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Har ghar me ik bahna de - 24th August 2010, 11:59 AM

HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE



SAB KO AISA GAHNA DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE,
MANGAL KAMNA KARTI VO , HAATH ME RAAKHI PAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

BHARUN HATTYA SE NA MAARO, KOKH SE NIKLE JINDA VO,
USE SALAMAT RAHNA DE ,HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

FAILA KE APNA DAMAN , VO JO KHUSHIA.N MANGTI HAI,
HAR SUKH USKE SAHNA* DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

GHAR ME SIRF HO BETA TO , MAA KE PANKH ADHOORE HAI.N,
MAA KO BULANAD UDAAN MILE , USE DOOSRA DAINA** DE .
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

*ANGAN(SAHAN)
**PANKH (PAR)



हर घर में इक बहना दे.


सब को ऐसा गह्ना दे, हर घर में इक बह्ना दे,
मंगल कामना करती वो, हाथ में राखी पहना दे.
हर घर में इक बहना दे.
भ्रुण हत्त्या से न मारो,कोख से निकले जिन्दा वो,
उसे सलामत रह्ना दे, हर घर में इक बह्ना दे. हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.
फ़ैलाके अपना दामन, वो जो खुशिआं मांगती है,
हर सुख उसके सह्ना॰ दे, हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.
हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.
घर मे सिर्फ़ हो बेटा तो , मां के पंख अधूरे हैं,
उसे बुलंद उडान मिले, उसे दूसरा डैना॰॰ दे.
हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.

॰अन्गन(सहन)

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24th August 2010, 12:19 PM

SAB KO AISA GAHNA DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE,
MANGAL KAMNA KARTI VO , HAATH ME RAAKHI PAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.


Very Nice Poetry... Praveen Ji ! Rakhi Ke Parv Ko Gaurvaanwit karti ... Aapki Shabd Rachna Mujhe behad Pasand Aai... Aise hi likhte rahen ... Aage Bhi...

Nice Creation....

Duaaon ke saath...




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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24th August 2010, 12:21 PM

Bohat khoob Parveen sahab..........

Acchi lagi aapki yeh rachna............





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HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE



SAB KO AISA GAHNA DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE,
MANGAL KAMNA KARTI VO , HAATH ME RAAKHI PAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

BHARUN HATTYA SE NA MAARO, KOKH SE NIKLE JINDA VO,
USE SALAMAT RAHNA DE ,HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

FAILA KE APNA DAMAN , VO JO KHUSHIA.N MANGTI HAI,
HAR SUKH USKE SAHNA* DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

GHAR ME SIRF HO BETA TO , MAA KE PANKH ADHOORE HAI.N,
MAA KO BULANAD UDAAN MILE , USE DOOSRA DAINA** DE .
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.

*ANGAN(SAHAN)
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komal bhai
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bahut achha likha hai bas itna hi kahunga ki shastron me likha hai ki jahan naari ka sammaan hota hai vahan khushiyan nivas karti hain ye baat sirf shastron me hi likhi na rah jaaye sabke man me utar jaani chahiye yahi prayaas hota rahe
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24th August 2010, 12:32 PM

Naresh ji . aapka bahut bahut shukria. aapne izhaar-e-jazbaat ko pasand kia .thanks bhai saheb.


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Bohat khoob Parveen sahab..........

Acchi lagi aapki yeh rachna............

Respected Zainy ji . tah-e-dil se shukargujar hoo.n aapne is rachna ko saraaha.


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Respected Zainy ji . tah-e-dil se shukargujar hoo.n aapne is rachna ko saraaha.
Komal sahab,

Maine tou hamesha Sdc ke har member ki acchi rachna ko tah-e-dil se daad di hai,...aur jo baat theek nahi lagti usay bhi thread per hi keh deti huuN...

Accha likhne waloN ka Sdc per hamesha se swagat hai....yeh baat maiN Sdc ke moderator ke naate keh rahi huuN..

Yuhi likhte rahiye

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thanks ji ..............................


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Love Happy Raksha Bandhan !! - 24th August 2010, 01:41 PM

Bahut khoob likha Sir..
har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aapne is kamaal ki rachna se dil khush kar diya !!
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Smile Superb - 24th August 2010, 04:41 PM

parveen jii, behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne, dil ki gahraiyoN se daad hazir hai, har bhai ke paas behan aur har behan ke paas bhai jaroor ho.

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bahut shukria ishk bhaai ..Aapki ek ek baat sahi hai. in ahsaaso.n ko aage badhana bhi bahut jaroorii hai..thanks for daad..


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parveen jii, behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne, dil ki gahraiyoN se daad hazir hai, har bhai ke paas behan aur har behan ke paas bhai jaroor ho.

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Shukria abhinav ji aapka.........................


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