
nasha hai unki ankho me jaise
saaki ke haath se jam, bas
chhalka-chhalka
khushbu thhi is gulshan me foolo ki
aaj ye gulshan unke pyaar se lage
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bin piye sabko lage ye ''DHAVAL'' aaj
bahaka-bahaka
na ji, sirf vaham thha humara ke
door jaa raha hai pyaar ''POOJA'' ka
raffta-raffta
kaas khushi ka har ek lamha
anchal me rahe jaye sada ke liye
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Oye hoye!!!!!

Marr jaavaan gudd khaa ke!!!!!!! Khush kar ditta ae tussi dona ne ajj!!!!!

Mr. Cute aur unki Miss Cute!!!! tum dono ne hi bahut hi pyari kavita likhi hai... kavita padte hi.. aankhein band ki.. to maano mann me saare drisshh bhi umad ke saamne aa gaye!!!

Bahut sundar, aur behad pyar bhari kavita likhne ke liye mubarakbaad kubool karo!!!

Bhagwan tum dono ki jodi ko humesha salaamat rahe.. aur hum sabko tum dono ki aisi dher saari prem kahaaniyan aur bhi padhne ko millein!!!

Humesha khush raho.. aur humesha saath raho... jo yeh doori hai tum dono ke beech.. dua karti hun khuda se roz hi... woh bhi jaldi khatam ho jaayeei.. Tum dono ko jahaan bhar ki khushiyan naseeb hon!!!

Apna khayal rakhna.. Aaj vaakeyi yeh kavita padh ke mann bahut khush ho gaya... aur dekho khushi ke maare aankhein bhi nam ho gayi!

Lots' of love!!!!!!!!

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wha mere bhai kya bat hai

is rachna ko to mene dekha hi nahi tha dhaval ji aaj ye ishq ke forum mein pehle kisne rakhi mein uska tah-e-dil se sukhriya karna chahta hu ki ese pyaari kalam hamare samne aayi

dhaval ji aapne kya pyaar jtaya hai pooja ji ke baare mein khas karke wo dhaval aur pooja wali lines, hamein aapki ye rachna behad pasand aayi ye behad sabd wese to logo ko ek aam sabd lagta hai par zara socho us sabd ko alag karke be-had , aap sayad samaj gaye hoge ki hamari khushi is rachna se had ke bahar hai ,


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"" dostoN aap sabhi ko mera namaskaar. aaj maiN ek aur peshKsh leke haZir huN dosto pyaar ek aisi khusi hai jo sab ke nasib me to nahi hoti aaj ye pyaar hi hai jiski wajah se main kuch likh raha hun warna meri kuch likhne ki hesiyat nahi yaha pe aap sabhi ne meri peshkas ko pasand kiya aaj tak aur ummid hai aaj ki ye peshkas bhi aapko pasand aayegi jispe pooja ne dil se likha hai ehsaas is bar uske hai .....aapke jawab ka besabri se intezar karunga.... """






unke pyaar ka sooroor
aaj bhi hai hum''pe kuch
halka-halka
lal chunar odhi to laga mano
asmaan me lali bikher gaya suraj
dhalta-dhalta
nasha hai unki ankho me jaise
saaki ke haath se jam, bas
chhalka-chhalka
khushbu thhi is gulshan me foolo ki
aaj ye gulshan unke pyaar se lage
mahaka-mahaka
kho gaye hai hum to kahin pe
bin piye sabko lage ye ''DHAVAL'' aaj
bahaka-bahaka
na ji, sirf vaham thha humara ke
door jaa raha hai pyaar ''POOJA'' ka
raffta-raffta
kaas khushi ka har ek lamha
anchal me rahe jaye sada ke liye
simta-simta





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Oye hoye!!!!!

Marr jaavaan gudd khaa ke!!!!!!! Khush kar ditta ae tussi dona ne ajj!!!!!

Mr. Cute aur unki Miss Cute!!!! tum dono ne hi bahut hi pyari kavita likhi hai... kavita padte hi.. aankhein band ki.. to maano mann me saare drisshh bhi umad ke saamne aa gaye!!!

Bahut sundar, aur behad pyar bhari kavita likhne ke liye mubarakbaad kubool karo!!!

Bhagwan tum dono ki jodi ko humesha salaamat rahe.. aur hum sabko tum dono ki aisi dher saari prem kahaaniyan aur bhi padhne ko millein!!!

Humesha khush raho.. aur humesha saath raho... jo yeh doori hai tum dono ke beech.. dua karti hun khuda se roz hi... woh bhi jaldi khatam ho jaayeei.. Tum dono ko jahaan bhar ki khushiyan naseeb hon!!!

Apna khayal rakhna.. Aaj vaakeyi yeh kavita padh ke mann bahut khush ho gaya... aur dekho khushi ke maare aankhein bhi nam ho gayi!

Lots' of love!!!!!!!!

~Tumhari Di!!

namskaar priya di,

pehle to maiN yeH kehna chhata huN ki maiN bahot khusH huN kyuNki aapko ise paRH ke bahot khusHii mili..aapki in pyaar bhari duaoN ke liye mere pass koi lafz nahiN didi..aur shuKriyaaH maiN aapka karunGaa nahiN kyuNki apno ko shuKriyaaH bhi kaise keh sakta huN?bas itna hi kahunGa ki aap yuuNhi sath dete rahiyenGa..kosisH karenGe hum dono ki aage sath me milkar aur bhi kuch likheN...

filhaal to aap chale gaye hoNGe mujhe pata ahi kahaaN teeth ki safai........>>> hm pata hai pata hai don worry

ok di apna khaYaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

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is rachna ko to mene dekha hi nahi tha dhaval ji aaj ye ishq ke forum mein pehle kisne rakhi mein uska tah-e-dil se sukhriya karna chahta hu ki ese pyaari kalam hamare samne aayi

dhaval ji aapne kya pyaar jtaya hai pooja ji ke baare mein khas karke wo dhaval aur pooja wali lines, hamein aapki ye rachna behad pasand aayi ye behad sabd wese to logo ko ek aam sabd lagta hai par zara socho us sabd ko alag karke be-had , aap sayad samaj gaye hoge ki hamari khushi is rachna se had ke bahar hai ,


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dear merul ji namskaar,

jee maiN samjh sakta huN aapki khusHii ko dost ..is kosisH ko itne pyaar se aur dil se paRHa aapne bahot hi khusHii hui aur ismeiN ziyadaH mehnat to pooja ne hi ki hai likhne ki to sara credit bhi usiko jaata hai .bas dost aise hi dilse aage bhi paRhte rahiyenGaa...

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