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Kuch bhi nahin -
21st October 2005, 09:24 PM
Kuch bhi Nahin
Bahut yaad kiya tumhey Abb inn Aankhon mein kuch bhi nahin Tere Khamoshi ke Siva Jeevan mein kuch bhi nahin Chal diya Samagh yeh Aakash hamara hay Iss Aakash mein mere udan ke siva kuch bhi nahin Bahut Dhuunda tumhey Abb inn Aankhon mein dhuein ke siva kuch bhi nahin Puraney kuch Sapnon ki Kitab hay ek Uss Kitab mein kuch kavitaon ke siva kuch bhi nahin Sapnon ki ek Pankti banyai thi ek Uss Pankti mein khoye Sapnon ke Siva kuch bhi nahin Aaeina Se Sachai Poochtey hain Kayi Uss Aaeina mein mere tasveer ke siva kuch bhi nahin Ghadee ki Suein ki taranh Inteezar badhta hay kahin Zindagi ek inteezar ke siva kuch bhi nahin Chod Diya woh Sapney Kahin Behtey iss Nadi mein ek Leher ke Siva kuch bhi nahin Ek Nadi gum jatey hay Sager mein Kahin Jhoot ki iss duniya mein Sachai ki kimat kuch bhi nahin Jhoot ki iss duniya mein Sachai ki kimat kuch bhi nahin |
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21st October 2005, 09:36 PM
Sukanya di,
Ehsaas ache hai... sach jeevan kuch bhi nahi.... very nice feelings... vaise aapke kalam mein humesha dard ka aabhas rehta hai... pata nahi kyon... aap apna khayal rakhein.... Sab kuch acha hi hoga... Take Care Rohin |
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22nd October 2005, 12:50 PM
Hello Rohin
Nahin aise baat nahin hay ki Jeevan kuch bhi nahin.......par shayad sochna ki kuch Sapne sada sach ho jayein yeh shayad ek Sapna hi hay.......di ko padhney ka shukriya. Apna khyal Rakhna Di |
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22nd October 2005, 07:02 PM
sukanya di, bahoot khoobsurat....
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25th October 2005, 08:19 PM
Hello Sweet Garima
Thanks for liking the poetry....waise shayad main issey aur khuubsurat likhtey.......bas uss din mann bahut udas tha....socha shayad kuch likhun to mann halqa ho jaye to likh diya....waise I know it is quite tense poetry.......mere har rachna main ek aas to hoti hay bas iss rachna mein maine hopes ka daman chod diya tha.....waise tum jaise pyare friends ko dekh sochti huun kuch hopes se bhara qalam likhun...... Take care Di |
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25th October 2005, 08:23 PM
Dearest Suknya ji,
So sweet as always... bahut achha likha hai tumne... daad kubul karna aur haan, meri duaan hamensha tumhare saath hai, khush raho, apna khyaal rakhna... yun hi likhte raho! yours, Parul. |
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25th October 2005, 08:34 PM
Sukanyaa ji...
jii udas ho tau kuch likhne se dil halka karne ki soojhati hai...lekin yeh dard ki pyaas kabhi bujhati nazar nahin aati...lagta hai unwaan badalna hi padega...aur aas tau apki rachnaaon mein kheinch laati hai...phir isse tau chodna nahin chahiye...kyunki... zindagi tau naam hai jeene ka, umiidon ka, kuch kar guzarne ka...nahin tau zindagi mein kuch bhi nahin...khayaal rakhiey apna gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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25th October 2005, 08:37 PM
bahut ahcha likha hai sukanya dd,bas aapka kalaam padhne ke baad dimag me aur kuch bhi nahi.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.
aapka GHAYAL  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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26th October 2005, 09:00 AM
hey sis........wonderful.....jus amazin to read....
aap english mein kyun nahi likhte? i would luv to read u in english hindi mein toh...mind blowin yaar keep writin take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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Re: Kuch bhi nahin -
26th October 2005, 01:45 PM
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there are times wen i sit aside n think tht still m not able to put words wat i really wanted to to my thoughts. but reading ur creations make my day. had tried hell of times to reply u here but was always too short with words as ur thoughts make me speechless. di ur thoughts always gave me a sourse of positivess n hope but this time i just can say tht it seems u were in deep pain wen u wrote this as i just cud make out the no hope nthing is left in life. happiness n sorrows are part n parcel in ones life di n make sure if these days are dark n full of pain, surely one day one sunny bright morning wud knock our door too. mat doobo itna gehrai mein ki khushi ka ek pal jo aaye woh bhi nazar na aaye. i just dont know what made me said so much n if i m wrong anywhere plz do excuse me. i just said wat my heart said. well as words i just can say its a class creation written by u n awesomly expressed but wen read as ur pain in thoughts i m too short with words to say wat i m feeling right now. take care di. this life is nthing but full of bitterness but we still have to go miles n miles ahead. keep penning down ur thoughts ahead too n keep sharing among us. may god bless u with his finnest gliiters. chaman ke ujarh jaane par gul(phool)maatam manate hai kashtiyon ke doob jaane par sahil(kinara)ashq bahate hai yeh kaisi banayi hai kaynaat(duniya)toone eh mere khuda yahan dil toot jaane par log jashan manate hai! with love urs ruhani or roshani |
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26th October 2005, 09:23 PM
Dearest Parul
Kuch log itney sweet hotey hain jinkey Duaein Dil se nikalti hain....tum bhi itni hi sweet ho....thanks my friend ....daad ke liye shukriya....Mere Duaein bhi sada tumharey sath hain....Sada kush Raho Ur friend |
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26th October 2005, 09:30 PM
Namaskar Paras Ji
Kaise hain aap......ur one reply brings a sweet smile on my face zindagi tau naam hai jeene ka, umiidon ka, kuch kar guzarne ka...nahin tau zindagi mein kuch bhi nahin...khayaal rakhiey apna Aapke shabd kirnon si ek Aas dikha gaye.....shayad issey hi shabdon ka karishma kehtey hain.....Thanks for showing a ray of light full of hopes Apna khyal rakhiyega |
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26th October 2005, 09:34 PM
bahut ahcha likha hai sukanya dd,bas aapka kalaam padhne ke baad dimag me aur kuch bhi nahi.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.
Hello Lucky Kuch Lafzon mein kitna kuch keh diya tumney......Thanks for reading my poetry.....and I had read ur post....do study well...shayri parivaar cares for you....keep smiling Di |
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26th October 2005, 09:40 PM
Hello Karthik
Thanks for appreciating....my sweet brother in school days I used to write in english only...par jaise jaise samay beeta kuch geet Ghazal likhney mein interest hua.....so tried my hands at writing poetry in hindi......Abb tumney kaha hay to....will definitely post something in english even...... I have good collection of my english poetry even .....Thanks for replyingTake care Di |
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26th October 2005, 09:50 PM
chaman ke ujarh jaane par gul(phool)maatam manate hai
kashtiyon ke doob jaane par sahil(kinara)ashq bahate hai yeh kaisi banayi hai kaynaat(duniya)toone eh mere khuda yahan dil toot jaane par log jashan manate hai! My Dearest Ruhani tumhara yeh naya id dekh ek pal ke liye soch mein duub gaye thi.....Last mein tumhara naam jab nahin pada tha tab likhna chahti thi ki roshani mughey tumharey lafz ruhani ki yaad dila rahein hain....see main tumhey kitna jaan gayi....tumharey lafzon ki ek Aahat si hi tumhey pehchaan gayi....Bahut khoobsurat likha hay ruhani tumney.....my sweet ruhani ....u have always been so close....shayri parivaar mein itney sweet log mile hain......u r one of them.....Thanks for the beautiful wishes....jinki zindagi mein itney sweet friends hoon woh udas kyon hoon..Apna khyal rakhna Keep Smiling Di |
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27th October 2005, 02:39 PM
Aaeina Se Sachai Poochtey hain Kayi
Uss Aaeina mein mere tasveer ke siva kuch bhi nahin Ghadee ki Suein ki taranh Inteezar badhta hay kahin Zindagi ek inteezar ke siva kuch bhi nahin Arya...aray.. Sukanya ji.. Yah kya... itni nirasha bhari baateN kyuN? chaahe waqt achchha ho u s ki fitrat hai badalte rahena... Jab bura waqt aaye to ye sochna chaahiye ki ab achchha waqt aane wala hai.. Aur jab achchha waqt bhi aaye to insaan ko aane wale waqt ke liye khud ko taiyaar rakhna chaahiye.. Haan qalam aap ne bahoot khoobsoorat likha hai.. Daad kabul kijiye..... Apna khayaal rakheN... aap ka dost.. MayanK |
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Re: Kuch bhi nahin -
27th October 2005, 04:00 PM
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kuchh bhi nahi aur sab kuchh bhi... sirf ek kavita ke jariye ...meri dil se daad kubool kijiye jaise life ki poori kahaani keh di ho..apna khyaal rakhiyega ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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27th October 2005, 04:59 PM
Puraney kuch Sapnon ki Kitab hay ek
Uss Kitab mein kuch kavitaon ke siva kuch bhi nahin Sapnon ki ek Pankti banyai thi ek Uss Pankti mein khoye Sapnon ke Siva kuch bhi nahin Tooooo Good Didi... Bahut hi saadgi se apne ehsaas piroye is baar bhi aapne... yeh panktiyan kucch khaas lagin... aise hi likhti rahiye...apna khayal rakhiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th October 2005, 06:44 PM
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kya baat hai jo itna dard aur nirasha yahn udel di hai is rachana mein dil ko choo gai ye. kaisi ho aap? sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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29th October 2005, 11:55 AM
Namaskar Mayank ji
Kaise hain aap?Waqt kay barein mein aapne theek kaha hay.....Waqt kabhi sath hota hay... to kabhi nahin...jo waqt ke sath chaley uska sath khuda deta hay....aagey sey koshish karungi ki nirasha bhari rachna na likhun Aapki daad ke liye shukriya .....Aagey bhi likhtey raheingey..Keep Smiling |
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29th October 2005, 12:01 PM
Hi Pallavi
Tumney yeh rachna pasand ki bahut acha laga......life ki poori kahani keh di is rachna se mainey.....pallavi life ki kahani shayad ek Rachna mein samane ke liye kafi nahin hay.....I think life is a mystery ..... Zindagi ki kitab likhenein main shayad pura jeevan lag jaye tab bhi shayad kum ho...... Apna khyal Rakhna Always keep Smiling |
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29th October 2005, 12:07 PM
Hello Pulkit
Pulkit tumhara avtaar kahan kho gaya.......woh computer par likhta pulkit brother used to look so sweet......Tumhey di ka likha acha laga thanks......ur encouraging words are always beautiful Apna khyal Rakhna Di |
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29th October 2005, 12:10 PM
Hello Sakhi My sweet gudia
How r you?Main achi huun......bas ek din mann kuch udas tha to yeh rachna likh di......par shayri parivaar ke sabhi sadasya ashaon ki kiran si de jatey hain .....tumhara site par aana bhi kafi kum ho gaya hay...aatey raha karo acha lagta hay....I always wait to see ur poetry....God bless you Take care |
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29th October 2005, 01:17 PM
That pulkit will be back soon...very soon
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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