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Har ghar me ik bahna de -
24th August 2010, 11:59 AM
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE
SAB KO AISA GAHNA DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE,
MANGAL KAMNA KARTI VO , HAATH ME RAAKHI PAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
BHARUN HATTYA SE NA MAARO, KOKH SE NIKLE JINDA VO,
USE SALAMAT RAHNA DE ,HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
FAILA KE APNA DAMAN , VO JO KHUSHIA.N MANGTI HAI,
HAR SUKH USKE SAHNA* DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
GHAR ME SIRF HO BETA TO , MAA KE PANKH ADHOORE HAI.N,
MAA KO BULANAD UDAAN MILE , USE DOOSRA DAINA** DE .
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
*ANGAN(SAHAN)
**PANKH (PAR)
हर घर में इक बहना दे.
सब को ऐसा गह्ना दे, हर घर में इक बह्ना दे,
मंगल कामना करती वो, हाथ में राखी पहना दे.
हर घर में इक बहना दे.
भ्रुण हत्त्या से न मारो,कोख से निकले जिन्दा वो,
उसे सलामत रह्ना दे, हर घर में इक बह्ना दे. हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.
फ़ैलाके अपना दामन, वो जो खुशिआं मांगती है,
हर सुख उसके सह्ना॰ दे, हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.
हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.
घर मे सिर्फ़ हो बेटा तो , मां के पंख अधूरे हैं,
उसे बुलंद उडान मिले, उसे दूसरा डैना॰॰ दे.
हर घर में इक बह्ना दे.
॰अन्गन(सहन)
॰॰पन्ख (पर)
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24th August 2010, 12:19 PM
SAB KO AISA GAHNA DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE,
MANGAL KAMNA KARTI VO , HAATH ME RAAKHI PAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
Very Nice Poetry... Praveen Ji ! Rakhi Ke Parv Ko Gaurvaanwit karti ... Aapki Shabd Rachna Mujhe behad Pasand Aai... Aise hi likhte rahen ... Aage Bhi...
Nice Creation....
Duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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24th August 2010, 12:21 PM
Bohat khoob Parveen sahab..........
Acchi lagi aapki yeh rachna............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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24th August 2010, 12:23 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by parveen komal
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE
SAB KO AISA GAHNA DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE,
MANGAL KAMNA KARTI VO , HAATH ME RAAKHI PAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
BHARUN HATTYA SE NA MAARO, KOKH SE NIKLE JINDA VO,
USE SALAMAT RAHNA DE ,HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
FAILA KE APNA DAMAN , VO JO KHUSHIA.N MANGTI HAI,
HAR SUKH USKE SAHNA* DE , HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
GHAR ME SIRF HO BETA TO , MAA KE PANKH ADHOORE HAI.N,
MAA KO BULANAD UDAAN MILE , USE DOOSRA DAINA** DE .
HAR GHAR ME IK BAHNA DE.
*ANGAN(SAHAN)
**PANKH (PAR)
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komal bhai
radhe radhe
bahut achha likha hai bas itna hi kahunga ki shastron me likha hai ki jahan naari ka sammaan hota hai vahan khushiyan nivas karti hain ye baat sirf shastron me hi likhi na rah jaaye sabke man me utar jaani chahiye yahi prayaas hota rahe
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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24th August 2010, 12:32 PM
Naresh ji . aapka bahut bahut shukria. aapne izhaar-e-jazbaat ko pasand kia .thanks bhai saheb.
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24th August 2010, 12:35 PM
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Bohat khoob Parveen sahab..........
Acchi lagi aapki yeh rachna............
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Respected Zainy ji . tah-e-dil se shukargujar hoo.n aapne is rachna ko saraaha.
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24th August 2010, 12:46 PM
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Respected Zainy ji . tah-e-dil se shukargujar hoo.n aapne is rachna ko saraaha.
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Komal sahab,
Maine tou hamesha Sdc ke har member ki acchi rachna ko tah-e-dil se daad di hai,...aur jo baat theek nahi lagti usay bhi thread per hi keh deti huuN...
Accha likhne waloN ka Sdc per hamesha se swagat hai....yeh baat maiN Sdc ke moderator ke naate keh rahi huuN..
Yuhi likhte rahiye
Khush rahiye....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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24th August 2010, 12:49 PM
thanks ji ..............................
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Happy Raksha Bandhan !! -
24th August 2010, 01:41 PM
Bahut khoob likha Sir..
har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aapne is kamaal ki rachna se dil khush kar diya !!
shukriya aapka !!
Kuch tasveere post karna chahunga main apni pyari beheno ke sath -
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" Mushkil Bahut hai har waqt 'Rubru-e-Haqeeqat' rehna
Jeene ke liye kuch 'VEHAM' zaruri hain ! "
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Superb -
24th August 2010, 04:41 PM
parveen jii, behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne, dil ki gahraiyoN se daad hazir hai, har bhai ke paas behan aur har behan ke paas bhai jaroor ho.
regards
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th August 2010, 04:44 PM
bahut shukria ishk bhaai ..Aapki ek ek baat sahi hai. in ahsaaso.n ko aage badhana bhi bahut jaroorii hai..thanks for daad..
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24th August 2010, 10:01 PM
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parveen jii, behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne, dil ki gahraiyoN se daad hazir hai, har bhai ke paas behan aur har behan ke paas bhai jaroor ho.
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thanks sunita ji, aapki dua bhi kubool ho ye meri kaamna hai.
with regards KOMAL
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25th August 2010, 10:37 AM
Shukria abhinav ji aapka.........................
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