Azure sights…..2407-2k11

saadat tahir · **Azure sights…..2407-2k11 -** 10th August 2011, 06:27 PM

Words that danced distant screens.
Morphed in days to tender dreams.
Whence they bloomed, barren rooms.
Verdant lines now sterile seams.
Rainbows drift to farther glades,
newer beats breathe novel shades.

Longing craves for fancy flights.
Tender dreams of azure sights.

Soulless rays that time congeals,
to wonton webs from spinning wheels.
Eager ears in shadows wait.
Wandering eyes searching sate.
Vacant eyes so search for one,
and time on ruts my cares shun.

Longing craves for fancy flights.
Tender dreams of azure sights.

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saadat tahir
24 July, 2k11
Islamabad, Pakistan.

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Ajnabi · **Dil vich samundar khada kita jazbaton da! -** 14th August 2011, 12:03 AM

Anmol ji anmol! Sadde dil vich ek var fir se jazbaatan da samandr khada kerdala is poem ne.

Longing craves for fancy flights........
Squeezed the cardio there....geez..some poetry..some poetry...

Tender dreams of azure sights...
kaiyyo vaar read kiya si, dil nai barra fir v..

Verdant lines now sterile seams...
Kya bol hain baii ..uff rabba..ahh!

Ek ek line is poem di todi class of poetry ko shine ker ker akhkhan nu chundya rai hai...
Maza aagya..jazbaati kerdala jnaab! Keep goin and Thank You!

saadat tahir · **wow....! -** 6th October 2011, 12:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ajnabi

Anmol ji anmol! Sadde dil vich ek var fir se jazbaatan da samandr khada kerdala is poem ne.

Longing craves for fancy flights........
Squeezed the cardio there....geez..some poetry..some poetry...

Tender dreams of azure sights...
kaiyyo vaar read kiya si, dil nai barra fir v..

Verdant lines now sterile seams...
Kya bol hain baii ..uff rabba..ahh!

Ek ek line is poem di todi class of poetry ko shine ker ker akhkhan nu chundya rai hai...
Maza aagya..jazbaati kerdala jnaab! Keep goin and Thank You!

LOLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...so enjoyed it!..

wow you have a unique style and abso amazing sense of humor...
You, sir, i will request to leave a comment on all my poems as they come along....

and i will try to copy yer lingo and style in a poem..

khush rahean...abaad rahaen....

sat..