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"Mujhe tumse door jana nahi tha" -
8th February 2007, 05:24 PM
sabhi dosto ko mera pyar bhara namaskaar, adaab aur SSA
dosto kaam ki masrufiyat ki vajhe se, mai.n bahut dino ke baad jaha aaye hoon, es ke liye mai.n aap sab se shamma chahti hoon, aur ek gazal bhi laye hoon umeed hai aap sab ka pyar mileyga Mujhe tujhse door jana nahi tha Magar loutne ka bahana nahi tha…. Dil to bahut tha ki ruk jau.N do pal Magar woh tera aashiana nahi tha…. Mai.N kaise batati usey baat dil ki Abhi us se rishta purana nahi tha…. Sehra ka safar hai abhi door ki baat Abhi mujhe ashq bahana nahi tha… kaanch ke dil mei.N armaan le ker pathroN ke sehar mei.N jana nahi tha.... na de hoti 'sunita' labo.N ko jehmat jo taqdeer mei.N muskurana nahi tha..... aapki dost...............Sunita  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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8th February 2007, 05:50 PM
pranaam sister,
aapki yeH peshkash aapke dil meiN chhupe hue un ehsaasoN ko mano zubaaN de rahi ho aisa laga mujhe ,aapki har peshlas meiN maine ehsaasoN ko zinda paaya hai is baar bhi apne bahot hi gehrayi ke sath apne ehsaasoN ko bayaaN kiye haiN aapne ,ek behtrin si kosisH ke sath is bazm meiN aapko dekh ke chhotu ko bahot hi kushi hui sister maiN dua karta huuN ki khushiyaaN bahot jald aapki ziNdagii meiN aayeN aap apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka chhota sa bhai aur dost dhaval |
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8th February 2007, 07:40 PM
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Aap to Id ka chaand ho gaye.. Ache gaayab hue ki aane ka naam hi nahi.. Jaao main nahi baat karti aapse.. bahut naaraaz hun...    Phir bhi kya karun... main chota sa bacha apni Di se jyada der naraaz bhi nahi ho sakta.. bahut mushkil ho gayi./..  Di aap jaldi jaldi aaya karo... chaahe ek hi post, ya reply.. ya jo bhi hai.. chaahe sirf ek hi per week kiya karo.. par aapko yahan dekh ke tassalli milti hai.. ki aap theek thaak ho... samjhe!!!! Nahi to aap jaante ho phir DON ke gusse ko... hahahaa  Behad khoobsoorat ghazal ke saath haazir hue aap... Bahut pasand aayi.. Lekin paas aane ke liye bahaane ki zaroorat nahi hoti.. woh to door jaane ke liye padti hai.. kyun theek kaha na.. Aate raha karo.. bahut miss kiya aapko./.. Apna khayaal rakho Di... Luv ya!!! Miss ya!!!! Aapki....Pree "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th February 2007, 10:21 AM
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hi di kaisi hoaaj ek bahut lambe antral ke baad aapko yahaa.n dekhkar accha laga..... kya hua aaj kal aap yahaa.n bahut kam aati.n hain bahut busy hain hai na.... ya i understand....... per ek baat kahoon didi aaj ki jo aapki gazal hai na wo wakai main bahut khoobsurat hai. har ek sher seeda dil ke under pahuncha hai....... lagta hi nahi main kisi naye shayar ko pad raha hoon poori gazal main esa laga jaise main janab bashir badra sahab ki koi bahut khoobsurat gazal pad raha hoo.n. wakai main bahut kaam kiya hai aapne is gazal per.......... Dil to bahut tha ki ruk jau.N do pal Magar woh tera aashiana nahi tha…. Mai.N kaise batati usey baat dil ki Abhi us se rishta purana nahi tha…. kaanch ke dil mei.N armaan le ker pathroN ke sehar mei.N jana nahi tha.... na de hoti 'sunita' labo.N ko jehmat jo taqdeer mei.N muskurana nahi tha.. dil se daad kabool kigiyega............... bye dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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bhut khub -
9th February 2007, 04:12 PM
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Dil to bahut tha ki ruk jau.N do pal Magar woh tera aashiana nahi tha…. Mai.N kaise batati usey baat dil ki Abhi us se rishta purana nahi tha…. yu hi behtreen kalaamon ke saath hazir hoti rahiye hume intzaar rahega......raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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20th February 2007, 06:03 PM
pranaam di,
deri se aai bahot. sorry. well meine ye pahale padhli thhi. reply nahi kiya. lekin sach me bahot achhi bani hai ye gazal. meri daad kabuul kijiyega aap humesha khush rahen isi dua ke saath ijaazat. grazie aapki matko gudiya rani pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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20th February 2007, 11:44 PM
didi
bahut khub likhi hai apne ye gazal dil mein utar gai. such kaha door kaun jana chahta hai par kya majboor hote hai ham jana padta hai door kisi se. sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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21st February 2007, 02:51 AM
sunita ji,
hamesha ki tarhan aapki yeh rachna bhi bahut pasand aayi hume. Take Care Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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21st February 2007, 08:15 AM
kaanch ke dil mei.N armaan le ker
pathroN ke sehar mei.N jana nahi tha.... na de hoti 'sunita' labo.N ko jehmat jo taqdeer mei.N muskurana nahi tha..... Bahut khuub lagin yeh panktiyaan...daad kabuul farmaayein...Sunita jee kaisee ho? aaj aayi tau saamne yeh ghazal thee aur bus jawaab diye bagair nahin bana...have come a long way Ma'am, magar abhi safar jaari rakhna...labon ko zehmat waali baat khuub dil ko bhaayi...isliey ki tumhare chehare pe tau permanent dazzling smile hai...keep it up!! gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th March 2007, 02:31 PM
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lots of love teri didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th March 2007, 11:08 AM
hi sunita hi
kese ho aap? aapko hamara sadar pranaam sunita ji aapke dil ke khayalat hamein bahut achchhe lage, aur aapne jo itni khubsurati se apne dil ke alfaaz yaha utare hai wo hamein pasand aaye hai iske liye hum aapka sukhriya ada karte hai, aapne jo apni rachne mein kaha hai ki kaise batati unse dil ki bat, rishta abhi unse purana nahi tha wo hamein behad pasand aaya, sunita ji apki is rachna ka javab mein shayri se dena chahta hu gaur farmaiyega.. Mujhe tujhse door jana nahi tha Magar loutne ka bahana nahi tha…. Chale gaye ho dur kuch pal ke liye, Dur rehkar bhi karib ho har pal ke liye, Kese yad na aaye aap ek pal ke liye, Jab dil me ho aap har pal ke liye. Dil to bahut tha ki ruk jau.N do pal Magar woh tera aashiana nahi tha…. Aashiyane ki khabar hai na maikhane ujar jaane ki, Hosh itna hai mujko ki tum ho gayi kisi begane ki, Mai.N kaise batati usey baat dil ki Abhi us se rishta purana nahi tha…. Dur ho jane se rista nahi tutte, Nahi pas rehne se judte, Ye to dilon ka bandhan hai, Isliye hum tumhe aur tum hamein nahi bhulte. Sehra ka safar hai abhi door ki baat Abhi mujhe ashq bahana nahi tha… Aaj keh diya phir na kehna kabhi, Meri nazar se dur tum na rehna kabhi, Khusi banker labo pe aaye ho tumhi, Ashq banker aankho se na behna kabhi. kaanch ke dil mei.N armaan le ker pathroN ke sehar mei.N jana nahi tha.... Hum na hote to aapko gazal kaun kehta, Aapke chehre ko kamal kaun kehta, Ye to karishma hai hum pyaar karne walo ka, Warna is bezubaan paththar ko tajmahal kaun kehta. na de hoti 'sunita' labo.N ko jehmat jo taqdeer mei.N muskurana nahi tha..... Mera aashyana tha wahan jahan tufaano ka thikana tha, Ek nadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha, Na jane kyu usi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, Jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha. sunita ji ese hi likhte rehna aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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10th March 2007, 10:24 PM
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dear sunita ji, kaisi hain aap??bahut din baad aaj mauka mila aapka likha padhne ka,hamesha ki tarah lajawaab na de hoti 'sunita' labo.N ko jehmat jo taqdeer mei.N muskurana nahi tha yeh sher to chuu gaya dilko.likhti rahiye yunhin.khush rahen. take care. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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24th April 2007, 02:27 PM
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accha nahi hota.....chalo ab main aa gaye hoon... ab jaldi se aise  hans do.....!priya mujhe padne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...pichley dino bahut busy rahi...esi vajhe se es thread ka reply bhi nahi kar paye...ab main continue aa rahi hoon... lots of love tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2007, 02:30 PM
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es housla afjaei ke liye shukriya aur aapki daad sar aankhon par... aapki didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2007, 02:32 PM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2007, 02:33 PM
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bahut sarra pyar teri didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2007, 02:34 PM
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dil se shukriya...mujhe samjne ke liye. teri didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2007, 02:36 PM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2007, 02:38 PM
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paras ji bahut bahut shukriya ki aap meri post par aaye...aur aapki last wali line bahut acchi laggi...padkar muskaan tair gaye labho par...yu hi aatey rahiyga...hamari peeth thap-thapane ke liye...! regards aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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aap ke yeh ehsaas behad achchhehlage..aap kii mehnat bhii nazar aa rahii hai.. aur lagbhag sabhii Sher pasand aaye haiN.. daad dena chaahunga aap ko... qubool keejiye aur yuuN hii bazm meiN raunaq banaaye rakhiye.. likhti rahiye... Mayank |
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25th April 2007, 09:38 AM
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namaskaar mayank ji....aapko aapni post par dekhna accha lagga, aapne jis tarah se meri housla afjaei ki hai....mujhe bahut accha lagga...koshish karungi ki aur badiya likh sakku aur aapki daad phir se miley yu hi saath detey rahiyega aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th April 2007, 09:01 PM
hello sunita ji
bahote hi aacha likha hia aapnie pade ke bhoate aacha laga aise hi likhte rahiyega hume padte rahinge. bahote khoob. mushkan |
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27th April 2007, 09:29 AM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th April 2007, 10:22 AM
HI Sunita ji....
main yahan par naya hun... aapki gazal padi.... bada achha laga.. aisa lag raha hai, jaise mere liye hi likhi gai ho... i wud lyk to know more about u, if u lyk to.... my email id is rehanjaspal@yahoo.com to kis aas se kahein, ki aarzu kya hai.... |
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27th April 2007, 10:27 AM
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tusi bilkul sahi keha ki tuhanu eh dard aapna lagiya kyuki dard da roop be-shak alag hove....par teec ek jehi hi hundi hai.....ao umeed hai tuhada saath hun hamesha mileyga....! fursat milan te main tuhanu PM kar devengi, aapne barey... god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th April 2007, 10:30 AM
Thanx a lot for the quick reply...
je kar tusi yahho msnger use karde o tan plz plz add me my id for yahoo msngr is lucky.rehan@yahoo.co.in. i hope u 'll. and eh sath jarur agge tak jayega.... once again, thanx. i m glad to meet u... .....Lucky to kis aas se kahein, ki aarzu kya hai.... |
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30th April 2007, 11:11 AM
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lucky ji mere paas yahoo id to hai...par main chat bagara nahi karti hoon...so pls sorry,...mujhe bhi jaha aapse baat karna accha lagga. shukriya .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd May 2007, 01:53 AM
Hi Sunita!
Very well expressions.... Looked like voiced my pain the way i wish i could.... Ek hi to kaam hei jo ham sab karte hein .. Apno kee chaahaton ne diye anginat fareb, rote rahe leepat ke har eak azanabi se ham. Warm Regards Susheel इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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7th May 2007, 11:12 AM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th May 2007, 11:31 AM
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aap ka dost Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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28th May 2007, 11:09 PM
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har sher apni dastan byaan kar gaya mano. bahut khub likha hai. daad hazir hai. aapki dost nira |
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29th May 2007, 01:53 PM
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shukriya aapne humey padda aur hamarey likhey ko pasand kiya, yu hi aatey rahiyega. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th May 2007, 01:56 PM
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aapki daad hamari sar - aankho.n par, aur aap hamarey dil mei.n kaha thi aap, 3-4 dino se dikhai hi nahi di aap. aatey raha kijiye hum aapko miss kartey hai.nkush rahiye aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th May 2007, 06:28 PM
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kya bat hai...merii dad kabul kijiya....bahut hii acha laga par ke...itna acha ki puchiya hii mat ek ek line hii apne aap me lazawab thi ...ese hii likhte rahiye.... aur shayri kii mahfil ko rahan karte rahiye ...aapki chotii sis~ saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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31st May 2007, 05:26 PM
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meri pyari c sona...saloni...soni... tumhara review padkar bahut accha lagga....tumne meri gazal etne pyar se padda aur pasand kiya..bahut bahut shukriya dear....yu hi saath dena aapni diiii ka....aur tumhari diii to tumharey saath hai hi lots of love tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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