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ulfat kee lash ... - 20th May 2006, 05:50 PM

Dear friends
Aajkal ishq ka jo alam hai wo kuchh apne lafjon mai pesh kar raha hun ummid hai aap sahmat honge
Mohobbat kee lash

Har or mohobbat naam liye rangraliya mania jaati hai
Ulfat ko ab badnaam kiye ek aag bhujai jaati hai
Laila majnoo kee baaton ko sab log kahani kahte hain
Majnoo ko pagal kahte hain laila bikwai jaati hai
Karte hain wafa kee baate wo jo naam-e-wafa bhi na jane
Ab to wafa kee kasm de kar ek pyaas bhujhai jaati hain
Najre hoti hai jism pe bas or pyaar kee baaten karte hain
Jina bhi inko aata nahi marne kee kasme khai jaati hain !
Dil tod ke roj mohobbat ka dil todne wale darte hain
Aaj koi or hai banho main kal duji lai jati hai !
Ulfat ka matlab aaj yanha shohrat se joda jaata hai
Jebe dekhi jaati hai or boli lagai jati hai !
Kuchh reet see hai jo chal nikli hai har or mohobbat lutati hai
Ijjat ka soda kar ke ulfat kee lash bichai jaati hai


anish

tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko !
meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


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Re: ulfat kee lash ... - 20th May 2006, 06:58 PM

ANEESH BHAI
bahoot khooob....tasveer ka doosra pehloo dikihaya hai aapne...

mohabbat bani hai tijarat jab se shehron mein
hatheli par rakh kar log imaan ghoomte hai.

apna likha yeh sher barbas jehan mein ubhar aaya aapki tehreer padh kar....aur apni ek tajatreen gazal bhi yaad aa gayi,.,,,gaur farmaiyega....

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meri daad kubool kijiye...
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22nd May 2006, 10:38 AM

dear manoj bhai


aap har gajal ko sarah kar meri hosla afjai karte hee rahen hain shayad ab tak yanha kayam hun to aapki hee wajah se or kuchh dost jo har waqt mujhe ek nai behatar gajal likhne ke liye prerit karte hain ye gajal maine yun hee likh de ek baar main hee jo man main ata raha likhta raha pata nahi kaisi hai par dil se likhi thee


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meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


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22nd May 2006, 08:42 PM

Anish ji,

aapki baat sahi hain. aur andaaz-e-bayaan bhi pasand aaya mujhe.

Karte hain wafa kee baate wo jo naam-e-wafa bhi na jane
Ab to wafa kee kasm de kar ek pyaas bhujhai jaati hain

Ulfat ka matlab aaj yanha shohrat se joda jaata hai
Jebe dekhi jaati hai or boli lagai jati hai !

bahot khoob dost. ab woh baat nahi rahi. aaise hi likhte raho aur apna khyaal rakho.

manoj ji ka pesh kiya huya sher bhi bahut pasand aaya.
   
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23rd May 2006, 10:54 AM

Anish ji
kaise hai aap?

sacch likh diya hai apne aaj to

"Dil tod ke roj mohobbat ka dil todne wale darte hain
Aaj koi or hai banho main kal duji lai jati hai !"

sacch aisa hi kucch hota hai mohabbat to sirf naam reh gaya hai..
aapka likkha pasand aaya mujhe


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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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23rd May 2006, 11:00 PM

hi devangi

tumse yanha milkar behad kushi hui ke tum meri is gajal ko bhi sarahne yanha aai thnx for reply and undrestand what i want to say dil se nikli is awaj ko naye aayam tabhi milte hain jab unhe aap doston ka pyaar mile thnx


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23rd May 2006, 11:27 PM

hi shweta

main achha hun tum kaisi ho ummid hai theek hogi shukriya ke tumne is rachna ko bhi pasnd kiya thnx mera kuchh likha tumhe pasnd aaya


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