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zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai - 30th January 2006, 09:26 PM
chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain
zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai
lamhe sab pighal rahe hain

jinko meree tabahee ka intazar tha
main mita to chehre badal rahe hain
meree fana ka sabab too hai jo un ko ras nahee
main jal raha hoon to woh jal rahe hain

ankhen meree tere gamon ka ghar hai
ansoo tere hain jo yahan pal rahe hain
log dhuyan dekh ke soch rahe hain kahan jayen
makeen bachayen ki makan bacahayen
meree ankhon ke aab se jo bujhee nahee
us aag ke liye panee kahan se layen
ab to tamasha dekhte hain poochte hain
door khare bas yahee sochte hain
ankh jal rahee hain ki ansoo jal arhe hain
chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain

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Re: zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai - 31st January 2006, 09:21 AM
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chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain
zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai
lamhe sab pighal rahe hain

jinko meree tabahee ka intazar tha
main mita to chehre badal rahe hain
meree fana ka sabab too hai jo un ko ras nahee
main jal raha hoon to woh jal rahe hain

ankhen meree tere gamon ka ghar hai
ansoo tere hain jo yahan pal rahe hain
log dhuyan dekh ke soch rahe hain kahan jayen
makeen bachayen ki makan bacahayen
meree ankhon ke aab se jo bujhee nahee
us aag ke liye panee kahan se layen
ab to tamasha dekhte hain poochte hain
door khare bas yahee sochte hain
ankh jal rahee hain ki ansoo jal arhe hain
chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain

Anil
anil ji
bhaut hi achha likha hai pahli baar aapko itne dard mai likhte dekha .dil ko chu gaya
keep writing
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Re: zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai - 31st January 2006, 09:45 AM
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chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain
zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai
lamhe sab pighal rahe hain

jinko meree tabahee ka intazar tha
main mita to chehre badal rahe hain
meree fana ka sabab too hai jo un ko ras nahee
main jal raha hoon to woh jal rahe hain

ankhen meree tere gamon ka ghar hai
ansoo tere hain jo yahan pal rahe hain
log dhuyan dekh ke soch rahe hain kahan jayen
makeen bachayen ki makan bacahayen
meree ankhon ke aab se jo bujhee nahee
us aag ke liye panee kahan se layen
ab to tamasha dekhte hain poochte hain
door khare bas yahee sochte hain
ankh jal rahee hain ki ansoo jal arhe hain
chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain

Anil
bhaut khoob anil bhai bahut dard jhalak raha hai aisa hi likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye take care of urself

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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Re: zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai - 31st January 2006, 09:50 AM
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chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain
zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai
lamhe sab pighal rahe hain

jinko meree tabahee ka intazar tha
main mita to chehre badal rahe hain
meree fana ka sabab too hai jo un ko ras nahee
main jal raha hoon to woh jal rahe hain

Anil
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these lines touch my heart.please keep writing.ab tao hum apke fan ho gaye hai
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Re: zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai - 31st January 2006, 04:25 PM
chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain
zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai
lamhe sab pighal rahe hain

sorrows n happiness are part n parcel in ones life, but we still hv to move on cum wat may. beautifully expressed in ur magical words.

jinko meree tabahee ka intazar tha
main mita to chehre badal rahe hain
meree fana ka sabab too hai jo un ko ras nahee
main jal raha hoon to woh jal rahe hain

wow. wat a awesome flow of thoughts.

ankhen meree tere gamon ka ghar hai
ansoo tere hain jo yahan pal rahe hain
log dhuyan dekh ke soch rahe hain kahan jayen
makeen bachayen ki makan bacahayen

ek sher appna likha hua yaad aa gay aapki yeh chaar panktiyaan parh kar. here it goes as
badi dur talak jaati rahi roshani
badi der talak raha uthta duwaan
har kisi ne liya roshani ka lutf
par kisi ne na dekha mera dil jalta hua!


meree ankhon ke aab se jo bujhee nahee
us aag ke liye panee kahan se layen
ab to tamasha dekhte hain poochte hain
door khare bas yahee sochte hain
ankh jal rahee hain ki ansoo jal arhe hain

a painful thought but its awesomely expressed.

chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain

Anil

anil ji,
ur thoughts lead me to go go deep in it. though u do have a positive approach in ur writings but its so painful tht it just goes deep inside me n shivers me. i do love reading ur painful thoughts as wen u express wat u have in ur heart u feel little bit relieved but my dear friend its better to be happy the way god has kept us. this world is full of bitterness.ppl n ur closed ones wnt ever be urs. they r just gonna watch u n wont let u out of ur depth of sorrows. neways as usual ur thoughts are always awesomly expressed. keep penning down n keep sharing among us take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
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thanks - 31st January 2006, 07:53 PM
shardha mehul roop roshni kaise shukriya karoon tumhara bahut se log nahee parhte mujeh maine dekha hai. par ye achha lagata hai jo parh rahe hain bahut dil se parh rahe hain mujhe nayee himmat nahee shayree de jate hain aap log aur roshani tum se to main meree shayree ke dobara manee pata hoon aur tum ko apane andar kee baat lagtee hai to mujhe bahut achha lagata hai sab log jo mujhe man dete hain us se main bahut bara ho jata hoon khud ko dekhene ke liye bhee sar uthana parata hai
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31st January 2006, 08:04 PM
ham jal rahe thay isiliye
ki tujh tak roshani pahunche
khuchh tu khush hota rahe
kuchh mujh tak pahunche
teri khushi dekh ke
saara gam bhool gaye..
ek muskurahat se tere
ham rona bhool gaye...


Anil ji.. aapne bahoot achha likha hai.. upar likhi lines se aapke kalaam ka koi sampark ho na ho.. bas aapko padhte hue ye ehsaas ubhar aaye...

aap uhi likhate rahiyega..

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bahut pyara - 31st January 2006, 08:16 PM
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3rd March 2006, 03:31 PM
Anil ji

phir se aapki post ne dil choo liya
bahut accha likha hai

keep wrting
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3rd March 2006, 04:57 PM
bahaut hi badhiya...
aapka aaghaaz mujhe behad pasand aaya....

chaand kee tarah thande the jo pal
hizr main taseer badal rahe hain
zindgee ek aag main jal rahee hai
lamhe sab pighal rahe hain

yeh chaar lines mere dil ko choo gayi aur chand lafzon me zindagi ko bayaan kar gayi...
likhte rahiyega...

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bahut bahut shukria - 4th March 2006, 08:19 AM
thanks ashu bas parhte raho taki likhte rahane ka dil bana rahe


farhana shukriya khas tour pe aghaz pasand karne ke liye
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aapko humne pehale bhi kai baar parha hai aur
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shuklriya - 28th May 2006, 07:25 AM
kamayani meree nazm ko parne ke liye bar bar parhne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya apana khayal rakhana aur meree shayri ke sath rahana sada
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