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GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
13th September 2006, 01:34 AM
doston yahaan shayad sirf khayaal hi mere hain jo karamaat dikh rahi hai wo kunal bhaiya ke kalaam ka kamaal hai.umeed kart5a hun ki aap sabhi ko ye kalaam pasand aayega.
BarsoN kahaN beete abhi jo yaad teri dhundli nazar aaye… hawa ban seene ko cheere kabhi ankhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaye.. par waqt bhi kahaN marham yaadoN pe… askh to bahenge toote vaadoN pe… hai itni si ilteza us khuda se , is hawa main ye jism bikhar jaye.. askhoN ke sath jaan bhi nazron se utar jaye… bhool na paye hum is jahan ko.. par dekhe humeN zamana aur yunhi guzar jaye… ..
Aur wo v guzar jaye,hume pehchaan v na paye..............
Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…
Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ‘saccha_pyar’
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN…
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
Sach…!
saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
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Re: GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
13th September 2006, 01:45 AM
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Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
doston yahaan shayad sirf khayaal hi mere hain jo karamaat dikh rahi hai wo kunal bhaiya ke kalaam ka kamaal hai.umeed kart5a hun ki aap sabhi ko ye kalaam pasand aayega.
BarsoN kahaN beete abhi jo yaad teri dhundli nazar aaye… hawa ban seene ko cheere kabhi ankhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaye.. par waqt bhi kahaN marham yaadoN pe… askh to bahenge toote vaadoN pe… hai itni si ilteza us khuda se , is hawa main ye jism bikhar jaye.. askhoN ke sath jaan bhi nazron se utar jaye… bhool na paye hum is jahan ko.. par dekhe humeN zamana aur yunhi guzar jaye… ..
Aur wo v guzar jaye,hume pehchaan v na paye..............
Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…
Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ‘saccha_pyar’
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN…
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
Sach…!
saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
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waah waah mujhe lagta hai tum dono ki jugal bandhi khoob jamegi
behad khoobsurati se tum dono ne apne dard ko ghazal mai dhaala hai, mujhe lagta hai ye jodi kamaal kar degi, dil ko cheer ke rakh denge aap dono ki jugalbandhi se nikale kalaam.
daad kabool karo aur
yunhi likahate raho
regards
manu
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13th September 2006, 01:49 AM
bahot khub mere dost
bahot achhi peshkas wakehi me bahot hi umda hai aapki ye peshkas mujhe bahot pasand aayi
ummid hai aage aur bhi aapkikalam padhne ko milegi
aapa dost
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Re: Re: GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
13th September 2006, 06:55 PM
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waah waah mujhe lagta hai tum dono ki jugal bandhi khoob jamegi
behad khoobsurati se tum dono ne apne dard ko ghazal mai dhaala hai, mujhe lagta hai ye jodi kamaal kar degi, dil ko cheer ke rakh denge aap dono ki jugalbandhi se nikale kalaam.
daad kabool karo aur
yunhi likahate raho
regards
manu
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aur manu bhai kaise hain? umeed hai ahche hi honge. bahut dino baad dekha aapko apni mehfil me.dekh kar behad khushi hui.aapko kalaam pasand aaya jaan kar aur v khushi hui.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v humari mehfilon ki raunak badhate rahiyega.
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13th September 2006, 08:27 PM
wah wah!!!!!
kar diya na sacche pyaar ko ghayal.............
ab is ghayal sacche pyaar ka kya kiya jaaye ..........
bahut khoob...........bahut umdda.........
likhte raheye
aapki dost,
neha
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Re: GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
13th September 2006, 09:32 PM
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Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
doston yahaan shayad sirf khayaal hi mere hain jo karamaat dikh rahi hai wo kunal bhaiya ke kalaam ka kamaal hai.umeed kart5a hun ki aap sabhi ko ye kalaam pasand aayega.
BarsoN kahaN beete abhi jo yaad teri dhundli nazar aaye… hawa ban seene ko cheere kabhi ankhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaye.. par waqt bhi kahaN marham yaadoN pe… askh to bahenge toote vaadoN pe… hai itni si ilteza us khuda se , is hawa main ye jism bikhar jaye.. askhoN ke sath jaan bhi nazron se utar jaye… bhool na paye hum is jahan ko.. par dekhe humeN zamana aur yunhi guzar jaye… ..
Aur wo v guzar jaye,hume pehchaan v na paye..............
Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…
Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ‘saccha_pyar’
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN…
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
Sach…!
saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
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namaskaar ji
ghayal ji
haan ji likha to achha hai but likha kisne hai aapne yaa kunaal ji ne.
jisne bhi likha bahot pyara likha hai.
gratse
aapki dost
pooja
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14th September 2006, 04:35 PM
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kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho ?ghayal?,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN?
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ?saccha_pyar?
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN?
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khoob! ess baar kuchh hata kar likha huaa hai.. aur mujeh behad pasand aaya... YuuN hee liKhate raheN... daad haazir hai.
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14th September 2006, 10:05 PM
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bahot khub mere dost
bahot achhi peshkas wakehi me bahot hi umda hai aapki ye peshkas mujhe bahot pasand aayi
ummid hai aage aur bhi aapkikalam padhne ko milegi
aapa dost
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ise pasand karne ka shukriya dhaval ji,ahcha laga jaan kar ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yunhi padhte rahenge hume.
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15th September 2006, 06:14 AM
lucky bhaut khoob kunal to khair kamaal hamesha hi karta hai is baar tumhaare khyaal aur uski kalam bhaut rang jama rahi hai
tum dono ka saath hamesha hi rahe aur uhi kuch achhe nagme aate rahe
dua ke saath
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15th September 2006, 11:35 AM
Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…
Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ‘saccha_pyar’
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN…
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
Sach…!
saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
lucky appki gazal ke baare main kush kehna chhahta hoon magar lafaz bewafa huye jate hai...lafaz keh rahe hai ki raj hum main itni taqat nahi ki hum in alfaazon ki tareef kar sake....magar phir bhee kush lafaz jo sab appki he inyat hai dil main se nikal kar zubaa pe aa hee gaye...har ek share apne app main lakho kahaniya liye huye hai.......ek bhut hee umda or pursakoon gazal ke liye raj ka tahe dil se daad kabool karna or yu he likhte rehnange ....appki agli post ka intzar rahega....take care raj,........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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15th September 2006, 02:28 PM
lucky ji bahut accha lagga appki gazal padkar, yu hi likhtey rahiye app jaise shayro ko padna accha lagta hai. yeh do share bahut hi acchey lagey.
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
appki dost
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15th September 2006, 08:12 PM
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wah wah!!!!!
kar diya na sacche pyaar ko ghayal.............
ab is ghayal sacche pyaar ka kya kiya jaaye ..........
bahut khoob...........bahut umdda.........
likhte raheye
aapki dost,
neha
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neha ji tareef ka shukriya.khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhti rahengi.aur aap jp karna chahen wo kar sakti hain is gahyal sacche pyar ka .
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Re: Re: GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
16th September 2006, 05:13 AM
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namaskaar ji
ghayal ji
haan ji likha to achha hai but likha kisne hai aapne yaa kunaal ji ne.
jisne bhi likha bahot pyara likha hai.
gratse
aapki dost
pooja
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pooja ji shayad aapne kalaam se pehle ki line theek se nahi padhi.ye kisi ek ka kalaam nahi balki do shayaron ki mili bhagat hai.dono ke mil ke likha gaya kalaam hai ye.umeed karta hun ki ab aajp samajh gayin hongi......
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Re: GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
16th September 2006, 04:26 PM
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Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
doston yahaan shayad sirf khayaal hi mere hain jo karamaat dikh rahi hai wo kunal bhaiya ke kalaam ka kamaal hai.umeed kart5a hun ki aap sabhi ko ye kalaam pasand aayega.
BarsoN kahaN beete abhi jo yaad teri dhundli nazar aaye… hawa ban seene ko cheere kabhi ankhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaye.. par waqt bhi kahaN marham yaadoN pe… askh to bahenge toote vaadoN pe… hai itni si ilteza us khuda se , is hawa main ye jism bikhar jaye.. askhoN ke sath jaan bhi nazron se utar jaye… bhool na paye hum is jahan ko.. par dekhe humeN zamana aur yunhi guzar jaye… ..
Aur wo v guzar jaye,hume pehchaan v na paye..............
Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…
Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ‘saccha_pyar’
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN…
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
Sach…!
saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
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janab lucky sahab
aapki is mahfil dilip ka aadab arz hai
wah janab kya jugalbandi hai aap dono mahan shayro.n ki
is nachiz ko jo shayri ki thodi bahut samajh hai usse mujhe lagta hai ki her ek sher apne aap main mukkaml hai. or tarif ke kabli hai
or fir ye wo jagah hai jahan hum naye log aap bade shayro se bahut khuch seekhte hai...........
aapki is gazal per dil se daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega...
aapka ek begana sa dost
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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17th September 2006, 01:41 PM
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khoob! ess baar kuchh hata kar likha huaa hai.. aur mujeh behad pasand aaya... YuuN hee liKhate raheN... daad haazir hai.
-Mayank [/B]
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shukriya mayank bhai shukriya. aapki daad maayne rakhti hai humare liye.to aage v humare mehfil me yunhi aate rahiyega.......
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17th September 2006, 02:57 PM
Bohat bohat shukriya sabhi ka ... ko is kalaam pe mubarak alfaaz likhe
par tab bhi main kehna chahuNgha...in alfazoN maiN mera kuch bhi nahi .. maine to apne alfaaz rakhe bhi nahi .. ye to lucky ka badakpan hai jo itna maan diya .. aap sari mubarkeN use hi do ...
aapka apna
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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18th September 2006, 12:58 AM
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lucky bhaut khoob kunal to khair kamaal hamesha hi karta hai is baar tumhaare khyaal aur uski kalam bhaut rang jama rahi hai
tum dono ka saath hamesha hi rahe aur uhi kuch achhe nagme aate rahe
dua ke saath
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dd aapko yahaan is kalaam pe dekh kar khushi hui.ahcha laga jaan kar ki aapko ye pasand aayi.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yunhi padhti rahogi hume.
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18th September 2006, 01:01 AM
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Originally posted by rajveeer
Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…
Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ‘saccha_pyar’
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN…
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
Sach…!
saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
lucky appki gazal ke baare main kush kehna chhahta hoon magar lafaz bewafa huye jate hai...lafaz keh rahe hai ki raj hum main itni taqat nahi ki hum in alfaazon ki tareef kar sake....magar phir bhee kush lafaz jo sab appki he inyat hai dil main se nikal kar zubaa pe aa hee gaye...har ek share apne app main lakho kahaniya liye huye hai.......ek bhut hee umda or pursakoon gazal ke liye raj ka tahe dil se daad kabool karna or yu he likhte rehnange ....appki agli post ka intzar rahega....take care raj,........
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bhai aapne bahut jyada tareef kar di is nacheez ki.bas ye aapka nazariya hi hai jo aapko humara likha ahcha lagta hai.aur ye jaan kar to dil ko bahut tassalli hui ki aapne ise gehrai tak samjha aur uske ehsaashon ko samjha yakeen maaniye aise bahut kam hi log milte hain aaj kal.umeed karta hun ki aapge v yunhi sajate rahenge.
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18th September 2006, 01:04 AM
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lucky ji bahut accha lagga appki gazal padkar, yu hi likhtey rahiye app jaise shayro ko padna accha lagta hai. yeh do share bahut hi acchey lagey.
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
appki dost
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sunita ji ye humari khushnaseebi hai ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya aur aapko hume padhna ahcha lagta hai.guzarish bas yahi rahegi ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhti rahiyega.
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18th September 2006, 01:10 AM
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Originally posted by dilip200
janab lucky sahab
aapki is mahfil dilip ka aadab arz hai
wah janab kya jugalbandi hai aap dono mahan shayro.n ki
is nachiz ko jo shayri ki thodi bahut samajh hai usse mujhe lagta hai ki her ek sher apne aap main mukkaml hai. or tarif ke kabli hai
or fir ye wo jagah hai jahan hum naye log aap bade shayro se bahut khuch seekhte hai...........
aapki is gazal per dil se daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega...
aapka ek begana sa dost
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dilip sahab maafi chahunga par aap hume kripaya sahab na kahen.doosri baat kunal bahut ahche shayad hain aur maine bas abhi seekhna shuru hi kiya hai.par humme se koi v yahaan mahaan shayar nahi hai.sab bas seekhne ki kosishs kar rahe hain.koi kam seekh paya hai to kisine thoda jyada par sab abhi seekh hi rahe hain koi v abhi tak mahaan nahi hua hai.
waise rahi kalaam ki baat to aapka baddapan ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhte rahenge.
ek aur baat bhai sahab khud agar dost kaho to begana na kaho,aur agar begana kaho to dost na kaho.humare dost apne hua karte hain begane nahi.aur begano ko hum dost banaya nahi karte.ab decision aapka hai janab.............
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18th September 2006, 01:16 AM
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Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
Bohat bohat shukriya sabhi ka ... ko is kalaam pe mubarak alfaaz likhe
par tab bhi main kehna chahuNgha...in alfazoN maiN mera kuch bhi nahi .. maine to apne alfaaz rakhe bhi nahi .. ye to lucky ka badakpan hai jo itna maan diya .. aap sari mubarkeN use hi do ...
aapka apna
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bhaaiyon dekhiye ise kehte hain shayar.saari khoobsurati inki den hai,sara kamaal inka hai aur kitni aasaani aur safaai se keh diya ki sab maine kiye hai.mere bhai darkhwast bas yahi rahegi aapse ki zindagi ke har lamhe me aur har kadam pe mere saath rehna aur mujhe sahar dete rehna.
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19th September 2006, 01:58 PM
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
bahut khoob!
Aaina mujhse meri pehli si surat maange
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20th September 2006, 05:28 PM
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chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
bahut khoob!
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wafa dd shukriya is tareef ka.sadiyon baad jo dekha aapko is mehfil me to bas dil ko kitni tassali mili bata nahi sakta.chahta hun aap aage v yunhi humari mehfil ki raunak badhati rahiye.
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Re: GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
20th September 2006, 05:38 PM
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Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
doston yahaan shayad sirf khayaal hi mere hain jo karamaat dikh rahi hai wo kunal bhaiya ke kalaam ka kamaal hai.umeed kart5a hun ki aap sabhi ko ye kalaam pasand aayega.
BarsoN kahaN beete abhi jo yaad teri dhundli nazar aaye… hawa ban seene ko cheere kabhi ankhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaye.. par waqt bhi kahaN marham yaadoN pe… askh to bahenge toote vaadoN pe… hai itni si ilteza us khuda se , is hawa main ye jism bikhar jaye.. askhoN ke sath jaan bhi nazron se utar jaye… bhool na paye hum is jahan ko.. par dekhe humeN zamana aur yunhi guzar jaye… ..
Aur wo v guzar jaye,hume pehchaan v na paye..............
Yaad teri dilayeN fizaayeN,to kya KareN,…
Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
Fasl-e-gul mai baha bhula dete gum unka,…
Gir ke tasweer unki banayeN to kya kareN…
Milti hai saza jhakhm dikhane ki bhi yahaN…
Phir dard-e-dil na chupaayeN to kya KareN...
Ajnabiyon se umeedeN laga lete hai aaj kal…
Jab apne yuN nazareN churayeN to kya KareN...
kehate hai log tamanaye liye jite raho “ghayal”,
jab tamnna hi humeN mitaayeN to kya kareN…
aur machal jaate hai dil pane ko ‘saccha_pyar’
armaaN hi phir dil ko jalaayeN to kya kareN…
chalo doob jane ko hai aaftaab jindgi ka yaar…
saanseN jab is jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
Sach…!
saanseN YuN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN..
HaN Ashk nazroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN….
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Kya baat hai ghayal ji aap to akele likha karte the to kafi dhamal hota tha par aap k sath kunal bhai ne join kiya to sone pe suhaga ho gaya bas uhi hi likte rahie.
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Parayo ne apnaya,
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Re: Re: GHAYAL aur SACCHA_PYAR Ka Ek Kalaam -
20th September 2006, 05:50 PM
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Kya baat hai ghayal ji aap to akele likha karte the to kafi dhamal hota tha par aap k sath kunal bhai ne join kiya to sone pe suhaga ho gaya bas uhi hi likte rahie.
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meri jaan tu yahaan aaya yahi mere liye bahut hai.ahcha laga mere bahi tujhe yahaan dekh kar itne dino baad.umeed karta hun ki aage v tum yunhi aate rahoge in mehfilon me.
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