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Originally posted by anish_ekshayar
doston
ek gajal jo kahin dhool mai dabi padi thee jise kabhi dil ke durd kee syaahi se likha tha maine aaj use pesh kar raha hun
Aagaz abhi hua bhi na tha ke anjaam ho gaya !
Rahe wafa pe chalke mai nakam ho gaya !
Achha hua jo ishq mai badnaam ho gaya !
Koi janta na tha shahar mai, ab naam ho gaya !
Ab sochta hun mai ki kahan bhool ho gai..
Kyunkar mera jeena bhi ab haraam ho gaya !
Pahle tha apne dil pe ikhtiyaar likin ab
Kambakht namurraad be-lagam ho gaya !
Tujhse mila tha to haath mai ek phool tha mere
Tujhse bichhad ke haath mai ek jaam ho gaya !
Khamosh nigaho mai bas ek soch hai baki
Kal jispe naaz tha kyun beimaan ho gaya !
Karni thi bahut baate bahut si shikayten
Wo aaya samne to bas salaam ho gaya !
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anish ji,
bahut khoob! its awesome n wonderfully expressed. kaun sa sher chunu, jab ki its complete in all. loved reading each word of it.ek sher kabhi likha hua aaj aapko padhkar yaad aa gaya. wud share it with u..........
gamhe-ashiquie mein jo kalam ka sahara mila
doobti kasti ko jaise koi kinara mila
mehkhannon mein jakar jis dil ko bhi tatola
mujhe wo dil hi mohabbat ka mara mila!
keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too n keep penning down. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
roshani