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tera khyaal...... - 12th May 2015, 09:43 AM
Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...


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Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............... laakhon daad is ekk sher me madhu jii... kamaal hai



Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.


waah waah waahhhhh ..... haasile ghazal hai ye to.. subhaan Allah


Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...


wallaah ... aashiqaana.... behad roomaani..... mazaa aa gaya is baar to kasam se.....

Dil jeet liye aapke aasher ne is baar.... bas waah hi waah......

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12th May 2015, 12:48 PM
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Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............... laakhon daad is ekk sher me madhu jii... kamaal hai



Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.


waah waah waahhhhh ..... haasile ghazal hai ye to.. subhaan Allah


Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...


wallaah ... aashiqaana.... behad roomaani..... mazaa aa gaya is baar to kasam se.....

Dil jeet liye aapke aasher ne is baar.... bas waah hi waah......

Reps added.... dil se..

khush rahen..... salaamat rahen.....

Shaad.......
Aapke jawaab me jo apnapan aur ghahrai hoti hai shaad jii..uske aage main sach me niruttar ho jati hoon....
Bahut shukriya aapke sath ka.. ..
shaad rahein...aabaad rahein..


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12th May 2015, 06:55 PM
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Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...

Waaah! Ek se badkar ek saare sher kamaal.

Bohut badhaai itna khubsurat likhne ke liye.

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13th May 2015, 03:12 PM
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Waaah! Ek se badkar ek saare sher kamaal.

Bohut badhaai itna khubsurat likhne ke liye.
Thank u thank u sarika...aappkI daad ne aur khoobsoorat bana diya ise....
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12th May 2015, 10:36 PM
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Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...
Do baar padha aur soch raha hoon yeh to aabhi padha tha kuch din pehle, Madhu ji ne kiska copy kiya phir yaad aaya ki uff tauba yeh khayaal bhi kaise aaya

Phir wahi kahunga jo kalaam-e-tasveer par kaha tha...masterpeice...treasure it...


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Do baar padha aur soch raha hoon yeh to aabhi padha tha kuch din pehle, Madhu ji ne kiska copy kiya phir yaad aaya ki uff tauba yeh khayaal bhi kaise aaya

Phir wahi kahunga jo kalaam-e-tasveer par kaha tha...masterpeice...treasure it...
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chaliye shukra hai aapko yaad aa gaya anu..
aapko ye kalaam is kadar pasand aaya meri khushnaseebi......
sath dete rahein....
salamat rahein...


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Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...


Madhu Bala....bahut kuch keh rhi hai aapki yeh shayri.

bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne ehsaasoN ko lafz diye hai

yoon hi likhti rho aur bazm ko rageen banati rho

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Madhu Bala....bahut kuch keh rhi hai aapki yeh shayri.

bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne ehsaasoN ko lafz diye hai

yoon hi likhti rho aur bazm ko rageen banati rho
Shukriya di..yoon hee sath deti rahiyega......

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13th May 2015, 04:07 PM
Madhu jee....bahut khoobsurat ehsaas lage mujhe......aapke sochne ka dhang wakai kamaal ka hai.....


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Madhu jee....bahut khoobsurat ehsaas lage mujhe......aapke sochne ka dhang wakai kamaal ka hai.....
Shukriya arvind ji...aapko ehsaas pasand aaye abhari hoon..
Aage bhi aapke sath ki ummeed karti hoon.....

Khush rahein....


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14th May 2015, 10:18 AM
Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...

kia kehny ... Madhu jee..

bohat hii khoob ehsaas ..

daad haazir hy..

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12th July 2015, 10:41 AM
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kia kehny ... Madhu jee..

bohat hii khoob ehsaas ..

daad haazir hy..
Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye dil ki gahraiyon se aapki shukra guzar hoon hassan sahab.....bas yahi guzarish hai...bazm me aate rahein...aapka sath aur bhi likhne ka hausla deta hai.....
salamat rahein.......


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Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...

wah wah madhu jee kya baat hai bahut khoob
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath

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Bahut bahut shukriya ishq ji.....
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Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...

Kya baat hai Madhu ji

Aap ki hqr ek peshkash pehle se behtar lagti hai....bohot hi khoobsurat ehdaaso ko badi nazakat se piroya hai aapne...bohot khoobsurat gazal hui hai..dheer sari mubarakbaad aur dheer sari daad

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Bahut achche ....Sanjay sehgak
Sanjay ji...aapki shukrguzar hoon ki kalaam pasand kiya aapne...
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Aap ki hqr ek peshkash pehle se behtar lagti hai....bohot hi khoobsurat ehdaaso ko badi nazakat se piroya hai aapne...bohot khoobsurat gazal hui hai..dheer sari mubarakbaad aur dheer sari daad

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Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...
Khoobsurat Alfaz MeN ... Shaandaar Ghazal Huii Madhu Ji !

Bakamaal

Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Khoobsurat Alfaz MeN ... Shaandaar Ghazal Huii Madhu Ji !

Bakamaal

Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji...aapko yahaan dekhkar bahut khushi huyi...achcha laga khaak alfaaz pasand aaye apko...
hausla badhate rahiyega......

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aik achchhi koshish par dil se daad... yuunhi bazm ki shaan ko badhaate rahiye aage bhee

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madhu jee

namaste


aik achchhi koshish par dil se daad... yuunhi bazm ki shaan ko badhaate rahiye aage bhee

aapka

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Sath dete rahiyega..

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Aapko apni ghazal pe dekhkar khyshi huyi....
Behad shukriya..hausla afzai ka..

Aate rahiyega...

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Apna khayal rakhiye!
Jiya
Thank u jiya.....

Par kahaan gayab ho aajkal....
bahut dino se apna likha kuch share bhi nahi kiya...

Aati raha karo...

Takecare...
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bahut khub madhu ji kya khun kuch kahne ke kabil nhi hu .
yu hi likhte rahiye
Aapka dil se shukriya brijbhan ji....

Aate rahiyega aage bhi....

Apna khayaal rakhein...

Madhu...


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aate rahiyega....

apna khyaal rakhein..

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Waah - 1st January 2016, 08:29 PM
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Tera khyaal mujhe aaj bhi satata hai.
Tu ban ke saya mere saath chala aata hai.

Jidhar bhi jaye nazar khamoshi samayi hai.
Bharam mujhe hai ki ghar me koi bulata hai.

Chale to aaye the kahkar ki ab na aayenge..
Kadam badhaun jo main aage to peeche jata hai.

Malaal tujhko bhi to hoga meri judai ka..
Na qurbaton ka sahi ye dilon ka nata hai.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...
Madhu Ji

Bohat achcha likha hai aapne. aise hi likhti rahiye.

Madhu ko chaand me dikhti hai teri hee surat.
Nazar churata hai badal me chhupta jata hai...

Waah...

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