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27th July 2007, 12:29 PM
Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......
 Hamari dosti acchi thi! Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh, Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota, Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye, Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote Tumhare chune bhar se hi...... Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote... Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote Tumhare haathon ki chuan se......... Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote, Anjaam jaante hue bhi Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote, Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota, Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par.. Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........! Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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27th July 2007, 01:39 PM
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wah wah kia zabaerdast nazam share ki hai mausam di ...... Anjaam jaante hue bhi Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote, Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota, Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par.. Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota......... hmmm thanks di aapne yahan share ki aur humain bhi parrhne ka moqa mila bohat achi lagi apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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28th July 2007, 12:34 PM
Mausam didi:
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Bahot Khuub...! aik achchhi teHreer aapne hum sab ke saath Share kii hay... aise hi achchhii kosiShoN ko baaNTte rahiYe... KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN jai mata di  aapkaa ~ Dhaval |
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30th July 2007, 12:42 PM
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mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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30th July 2007, 12:48 PM
Aadab mausam jI...
Behad khoobsurat kavita share ki hai aapne... Bohot bohot shukriyah... Apna khayal rakhe... Ijazat... Apka Dost... Abrar...  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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30th July 2007, 01:25 PM
daer mausam....sacchi mein bahut acchey ahsaas hai, bahut gahrei baatey hai.n....bas samjne ki baat hai....dil ko chu gaye yeh kavita....umeed hai aagey bhi tum aapni pasand hum sab ke saath share karti rahogi.....kush raho
duao.n ke saath tumhari diiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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30th July 2007, 01:38 PM
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paRh kar la-jawaab ho gaya maiN aur deemaagh sunn.. ham se yeh nazm baaNTane ke liye Shukriyah! yuuN hii likhate rahiye aur apna Khayaal rakhiye... Mayank |
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30th July 2007, 03:48 PM
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"ALLAH-HAAFIS" khush rahen manu |
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31st July 2007, 06:06 PM
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Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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31st July 2007, 06:18 PM
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tumhe yeh koshish aachi algi ..mogambo khus hua............. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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31st July 2007, 07:07 PM
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hey MAUSAM, bahut bahut bahut bahut ache ehsaas hai..........KAASH....................beautiful feelings......keep it up..........take care.......... aap ki dost, LAMHA............. hey |
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1st August 2007, 03:36 PM
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AApko yeh nazm aachi lagi jaankar khushi hui.......... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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1st August 2007, 03:39 PM
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sahin kaha apne samjhne ki baat hain.... na samjhi mein hi to galtiyan hoti hain di..... mere bhi pasandida nazm hain yeh.........aapki .... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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1st August 2007, 03:41 PM
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Aap parhkar la-jawab ho gaye jaanke khushi hui par aapka deemag sun ho gaya yeh jaan kar dukh hua dukh isisliye taki aap doctor ka bill mujhse na le......just kidding..aap yaha aaye accha laga................mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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1st August 2007, 05:04 PM
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1st August 2007, 06:53 PM
wow, wha a great poem to share mausam ji. thnx 4 sharing it wid us. really gud collection u have. keep sharing.....
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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2nd August 2007, 03:54 PM
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AApko yeh ehsaas pasand aaye.....shukriya...... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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2nd August 2007, 03:57 PM
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2nd August 2007, 05:21 PM
Vakaii, ek bahut khubsurat kavita hai...!
Thanks for sharing, Mausam Ji...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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2nd August 2007, 06:51 PM
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3rd August 2007, 03:16 PM
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Is kavita ko pasand karne ke liye! mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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3rd August 2007, 03:22 PM
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ya yeah kavita hi kuch aisi hain....ki kuch mehsus kiye bina reh hi nahin sakte......ha kabhi kabhi rishte badalne se bahut takleef hoti hain par kya kiya jaaye....asie waqt main aakal kaam thodina karti hain..iss kavita ko sarahne ka shukriyaapna khyal rakhna... mausam.. Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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