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haseen pal -
31st August 2004, 02:00 AM
khamosh honth tham si zubaan
phirse sunaaye woh daastaan kadam do kadam ke faasle nazuk labon ki duriyaan taaron si sard raat mein *aatish se dil ka jhujhnaa *taakiid hai dil mein aaj bhi *ekhlaas jo tha darmiyaan *baalish ki baat kya kahun uthtaa hai aab bhi woh dhua dhiima sa dikhtaa hai wahi jo humne banaya *aashiyaan kadam do kadam ke faasle nazuk labon ki duriyaan dhiima sa dikhtaa hai wahi jo humne banaya *aashiyaan aatish=fire taakiid=remembrance ekhlaas=relationship/bond baalish=pillow aashiyaan=home Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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31st August 2004, 10:38 AM
Mast ji..
Aadaab! Aapki ye rachna bohat hi pyaari hai.. ek behad khubsoorat lamhe ko.. ehsaas ko.. khwaab ko.. aapne baRi khoobi se pesh kiya hai.. saral lafzon me.. chhoti si nazm me.. gehri si baat.. bohot khoob! Aapki ye rachna paR kar humaara ek kalaam yaad aa gaya.. uska link de rahe hain.. gar waqt mile to paRiyega... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...kaise+bhulaaye Itna pyaare kalaam likhne par mubarakbaad kubool kijiye! |
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31st August 2004, 09:06 PM
Aapka likha kalaam padha aur bahut pasand aaya..aapko yeh kuch mere likhe lafz pasand aaye uska shukriyaa....bas baat choti saral hi kyon na ho baat ki gehraayi padhne waale ki aankhon mein hoti hai.....
aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa -aapka aapna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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