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Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 17th May 2005, 11:00 AM

Doston.....

kutch roz se man udaas hai....main bhi nahi jaanta.....kal bhi yahi alaam tha......jab bhi aisa hota to apni behan se baat kar liya karta......aur uski pyari si awaaz sun mann khil uthta......lekin na jaane kyun kal behan se baat nahi kar saka.......socha mann khud hi theek ho jaayega......lekin koshishon mein kutch kami thi.....us pyari si muskhurahat ki......

bus isi khayal mein apni behan se kutch kehna chahta hoon.....

Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……

Koi nahi tha kareeb mere…..
Sihaayion ne tha mujhe ghere…..

Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..

Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..

Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..

Par na jaane kal kya hua tha…..
gum lahoo mein ghul raha tha….

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Jaane kyun Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Shaayad, Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……


Khuda se yahi dua hai ki meri behan jahan bhi rahe khushiaan uske daaman mein barasti rahen......



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Re: Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 17th May 2005, 11:20 AM

Amanji,,


bohot acchha....padte hue mahsoos hua Roop ke liye appke emotions.......rachna ki saralta subse jaada bha gai!

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….


Fantastic......shayad isse acche dil mein utar ne wale shabd aur naa milte.......huamri daad lijiyega isspar!

take care


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17th May 2005, 11:25 AM

Mere sale sahab...

kalaam padhne maiN to accha laga ... lagta kaise nahi .. mere jigar-o-jaan ke nam jo hai ... par phir wahi dard maiN apne asharon ko dooba dena ... dil ko bechain sa karta hai .. aur usse baat nahi ho rahi thi to mujhse kar lete .. maiN bhi isi jahaN maiN huN ... aur meri aawaz itni buri bhi nahi

khair ye tumhara faisla tha .. bas yahi kahuNga .. kyuN aap log gham ke sagar maiN gote lagate rehte ho .. usse bahar aakar dekho to sahi ... khud ki khushi pe bharosha nahi to doosroN ki khushi maiN jahan dhuNdo .. baki ap khud samajhdaar hai .. kyuNki maiN apna dimag kharab nahi karna chahta

likha accha hai .. par takneeki taur pe fail hai ek dum likhte raho yuN hi ... par takneeki ka dhayan rakhna .. ab aapse umeed khali khayaon ki nahi rehti .. bhai aap aala darje ke shayar jo thehre...

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17th May 2005, 11:36 AM

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Mere sale sahab...

kalaam padhne maiN to accha laga ... lagta kaise nahi .. mere jigar-o-jaan ke nam jo hai ... par phir wahi dard maiN apne asharon ko dooba dena ... dil ko bechain sa karta hai .. aur usse baat nahi ho rahi thi to mujhse kar lete .. maiN bhi isi jahaN maiN huN ... aur meri aawaz itni buri bhi nahi

khair ye tumhara faisla tha .. bas yahi kahuNga .. kyuN aap log gham ke sagar maiN gote lagate rehte ho .. usse bahar aakar dekho to sahi ... khud ki khushi pe bharosha nahi to doosroN ki khushi maiN jahan dhuNdo .. baki ap khud samajhdaar hai .. kyuNki maiN apna dimag kharab nahi karna chahta

likha accha hai .. par takneeki taur pe fail hai ek dum likhte raho yuN hi ... par takneeki ka dhayan rakhna .. ab aapse umeed khali khayaon ki nahi rehti .. bhai aap aala darje ke shayar jo thehre...

aapka jeeja
Mere jeeje.....

pata nahi kyun man udaas sa hai kutch dinon se.....karaan to main khud dhoond raha hoon.......

dard bhi utna nahi bada....lekin maan udaas hai....kutch karne ka maan nahi ho raha......

yaad ho to pehle bhi tumhe ek dafa kaha tha ki shayad koi kareebi pareshaan hai.....to ye mann khud hi ukhda sa rehta hai....

aur rahi baat takneekion ki to vo abhi ki likh diya office mein baithe baithe......aur isme koi takneeki nahi daalna chahta tha.....

bilkul saaf aur saral khayal mein pesh ki hai......tumse bhi baat aur tumhe tang kiye hue kaafi waqt ho gaya hai.....jald hi phir tang karoonga.....aur vaise bhi ab to official jeeja ji ho gaye ho to saale jayada tang bhi nahi kar sakte na.....

khush rahoo....

tumhare saale sahab......



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17th May 2005, 11:45 AM


Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..

So so touching... Bahut pyaara likha hai bhai!!


Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..

Sach... Gudiya jaisi hi hai wo....ab aap itne acche ho to behan bhi to aisi hi milegi naa!!


Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..

Yehi to behan ka pyaar hai aur hak bhi....


Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Khushnaseeb ho fir bhi udaasi lahoo me ghul hi jaati hai....

Aman Bhai!

Bhaut pyaare ehsaas hain... Roopali ke liye jab bhi likhoge moti hi niklenge kalam se... bahut pyaar likha hai behan ke liye....Sach dil khush ho gaya... Bhagwaan Bhai behan ka yeh pyaar banaye rakhe aur aap dono ko humesha khush rakhe

Aur bhi log hain is jahaan me jo tumhe apnaa maante hain... Mann udaas ho to unhi ko yaad kar liya karo...kabhi apna maana ho to

Aise hi dil ke ehsaas utaarte raho kaagaz par.. Meri daad to saath hi hai tumhare... khayl rakhnaa acche se


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17th May 2005, 11:56 AM

Kunaal Saahab!

Techniques follow karna itna zaroori nahi hai... jis lehze se apne dil ke ehsaas sabse acche tareeke se kahe jaa saken.. wohi thhek hai...Techniques ki ghutti banaa ke pee rakhi hai tumne to.....

Aman Bhai.. jaisa man chhae vaisa likhao.. Yeh to badaa shaayar hai.. tum jaisa likhte ho accha likhte ho... Ek khoobsurat laiy aati hai usme.. jo ki important hai!!


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Re: Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 17th May 2005, 11:58 AM

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Doston.....

kutch roz se man udaas hai....main bhi nahi jaanta.....kal bhi yahi alaam tha......jab bhi aisa hota to apni behan se baat kar liya karta......aur uski pyari si awaaz sun mann khil uthta......lekin na jaane kyun kal behan se baat nahi kar saka.......socha mann khud hi theek ho jaayega......lekin koshishon mein kutch kami thi.....us pyari si muskhurahat ki......

bus isi khayal mein apni behan se kutch kehna chahta hoon.....

Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……

Koi nahi tha kareeb mere…..
Sihaayion ne tha mujhe ghere…..

Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..

Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..

Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..

Par na jaane kal kya hua tha…..
gum lahoo mein ghul raha tha….

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Jaane kyun Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Shaayad, Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……


Khuda se yahi dua hai ki meri behan jahan bhi rahe khushiaan uske daaman mein barasti rahen......

Mere Bhaiya..

bahoot bahoot pyaara likha hai.. pyaar se jo likha to pyaara hona hi hai.. lekin udaas na hona.. jab itani pyaari behan hai fir aap udaas kaise ho gaye.. samajh me nahi aata..

humesha khush raho.. hasate raho..

aapki bahan...


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Re: Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 17th May 2005, 12:54 PM


Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……

Koi nahi tha kareeb mere…..
Sihaayion ne tha mujhe ghere…..


wah...

Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..


pata nahi ...

Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..


Sacch kaha....

Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..


Oye cho chweet...

Par na jaane kal kya hua tha…..
gum lahoo mein ghul raha tha….

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….


hmmm...... good

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Jaane kyun Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Shaayad, Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……


hmm... yaad to aati hi hai...


Khuda se yahi dua hai ki meri behan jahan bhi rahe khushiaan uske daaman mein barasti rahen......

Bhagwan aapki yeh manokamna puri kare....yeh meri bhi manokamna hai...

Aman Bhai,

Behan k liye likha hai aapne...
Woh to meri bhi behan hai...
Baat nahi ki meine abhi tak to kya rishta to hai...

Bhai kabhi akela na samjhna apne aap ko....
Yaad aaye aur dil udaas ho to humko yaad kar lena...

Ek bhai se Dusri bhai ke liye dua.... Khush rehna mere bhai...

Teri Khushi mein hai janat.....
Teri Hassi -- Zindagi meri....

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Kunal abhi jija puri tarah se bana nahi hai....
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Aur apun hai na dekh lega usko.... hehehehe


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Re: Re: Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 20th May 2005, 11:44 AM

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Amanji,,


bohot acchha....padte hue mahsoos hua Roop ke liye appke emotions.......rachna ki saralta subse jaada bha gai!

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….


Fantastic......shayad isse acche dil mein utar ne wale shabd aur naa milte.......huamri daad lijiyega isspar!

take care
Shukriya....shalini ji....

ye pyar aur lagaav yunhi bana rahe aur meri pyari si Gudiya hamesha khush rahe......



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20th May 2005, 11:46 AM

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Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..

So so touching... Bahut pyaara likha hai bhai!!


Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..

Sach... Gudiya jaisi hi hai wo....ab aap itne acche ho to behan bhi to aisi hi milegi naa!!


Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..

Yehi to behan ka pyaar hai aur hak bhi....


Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Khushnaseeb ho fir bhi udaasi lahoo me ghul hi jaati hai....

Aman Bhai!

Bhaut pyaare ehsaas hain... Roopali ke liye jab bhi likhoge moti hi niklenge kalam se... bahut pyaar likha hai behan ke liye....Sach dil khush ho gaya... Bhagwaan Bhai behan ka yeh pyaar banaye rakhe aur aap dono ko humesha khush rakhe

Aur bhi log hain is jahaan me jo tumhe apnaa maante hain... Mann udaas ho to unhi ko yaad kar liya karo...kabhi apna maana ho to

Aise hi dil ke ehsaas utaarte raho kaagaz par.. Meri daad to saath hi hai tumhare... khayl rakhnaa acche se
kyun jal rahe ho bhai.....

roop meri laadli behan hai......

lekin apne bhaion se bhi utna hi pyar hai......tum to apne hi ho.....

tumhara bhai.....



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20th May 2005, 11:49 AM

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Kunaal Saahab!

Techniques follow karna itna zaroori nahi hai... jis lehze se apne dil ke ehsaas sabse acche tareeke se kahe jaa saken.. wohi thhek hai...Techniques ki ghutti banaa ke pee rakhi hai tumne to.....

Aman Bhai.. jaisa man chhae vaisa likhao.. Yeh to badaa shaayar hai.. tum jaisa likhte ho accha likhte ho... Ek khoobsurat laiy aati hai usme.. jo ki important hai!!
Sahi kaha bhai.....

Kunnu to bada shayar hai......isliye us.se panga nahi bhai.....

rooth gaya to maanana muskhil ho jaata hai......

aur ab to vo mera offical jeeja ho gaya hai na......



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Re: Re: Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 20th May 2005, 11:51 AM

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Mere Bhaiya..

bahoot bahoot pyaara likha hai.. pyaar se jo likha to pyaara hona hi hai.. lekin udaas na hona.. jab itani pyaari behan hai fir aap udaas kaise ho gaye.. samajh me nahi aata..

humesha khush raho.. hasate raho..

aapki bahan...
Meri sweet pagal Sis.....

theek kaha...jab itni pyari behan mili hai to udaasi kyon.....

lekin yahi to samjhna mushkil ho raha hai......

khush rahoo.....

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Re: Re: Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 20th May 2005, 11:52 AM

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Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……

Koi nahi tha kareeb mere…..
Sihaayion ne tha mujhe ghere…..


wah...

Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..


pata nahi ...

Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..


Sacch kaha....

Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..


Oye cho chweet...

Par na jaane kal kya hua tha…..
gum lahoo mein ghul raha tha….

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….


hmmm...... good

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Jaane kyun Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Shaayad, Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……


hmm... yaad to aati hi hai...


Khuda se yahi dua hai ki meri behan jahan bhi rahe khushiaan uske daaman mein barasti rahen......

Bhagwan aapki yeh manokamna puri kare....yeh meri bhi manokamna hai...

Aman Bhai,

Behan k liye likha hai aapne...
Woh to meri bhi behan hai...
Baat nahi ki meine abhi tak to kya rishta to hai...

Bhai kabhi akela na samjhna apne aap ko....
Yaad aaye aur dil udaas ho to humko yaad kar lena...

Ek bhai se Dusri bhai ke liye dua.... Khush rehna mere bhai...

Teri Khushi mein hai janat.....
Teri Hassi -- Zindagi meri....

Aapka
Rohin

And One more thing.....

Kunal abhi jija puri tarah se bana nahi hai....
Isliye aap tang kar sakte ho....

Aur apun hai na dekh lega usko.... hehehehe
theek hai bhai.....

usko to tang karta hi rahoonga......varna mazaa nahi aata na....

hehehee.....



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wow!!!what beautiful words n what beautiful expressions
thanx for sharing it

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Shukriya Sonal Ji.....

khush rahiye.....

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Meri sweet pagal Sis.....

theek kaha...jab itni pyari behan mili hai to udaasi kyon.....

lekin yahi to samjhna mushkil ho raha hai......

khush rahoo.....

tumhara bhai.....

Bhaiya..

ab to samajh gaye ho na aap.

bhaiya udaas nahi hone ka.. abhi to ye baat aap mujhe sikhaaoge ki behana udaas nahi hone ka .. hai na?


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Re: Re: Re: Re: Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……{For my Sister Roop} - 31st May 2005, 01:28 PM

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Bhaiya..

ab to samajh gaye ho na aap.

bhaiya udaas nahi hone ka.. abhi to ye baat aap mujhe sikhaaoge ki behana udaas nahi hone ka .. hai na?


aapki pagali bahan
ye to bilkul sahi farmaya meri pagal si behan ne......

abhi mai bhi to massttterrrr ban jaaonga.......



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Koi nahi tha kareeb mere…..
SihaayiaN thi mujhe ghere…..

are aman ji..ye sihayion ko jakar dhamkana padega..use sirf aapke hi k dil ka pata achhe se malum hai lagta hai!............
wel....apke dil se nikle hue shabd bahot achhe lage...aur zasbaaat bahot umda...!
dil se daal kubul kijiye...is ehsaas k liye!
i must say Roop is very lucky!

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Komal Ji...

Maufi Chahonga...itni der se jawab dene ke liye...Khuda ka shukr hai...ab gamon ko mera pata kam yaad rehta hai... :-)...

kaisi hai aap.........

Khush rahiye...

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baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..

Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..

Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..


Dil Ko Chhoo Liya Inn EhsaasoN Ne ... Aman Ji ! Ek Pyara Sa Aur Pavitr Bhandhan .. !

Happy Raksha Bhandhan... !

Very Very Nice Creation.... !




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kutch roz se man udaas hai....main bhi nahi jaanta.....kal bhi yahi alaam tha......jab bhi aisa hota to apni behan se baat kar liya karta......aur uski pyari si awaaz sun mann khil uthta......lekin na jaane kyun kal behan se baat nahi kar saka.......socha mann khud hi theek ho jaayega......lekin koshishon mein kutch kami thi.....us pyari si muskhurahat ki......

bus isi khayal mein apni behan se kutch kehna chahta hoon.....

Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……

Koi nahi tha kareeb mere…..
Sihaayion ne tha mujhe ghere…..

Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..

Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..

Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..

Par na jaane kal kya hua tha…..
gum lahoo mein ghul raha tha….

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Jaane kyun Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Shaayad, Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……


Khuda se yahi dua hai ki meri behan jahan bhi rahe khushiaan uske daaman mein barasti rahen......
Aman bhai
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Doston.....

kutch roz se man udaas hai....main bhi nahi jaanta.....kal bhi yahi alaam tha......jab bhi aisa hota to apni behan se baat kar liya karta......aur uski pyari si awaaz sun mann khil uthta......lekin na jaane kyun kal behan se baat nahi kar saka.......socha mann khud hi theek ho jaayega......lekin koshishon mein kutch kami thi.....us pyari si muskhurahat ki......

bus isi khayal mein apni behan se kutch kehna chahta hoon.....

Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……

Koi nahi tha kareeb mere…..
Sihaayion ne tha mujhe ghere…..

Socha kutch baat karoon….
Vo halki si awaz sunoon….

baat karke dil halka ho jaata hai…..
Kya ye rishta yunhi ban jaata hai…..

Koi to kaaran hoga jo mili mujhe aisi behan…..
awaaz se bikhar jaata hai udaasion ka chaman….

Ek pyari si gudiya ki tarah hai jo….
Mere dil ka nayab tukda hai vo…..

Chooti-chooti baton pe rooth jaati hai…..
Ek dastak pe sab bhool, maan jaati hai…..

Par na jaane kal kya hua tha…..
gum lahoo mein ghul raha tha….

Phir socha, kyun karoon behan ko tang…..
Uski khushiyaan hi to hain teri bhi umang….

Kaha, bahut khushnaseeb hai tu ^AMAN^…..
Jo mila ^Saccha_Pyar^ tujhe ^Roop^ ke sang…..

Jaane kyun Kal tumhari yaad aayi thi bahut……
Shaayad, Udaasion ki shaam chaayi thi bahut……


Khuda se yahi dua hai ki meri behan jahan bhi rahe khushiaan uske daaman mein barasti rahen......
aman saheb bahut khoob likha hai aapne...sach meiN ye rishta hi kuchh aisa hai...


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