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1st December 2005, 09:53 PM
Adaab dosto...
Band apni muthi ko khol kyun nahin dete...hum in armaanon ke suukhe patton ko hawa mein urdhaa kyun nahin dete...na jaane kya khazaana soch kar muthi mein daba rakha hai...muskuraaney se kyun darr lagta hai...zindagi jeene se kyun hichkichaahat hai...bus in sawaalon ke chalte kuch likh daala hai...gaur farmaayiegaa... Ab wo bechaini wo pech-o-taab kahaan honge Ab wo ishq wo junoon ke aalam kahaan honge Bin bulaaye hi na chale aayein wo iss taraf Hasrat-o-yaas ke phir dil ko na gumaan honge Ab ke chot lagi tau giriyaan huye hum iss kadar Yaqinan sangrezon mein mere rag-e-jaan honge Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge Larazte, sambhalte, dhulak gaye jo do aansoo Kehne lage ab aur kya maut ke samaan honge Manzoor thaa kabhi marna teri nazzron se jaana Ab tau yeh nashtar mere zabt ka imtehaan honge Tez hawaon mein naksh-e-pa mit hi jaate hain Baad mere yahaan kayi ‘paras’ ayaan honge pech-o-taab = predicament Hasrat-o-yaas = desire and despair Giriyaan = weep Sangrezon = people who throw stones Samaan = articles Zabt = fore-bearance naksh-e-pa = footprints Ayaan = evident (saamne aayeinge) gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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1st December 2005, 10:00 PM
dd kalaam to aapko har baar ki tarah purzor hai.par main samajh nahi paya ki ye kalaam aapne kyun likha hai aakhir aapke dimag me aisa kya aaya jo aap ye kalaam likh baithi.bas aap yunhi likhte rahiye.
aapka LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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1st December 2005, 10:17 PM
khayalt toh bahut aache hai................................likhte rahiyega
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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1st December 2005, 10:20 PM
Parastaar G Adaab,
Bohot khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya aapne... Filhaal jaldi mein hoon, gar mauka mila aur yaad raha to kuch tafseelaat ki ummeed hai. Filhaal mubaarakbaad aur daad haazir hain qubool kijiye. Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge Yeh sher zyaada pasand aaya. shukriya iss kalaam ko pesh karene ke liye. Talib. |
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1st December 2005, 10:29 PM
waaahhhh paras di....
kya baat hai...jitni kareef karoon utni kam hai..... bahaut hi behtreen likkha hai aapne har baar ki tarah....yuhin likhte rahiyega.... take care Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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2nd December 2005, 08:02 AM
dear paras ji...
Beautiful creation............ it's an outstanding one as always.......... daad kubul karna.. keep writting and take care! your fan parul.  |
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2nd December 2005, 09:18 AM
meri paras,
jaanti hu ... mera aa kar choop chaap nikal jana tumhe nahi bhata.. Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge bahut pasand aayi tumhari rachna.......... tumhari meena |
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2nd December 2005, 12:41 PM
HAI........JAAN......
I M WAITING FOR MY PERSONAL REPLY.........!! Band apni muthi ko khol kyun nahin dete...hum in armaanon ke suukhe patton ko hawa mein urdhaa kyun nahin dete...na jaane kya khazaana soch kar muthi mein daba rakha hai...muskuraaney se kyun darr lagta hai...zindagi jeene se kyun hichkichaahat hai...bus in sawaalon ke chalte kuch likh daala hai...gaur farmaayiegaa... - SUPERB...... Yahi uper ki lines me hi sab kuchh nichor kar dala hai...sare masaalo ka swaad inhi me hi aa gaya....again superrrrrrb ha..ha...ha.... Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge Jaanu....... YE DARD MUJHE DE DO....LEKIN U DARD BHAR BHAR KAR JO APNE KALAAM PER UDEL RAHI HO....ANKHE BHIGI JAATI HAI...BHAGWAAN TUME MERI JHOLI KI B KHUSHIYA.N DE DE..AUR JALD HI SAKOON PAO.......AAMEEN.. Larazte, sambhalte, dhulak gaye jo do aansoo Kehne lage ab aur kya maut ke samaan honge EK HAUR DARD JO TEES DIYE JAATA HAI... Manzoor thaa kabhi marna teri nazzron se jaana Ab tau yeh nashtar mere zabt ka imtehaan honge REALLY.....TOO MUCH PAIN Tez hawaon mein naksh-e-pa mit hi jaate hain Baad mere yahaan kayi ‘paras’ ayaan honge IS SHER PE EK LINE YAAD AAYI...SHARE KARNA CHAHUNGI...AGAR IZAZET HO TO.....? Ye ek gaane ki lines hai... Teri galiyo.n me na rakhenge kadam....aaj k baad.. tujhse milne ko na ab aayenge sanam....aaj k baad.. mera milna samajh lena ek sapna tha... jo tujhko mil gaya bas vo hi tera apna tha.. teri galiyo.n me na......aaj k baad tujhse milno ko na aayenge sanam...aj k bad.. ok bye...jaanu ..apna dhyaan rakhna..jyada pain mat lo...jaldi boodhi ho jaogi....  gam-e-lashkar |
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2nd December 2005, 06:00 PM
dd kalaam to aapko har baar ki tarah purzor hai.par main samajh nahi paya ki ye kalaam aapne kyun likha hai aakhir aapke dimag me aisa kya aaya jo aap ye kalaam likh baithi.bas aap yunhi likhte rahiye
Lucky tum kya poochna chahte ho...maine kalaam ke shuroo mein hi bataya ki kya kya khayaal thhe dimaag mein...agar phir bhi koyi sawaal ho tau plz pooch lo...i will honestly try to answer it... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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2nd December 2005, 06:02 PM
shukriya aapka mehul jain ji...shayad pehli baar aapko apni post pe mili hoon...ummiid hai aage bhi mulaqaatein hongi...
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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2nd December 2005, 06:15 PM
Talib Sir...
Achha hai aap jaldi mein hain...dissection of my ghazal from limb to limb...is postponed...lol...just kidding...lehaaza aap ghazal ke mutaalliq sawaal kabhi bhi pooch sakte hain...ghazal pasand karne ke liye shukriya... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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2nd December 2005, 06:17 PM
My dear Farhaana...
main tumhari shukraguzaar hoon ki tum waqt nikaal kar mujhe padhti ho...mujhe bhi apne kalaam pe tumhara avataar dekh kar achha lagta hai... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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2nd December 2005, 06:25 PM
zaroor mulaqat hogi dd
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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2nd December 2005, 06:56 PM
Pae Lagu Guru Ji,
Band apni muthi ko khol kyun nahin dete...hum in armaanon ke suukhe patton ko hawa mein urdhaa kyun nahin dete...na jaane kya khazaana soch kar muthi mein daba rakha hai...muskuraaney se kyun darr lagta hai. Arey, Prologue hi itna pyaara tha ke kalaam ki khaasiyat isi se bayaan ho gayi. Humaari khush naseebi jo itne do behtereen kalaam aapse ek hi din mein parhne ko mil gaye. Bohot bohot khoob Guru Ji. Intezaar rahega. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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2nd December 2005, 09:37 PM
very nice Paras ji
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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2nd December 2005, 10:39 PM
dear paras di
whole of the shayri was full of emotions, though I like it all...my fav is: Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge aaaaaaaaa^hhhhhhh Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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3rd December 2005, 11:24 AM
paras meri behan
tumhari is ghazel ko parh ker mujhe khayal aayaa ke meri behan to aaj kal tabar toar hamle ker rahi hai. yaani ghazel per ghazel aur ashaar per ashaar. aur yahan mein yeh bhi naheen keh paa raha hoon ke paras kem likho. kyunke itna achcha likhna to likha hi jaanaa chahiye, aur jab meri behan likhe to phir kyaa baat hai. shabaash paras ; bohat hi khoob likha hai, aur naqsh-e-kafe-paa ki to kyaa baat hai. mujhe bohat pasand aayee yeh ghazel. bas is mein mujhe tum se jo ikhtilaaf hai voh yeh hai ke paras is one and only. koee paras is se pehle naa aayee hai aur naa aayegi. aayeinge to bohat mager meri behna, meri paras bas ek hi hai voh sab per ayaan hai. us jaisi ho sakte hain mager voh naheen. samjeen. bas dua hai ke isi tarah likhti raho, aur aage barhti raho. mager is likhne likhaane mein apna khayal rakhna naa bhoolna. God bless you. musharrafhusain |
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3rd December 2005, 05:55 PM
wah didi.. bahoot khoob likha hai aapne.. aur mai mushi sir ki baat se sehmat hoon.. koi aapaki tarah ho sakata hai lekin aap nahi ban sakata...
likhate rahiye didi taaki hume padhane ka mauka milta rahe.. aur apana achhe se khayaal rakhiyega |
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4th December 2005, 05:28 AM
Hi Paras di,
Aaya hoon mein bahut din baad... kuch masroof tha aaj hua hoon kuch free... So i am glad i had time to read and did not miss this... wonderfully written.... Take Care Rohin |
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5th December 2005, 02:38 AM
Sweet parul...
kaisee ho...deri ke liye muaafi chahti hoon...tumko pasand aata hai mera likha tau samjho mera likhana bhi safal ho gaya... apna khayal rakhna gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2005, 02:42 AM
Meena ji...
is sher mein itni kashish hogi malum nahin thaa...sabko yehi pasand aaya hairaani huyi.....jee aapne sahi kaha mujhe bahut taqleef hoti hai jab aap maun se jawaab deti hain...  gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2005, 02:48 AM
Mere azeez Gam-e-lashkar ji...
aapke jawaab se tau dil baag baag ho gaya...itni shiddat se aap iss kalaam ki or tavajjo deinge malum na thaa...aur please aap itne pareshaan na hon...yeh bus lehjaa hai meri shayri kaa aur kuch nahin...kuch tasavvur, kuch dekhi suni baatein, zara see aap beeti...isliye aap befiqr rahein...itni udaas nahin hoon main...lol...jab dard ne nishaan nahin chodhaa tau umr kya khaak asar karegi?... ...aap apna khayaal rakhieygagayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2005, 02:53 AM
My favorite candyboy...
kaise ho...prologue achha laga na? don't know bus apne aap hi likha gaya...milte rehna... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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shukriya kuhulika...
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th December 2005, 02:56 AM
hello priya...
tumhein yeh sher pasand hai...mujhe malum kaunsa hai? Larazte, sambhalte, dhulak gaye jo do aansoo Kehne lage ab aur kya maut ke samaan honge gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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6th December 2005, 08:36 PM
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Bhayyia tabar-toar? meri dictionary mein yeh lafz nahin thaa...lol...apni behan ke liye sabhi ke aise khayaalaat hote hain...lekin aapne yahan keh kar phir meri aankhein nam kee hain...ummiid hai apke yeh ehsaas yoonhi iss behan ke liye bane raheinge...bahut qeemti bahut, ahem hain mere liye... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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6th December 2005, 08:39 PM
wah didi.. bahoot khoob likha hai aapne.. aur mai mushi sir ki baat se sehmat hoon.. koi aapaki tarah ho sakata hai lekin aap nahi ban sakata...
Hmmn Garima...paras di tau ek hi hai na? mere banane ke baad wo saancha todh diya thaa bhagwaan ne...lol gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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6th December 2005, 08:41 PM
i guess...tumhara shukriya tau karna hi padega, tumne waqt nikaala tau di ke liye...
shukriya rohin! gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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MaiN kayi baar kehta huN sabse ... ki maiN nageene talashta huN.. aur mil bhi aasani se jate hai .. sab hairaan ho jate hai is baat ko sun ke ... aapke is kalaam main do nageene bhi chun hi liye ... dekehe inhe aur koi kahe ki ye nageene se kam hai ... mujhe nahi lagta .... bohat khoob yuN hi likhti rahiye aapka bhai Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th December 2005, 08:57 PM
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jee Paras di to ek hi hai.. koi Paras didi jaisa ban sakata hai.. lekin paras didi nahi ho sakata hai... banane aur hone me kaafi fark hota hai didi .. hai na? bhagwaan ne jo sancha banaaya hoga. wo sirf aapke liye banaaya hoga us par kisi aur ka haq nahi ho sakata hai.. |
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7th December 2005, 08:55 PM
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maine tau soch tum bahut khafa ho...aise bahut achhe lagte ho...guddo didi ki tareef karte huye...sach...yoonhi raha karo khush khush... luv you, di gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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7th December 2005, 08:56 PM
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Yup! perhaps! gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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8th December 2005, 11:49 AM
Ab wo bechaini wo pech-o-taab kahaan honge
Ab wo ishq wo junoon ke aalam kahaan honge Bin bulaaye hi na chale aayein wo iss taraf Hasrat-o-yaas ke phir dil ko na gumaan honge Khoobsurat bayaani guruji...! Abke chot lagi tau giriyaan huye hum iss kadar Yaqinan sangrezon mein mere rag-e-jaan honge Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge Second sher was something...just Loved it...! Manzoor thaa kabhi marna teri nazzron se jaana Ab tau yeh nashtar mere zabt ka imtehaan honge hawaon mein naksh-e-pa mit hi jaate hain Baad mere yahaan kayi ‘paras’ ayaan honge Waaaaaaaaahhhh... kya keh diya hai...! Dear Guruji, Humesha ki tarh bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne...Bahut accha laga padhkar... Yun hi likhti raho...Aur apna khayaal rakhna acche se... Love u... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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13th December 2005, 10:17 AM
Sorry pulkit for the late reply...
tumne masroofiyat mein waqt nikala...aur itni shiddat se padha aur sarahaa...aage bhi kabhi kabhi inhi galiyon mein milnaa... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Bohat khoob!!..behad khoobsurat aur dil ko chu lene waale ehsaas hain parastar jii............aaj pehli baar aapki koi post padh rahi huun..........saare ke saare sher behad uumda haiN... maqte se talluq ek baat kehna chahungi.............paras ek hai, aur ek hi hai.......shayed aap jaisa aur koi nahi......aap jaisa kabhi koi aur ayaan nahi ho sakta......... hats off to this superb post.............. pls keep coming and keep writing............ all your frnds miss you a lot here........ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Paras diii aapki shayri aapki pehchaan hai, aapki shayri mein bahut kuch aisa hota hai jo ki mujhe mere ahsaaso.n se milta julta lagta hai, aisa mahsoos hota hai ki mere ahsaas aapki kalam se likhey ja rahe haiN. Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge es sher ko padkar to bas...............dil tadap utha. superb aapki sunita .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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8th November 2009, 12:10 AM
Bahut khub....!
SuperB Lines........ Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge tahe dil se daad......hazir hai.... khush rahiye.... apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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9th November 2009, 01:16 PM
Parastaar sahiba kya kahe aapne to mujhe bhi mushkil me daal diya, samajh me nahi aa raha kin alfazo me tareef karu......waise to har sher khoobsurat tha par yaqeen maniye kuch to baat hain is sher me.
Mere seene se sambhal ke kheinchna inko Ki har ik teer se lipte mere armaan honge Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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