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6th July 2010, 02:08 PM
Ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ghayal ka aadaab...!! Chand jazbaaton ke saath fir se pesh huN.. ek ghayal mehfil le kar...!! galtiyoN ke liye maafi chaahuNga...!!
Taareef me unki taareekheN badal gayiN,, dil to wahi tha nigaaheN badal gayiN,, nazar me, to kabhi dil me qaid hue hum,, khata-e-ishq ki sazaa rahi, salaakheN badal gayiN,, na haalaat badle, na haalat badli humari,, bas dekhne wali aankheN badal gayiN…………….!!!!!
Tera ehsaas bhi jab haath lagaata hai mujhe,
Meri izz* ka wo husool** dilaata hai mujhe.
*kamjori, weakness..! **realization, ehsaas..!
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
RaqiboN ke qurb* se bhadakna unke badan ka,
Qayamat ki tazalli** ki tarah jalaata hai mujhe.
*nazdeeki, nearness...! **jyoti, ray…!
Kya tawakko* ho mujhe,pyaas bujhegi is dil ki,
Jo pilaane wala hi pyaasa nazar aata hai mujhe.
*umeed, hope...!
Baazaar-e-jist* se to uthaa le gayi kazaa** hume,
“ghayal” hai tu! Har khareedar bataata hai mujhe.
*zindagi ka baazaar,market of life..! **maut,, death..!
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6th July 2010, 06:36 PM
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
Bohat khoob Lucky ji.....ehsaas bilkul naye naye se lage aapke ashaar me...
yeh do sher bohat pasand aaye mujhe,
yuhi likhte rahiye....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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6th July 2010, 10:00 PM
hi lucky,
how are you? very well written. really nice one.
keep writing.
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6th July 2010, 10:39 PM
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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar
Ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ghayal ka aadaab...!! Chand jazbaaton ke saath fir se pesh huN.. ek ghayal mehfil le kar...!! galtiyoN ke liye maafi chaahuNga...!!
Taareef me unki taareekheN badal gayiN,, dil to wahi tha nigaaheN badal gayiN,, nazar me, to kabhi dil me qaid hue hum,, khata-e-ishq ki sazaa rahi, salaakheN badal gayiN,, na haalaat badle, na haalat badli humari,, bas dekhne wali aankheN badal gayiN…………….!!!!!
Tera ehsaas bhi jab haath lagaata hai mujhe,
Meri izz* ka wo husool** dilaata hai mujhe.
*kamjori, weakness..! **realization, ehsaas..!
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
RaqiboN ke qurb* se bhadakna unke badan ka,
Qayamat ki tazalli** ki tarah jalaata hai mujhe.
*nazdeeki, nearness...! **jyoti, ray…!
Kya tawakko* ho mujhe,pyaas bujhegi is dil ki,
Jo pilaane wala hi pyaasa nazar aata hai mujhe.
*umeed, hope...!
Baazaar-e-jist* se to uthaa le gayi kazaa** hume,
“ghayal” hai tu! Har khareedar bataata hai mujhe.
*zindagi ka baazaar,market of life..! **maut,, death..!
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lucky bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob saare hi ashar khoob hain dil se daad
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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6th July 2010, 11:56 PM
Wah wah Ghayal saheb kamaal kar diya aapne Subhan_allah kya nayab tohfa diya hai mehfil ko shuruwati 3 sher to bas ghazab dha rahe hai....
Tera ehsaas bhi jab haath lagaata hai mujhe,
Meri izz* ka wo husool** dilaata hai mujhe.
*kamjori, weakness..! **realization, ehsaas..!
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
Dil se daad kabool kare hamari janab.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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7th July 2010, 10:51 AM
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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
RaqiboN ke qurb* se bhadakna unke badan ka,
Qayamat ki tazalli** ki tarah jalaata hai mujhe.
Kya tawakko* ho mujhe,pyaas bujhegi is dil ki,
Jo pilaane wala hi pyaasa nazar aata hai mujhe.
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Lucky Ji.....Aadaab ! bahut zabardust rahi aapki yeh peshkash.....sabhi ashaaroN me jaha taazgi nazar aati hai......wahi khayaloN me aapne ghazal ko nayi unchaai di hai......adaayegi toh humesha ki tarha purasar rahi aapki.......
dil se daad hazir hai ........qubuul farmaayeN....
yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath .......aap humesha aate rahen....
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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7th July 2010, 11:53 AM
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Originally Posted by zainy
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
Bohat khoob Lucky ji.....ehsaas bilkul naye naye se lage aapke ashaar me...
yeh do sher bohat pasand aaye mujhe,
yuhi likhte rahiye....
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zainy ji kosish to yahi thi khayal kuch naye hoN, aapko aisa laga, jaan kar khushi hui , bas yuNhi padhne ki jehmiyat uthati raheN aap....!!
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7th July 2010, 04:26 PM
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Originally Posted by Parul
hi lucky,
how are you? very well written. really nice one.
keep writing.
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aap aaye bahaar aayi, parul d, maiN theek huN aap kaisi hain...?? bahut waqt ke baad aapko yahaaN dekha hai.... waise jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko mera likha pasand aaya....!!
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8th July 2010, 11:54 AM
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lucky bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob saare hi ashar khoob hain dil se daad
duaon ke saath
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Ishq ji pranaam,
aapki daad humare sar aaNkhoN pe bas yuNhi aapki duaayeN saath chalti raheN...!!
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8th July 2010, 12:49 PM
lucky ji namste bhot khub rahi aapki peshkesh yakeen maniye aap jeso se bhot kuch seekhne ko milta hai bhot hi khubsurat peshkesh rahi ek sher jo muje bhot pasand aaya
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
bhot hi khubsurat raha
to itni achi gazal aapne hme di hai to ek sher to kehna hi padega
to pesh-e-khidmat hai
aaj vo bhi muje buzhdil keh gya
jisse main badi shiddat se lada tha
pawan(shayari)
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8th July 2010, 02:51 PM
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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
Kya tawakko* ho mujhe,pyaas bujhegi is dil ki,
Jo pilaane wala hi pyaasa nazar aata hai mujhe.
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Kya baat hai ... dil ko chu gayi... sach..
waise ghayal ji, aapne hame pahchana ya nahi... bahut purana rishta hai hamara...
I hope u remember.
"salika ho gar bhigi aankho ko padhne ka to.....
aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!"
Tarang
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beautiful moment.........
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8th July 2010, 06:01 PM
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Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar
Ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ghayal ka aadaab...!! Chand jazbaaton ke saath fir se pesh huN.. ek ghayal mehfil le kar...!! galtiyoN ke liye maafi chaahuNga...!!
Taareef me unki taareekheN badal gayiN,, dil to wahi tha nigaaheN badal gayiN,, nazar me, to kabhi dil me qaid hue hum,, khata-e-ishq ki sazaa rahi, salaakheN badal gayiN,, na haalaat badle, na haalat badli humari,, bas dekhne wali aankheN badal gayiN…………….!!!!!
Tera ehsaas bhi jab haath lagaata hai mujhe,
Meri izz* ka wo husool** dilaata hai mujhe.
*kamjori, weakness..! **realization, ehsaas..!
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
RaqiboN ke qurb* se bhadakna unke badan ka,
Qayamat ki tazalli** ki tarah jalaata hai mujhe.
*nazdeeki, nearness...! **jyoti, ray…!
Kya tawakko* ho mujhe,pyaas bujhegi is dil ki,
Jo pilaane wala hi pyaasa nazar aata hai mujhe.
*umeed, hope...!
Baazaar-e-jist* se to uthaa le gayi kazaa** hume,
“ghayal” hai tu! Har khareedar bataata hai mujhe.
*zindagi ka baazaar,market of life..! **maut,, death..!
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Lucky,
superb job dear......loved it....keep writing..... take care...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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9th July 2010, 01:28 PM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Wah wah Ghayal saheb kamaal kar diya aapne Subhan_allah kya nayab tohfa diya hai mehfil ko shuruwati 3 sher to bas ghazab dha rahe hai....
Tera ehsaas bhi jab haath lagaata hai mujhe,
Meri izz* ka wo husool** dilaata hai mujhe.
*kamjori, weakness..! **realization, ehsaas..!
meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
Dil se daad kabool kare hamari janab.
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sajid sahab ye humari khusnaseebi hi hai ki aapko humara ek v sher pasand aaye, jaan kar khushi hui ki apko humara kalaam pasand aaya, umeed karta huN ki aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate raheNge....!!
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9th July 2010, 04:57 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Lucky Ji.....Aadaab ! bahut zabardust rahi aapki yeh peshkash.....sabhi ashaaroN me jaha taazgi nazar aati hai......wahi khayaloN me aapne ghazal ko nayi unchaai di hai......adaayegi toh humesha ki tarha purasar rahi aapki.......
dil se daad hazir hai ........qubuul farmaayeN....
yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath .......aap humesha aate rahen....
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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naresh ji pranaam,
ye to humari khusnaseebi hai ki aapko ye chand jazbaat aur unke alfaaz pasand aaye, bas umeed karta hun ki aage v aapka saath kuch yuNhi bana rahega....!!
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11th July 2010, 12:27 PM
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lucky ji namste bhot khub rahi aapki peshkesh yakeen maniye aap jeso se bhot kuch seekhne ko milta hai bhot hi khubsurat peshkesh rahi ek sher jo muje bhot pasand aaya
LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.
bhot hi khubsurat raha
to itni achi gazal aapne hme di hai to ek sher to kehna hi padega
to pesh-e-khidmat hai
aaj vo bhi muje buzhdil keh gya
jisse main badi shiddat se lada tha
pawan(shayari)
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pawan sahab ye humari khsnaseebi ki aapko peshkash pasand ayi, bas yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye aap....!!
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11th July 2010, 12:30 PM
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Originally Posted by khamosh_aawaz
Kya baat hai ... dil ko chu gayi... sach..
waise ghayal ji, aapne hame pahchana ya nahi... bahut purana rishta hai hamara...
I hope u remember.
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are janaab itni bri yaadasht v nahiN ki aapko bhool jaayeN, waise bhoole bhatke aap yahaaN kaise pahuNch gaye sadiyoN ke baad...?? kaise haiN aap...??
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11th July 2010, 12:32 PM
lamha ji bahut bahut shukriya ki aap itne dinoN baad humari mehfil me aayin aur aapko likha hua pasand aya, bas yahi umeed rahegi ki aage v bhi aapka saath yuNhi bana rahega....!!
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