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Love Mothers - 9th May 2011, 02:52 AM

Dedicated to all the mothers.

No love stronger than mother's love,
croons around and preens like a dove.
Unpaired is the bond on this earth,
naught in creation can match her worth.
Perennial tie that heaven has made,
caressing the lock, tress and braid.
As she labors to bring forth life.
A bond uncut with the keenest knife.
Mother’s love is an endless song,
sung every day and all night long.
Oblivious she to the vagaries of time,
her lullabies ring an eternal rhyme.
whenever her brood need her there,
she’s always close with her prayer.
Mother's love is an endless bloom.
Eternal spring to the day of doom.
HIS devise, God bless our Mothers.
Unrivaled, apart, from all HIS others.
God, bless each an all of them.
in their womb, HIS will doth stem.
All the tears and pain that they share,
each bite of the lip for that they care.
She’s special as daughter and as wife.
GOD then blows in the crucible of life.
Dots her kids in an endless dance,
joyous and pleased at every prance;
at this she’ll never bask, at all.
Only wipes her tears at our every fall.
When her days, are over an done,
then we know that she was the one.

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(April,7,2009)


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9th May 2011, 08:15 AM

Too good........beyond words can describe....

Thanks for sharing your beautiful creations with us.......




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9th May 2011, 11:05 PM

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Too good........beyond words can describe....

Thanks for sharing your beautiful creations with us.......
zainy kind words....
i am sooooo happy and encouraged...

thanx mate....you made my day...


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10th May 2011, 10:45 AM


Pleasure is all mine Doctor.....

Well!!...English poetry has always been one of my passions, and there is something special about your poetry...I just luv the way you rhyme your verses..

Its all a word play and rhyming part of it, is the most difficult part of poetry, fitting the right word in the right place , and only ppl with complete command over the language can do these tough jobs...

I like the way you potray your emotions in those verses...

And honestly I never miss any of your posts,

Will be looking forward to read more and more from your side..




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Gem! - 12th May 2011, 05:34 AM

Adaab Dr.Taahir Sahab!

Thank You! For sharing with us such a beautiful and true piece! The depth of meaning in every verse is just mind numbing! I adore the way you captured the beauty and nature, the unconditional nature of motherhood in words. Simply S U P E R B!

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its international mother's day
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13th May 2013, 10:46 PM

Indeed a masterpiece.......no words to.match urs in this poem.

Good work Sir.

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16th May 2013, 03:59 PM

saadat tahir sahab .....

The quality and diction of your poetry is unparalleled ....... word choice and ease of flow are just just too good ...... The topic is so beautiful ...... If we look at the poem as a whole or line by line , each deserves an accolade in itself .......

Accept my sincerest greetings on this .....

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