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मुस्कुराकर उड़ा गया कोई - 10th December 2014, 09:41 PM

मुस्कुराकर उड़ा गया कोई
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मैने देखा इक निगाह का फरेब
कितने ख्वाब दिखा गया कोई

चिराग़ बचाये जो इक हवा से
आंधियाँ ही चला गया कोई

जाते मुझे देख कहतें हैं लोग
वो देखो की बेवफा गया कोई

वो वफा-ए-कैस के किस्से कहें
इधर जाँ भी लुटा गया कोई

बज़्म में जब उठा ज़िक्रे 'मायूस'
इक रूदादे-गम सुना गया कोई



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maine dekha ik nigaah ka fareb
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chiraag bachaaye jo ik hawa se
aandhiyaan hi chalaa gaya koi

jaate mujhe dekh kahten hain log
vo dekho ki be-wafaa gaya koi

vo wafa-e-kais ke kisse kahen
idhar jaan bhi lutaa gaya koi

bazm men jab utha zikre-'mayoos'
ik rudaade-gham sunaa gaya koi


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11th December 2014, 06:58 AM

बज़्म में जब उठा ज़िक्रे 'मायूस'
इक रूदादे-गम सुना गया कोई
Makta bahut acha laga aapki ghazal ka Mayoos bahi , Dil se daaad kabool karien.

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11th December 2014, 11:34 AM

.waah .....Very nice mayoos ji....



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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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13th December 2014, 01:43 AM

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बज़्म में जब उठा ज़िक्रे 'मायूस'
इक रूदादे-गम सुना गया कोई
Makta bahut acha laga aapki ghazal ka Mayoos bahi , Dil se daaad kabool karien.

sanjay Sehgal

Thanks Hamdam, as always...............


ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
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13th December 2014, 01:44 AM

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.waah .....Very nice mayoos ji....
Thanks Madhu, as always...............


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