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| Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui |
   
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4 | 14.81% |
| Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai |
  
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15 | 55.56% |
| meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye |
  
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8 | 29.63% |
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Super Ghazal of The Year -
31st August 2010, 05:54 PM
Mere Pyaare dosto.n:
Namaskaar aur Aadaab! sab se pehle tou Parivaar ke un sabhee sadasyo.n kaa tah-e-dil se ShuKriyaa'h adaa kartaa huuN jinhone GTM mei.n apni Ghazale.n peSh kii aur vote bhee kiyaa apnaa Qeemtee waqt de kar... aap sab ki wajh se hi GTM ko itani baRii safaltaa haasil hu'ii hay..! zainy jee kuChh dino.n ke liye vacation per gayi haii..tou yeh silsilaa aage baRhaate hai.n! dosto.n ab waQt aa gayaa haii "Super Ghazal of the Year ..GTM Grand finale" kaa "Super Ghazal of the year" chunne ka 3 participants aur ek se baRhker ek Ghazal...bohat hi kaDaa muQaabla hai aai'iye inhe apne Qeemti votes se nawaaziye aur Super Ghazal of the year chuniye ALL THE BEST TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS |
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Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui -
31st August 2010, 06:05 PM
Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui
Mere aduu ko mujhse shikayat nahi.n hui Jab tak kisi hasii.n se mohabbat nahi.n hui Hamko sitam uthane ki aadat nahi.n hui Hamne to unke naam pe bheje the khat pe khat Unko jawaab dene ki fursat nahi.n hui Chehre pe ik haseen ke thehri rahi nazar Ankho.n se aur koi shararat nahi.n hui Jisko hara diya tha woh apna hi bhai tha Hokar bhi fatha-yaab musarrat nahi.n hui Har ek ki zubaa.n pe hamara hi naam hai Badnaam jo huwe tou kya shohrat nahi.n hui Zaalim ka saath dene ko aaye tamaam log Mazloom par kisi ki inayat nahi.n hui Tashna-labi ke waqt jo yaad aayi karbala Mehsoos mujhko pyaas ki shiddat nahi.n hui Paisa na tha jahez mein dene ke waaste Beti ghariib baap ki rukhsat nahi.n hui Auro.n ko maarne ke liye khudkushi na kar Yeh buzdili ki maut shahadat nahi.n hui Mehnat ke sath-sath ibadat bhi kijiye Mehnat nahi.n hui tou ibadat nahi.n hui Fezan leke aa gaye is waste ghazal Kehte the log aapki shirkat nahi.n hui |
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Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai -
31st August 2010, 06:07 PM
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai 'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine' Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai? dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai Sahra=desert,registan Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz Besood=unnessary,bina faida Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona |
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meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye |
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meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye -
31st August 2010, 06:09 PM
meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye
pathar hai jo pighal kar maum sa jigar ho jaye na rahene denge unki gali mein andhera kabhi jala denge khud ko jo roshan unka ghar ho jaye raah-e-zindagi mein na pahuchen unhe koi taqlif unki aasuvon ki meri ankhon mein basar ho jaye kab tak phirun main dar ba dar yu tanha bebas unke dar par ruh nikle khatam ye safar ho jaye mehsus ho jo unhe ik baar kabhi meri bhi kami toh mohabbat meri bhi ya khuda amar ho jaye |
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beautiful moment.........
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31st August 2010, 06:45 PM
wahhhhhhhhhhhhh..... ye 3 ghazal bahut hi umdaa hai... ek dum kaate ki takkar hai ... choose karna mushkil hai ke kaunsi behtar hai... teeno shayaro ke liye dil se daad hazir hai.... keep up the good work guyz.... likhte rahiye... khush rahiye....
aur haaaaaaaaaa..... good luck....   "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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mera vote |
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mera vote -
31st August 2010, 09:05 PM
Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui
Mere aduu ko mujhse shikayat nahi.n hui is ghazal ke liye hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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31st August 2010, 10:53 PM
All the best to all the participants........
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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1st September 2010, 10:07 AM
sabhi participants ko meri shub-kaamnaye
dosto vote jaroor kijiyega. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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1st September 2010, 10:26 AM
Bahut hi mushkil ho raha hai kisi ek gazal ko vote karna...... Is baar bahut hi confuse ho rahi hu ki kisko vote du... Mujhe teeno hi gazal bahut pasand hai... kisi ek ko chunna mushkil sa lg raha hai... Sabhi participants ko meri traf se best of luck...............
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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1st September 2010, 11:30 AM
wakai vote karna thoda muskil hai kyonki teeno ghazal behtareen hain magar fir bhi maine ek ghazal ko vote kar diya aur wo hai..
Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui Mere aduu ko mujhse shikayat nahi.n hui  Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai... |
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1st September 2010, 12:16 PM
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Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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All the best |
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All the best -
1st September 2010, 01:24 PM
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1st September 2010, 03:58 PM
my vote goes to this gazal
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai 'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine' Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai? dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai Sahra=desert,registan Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz Besood=unnessary,bina faida Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona pawan(shayari) |
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1st September 2010, 04:47 PM
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Ae teenoan hi ghazlaen maerae hisaab sae behtareen hain Aur agar teenoan main sae kisi aek ko chunna hai to mujhae ae ghazal umda lagi Originally Posted by Dhaval View Post Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai 'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine' Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai? dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai Sahra=desert,registan Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz Besood=unnessary,bina faida Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona razia |
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1st September 2010, 05:44 PM
all 3 are very good... hard decision... but voted...
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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2nd September 2010, 08:26 PM
Each one of the 3 Ghazals are great!
Keep up the good work! regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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3rd September 2010, 05:47 PM
votes plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.............................. ...
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th September 2010, 03:48 PM
Dosto baad muddat ke iss roushan bazm se Guzra toh ye haseen tareen GhazleiN padne ko milieN......GhazloN ke ahsaasatoN ko our aakaar ko dekhte hue kya faisla kiya jaaye...iss baare meiN koi rules competition me Darz nahiN nazer aa rahe.....phir bhi sabhi cheezoN ko dhyaan me rakhte hue koshish kerte haiN ke kisi Ghazal ke saath na-insaafi na ho......
1.)Pehli Ghazal ka matla... Guzre jo na-gawaar woh harkat nahi.n hui Mere aduu ko mujhse shikayat nahi.n hui ye bahoot hi sunder ban paya hai...kehne waale ne bahoot hi oomda kaha hai... Lekin Ghazal ke shroN meiN tadaad itni ke kai ashaar iss tarah se piro daale ke Ghazal ka wazood hi jata raha....Agar inme se kamzor/be-wazni sher hata diye jaate toh ye Ghazal sab se oomda thi..kha-m-khwah Ghazal ko lamba ker diya gaya....wese our koi wazeh isey ooper jaane se rok na paati 2.) Iss ghazal meiN......ye matla hua...... meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye pathar hai jo pighal kar maum sa jigar ho jaye Iss Ghazal meiN matla jaandaar nahi hua.....baaki sher matle par bhaari nazer aa rahe haiN.....dono misre aapas maiN lai -badhh nazer nahiN aaye....yaane beh'r Gadbada gayi.....lekin ahsasat achhe rahe.... Aakhiri sher ne Ghazab dhaya ha..... 3.).. Ye Ghazal ka matla raha...... Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai Behtareen ahsaasatoN se bharpoor poori beh'r liye hue...sabhi ashaar ek dum steek wazendaar rahe.... "Dhondte haiN" ka radeef ....Qafiye se bharpoor milaan kiye hue raha....zabardast koi tukbandi nahi bani........halaaNke doosri Ghazal ke saath iska bharpoor mukaabla nazer aa aha hai...lekin woh matle se kamzor rahi...ye mera apna nizi vichaar hai......___ __________________________________________________ _ MaiN iss competition meiN... Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai Iss Ghazal ko apna vote deta hooN Harash |
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6th September 2010, 04:00 AM
Har vote mayine rakhta hai...plz vote kijiye............
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th September 2010, 10:46 AM
Votes plzzzzzzzzzz...............................
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th September 2010, 12:56 AM
apni pasandeedaa Ghazal ko Vote zaruur de.n!
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13th September 2010, 02:07 PM
Plz vote.............................................. ..
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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