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22nd November 2007, 05:53 PM
khuwab ki chadar aurdh ke main ne raat guzari bin tere
kanch ka anchaL tham ke main ne zeast ha kati bin tere
zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai
marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....
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23rd November 2007, 02:44 PM
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khuwab ki chadar aurdh ke main ne raat guzari bin tere
kanch ka anchaL tham ke main ne zeast ha kati bin tere
zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai
marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....
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Assalam-O-Alaykum Neha ji...........wah bahut khoob ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne ese hi likhte rahiye likh payengi bas ek baat kehna chahoonga font thoda chota use kijiye daad hazir hai..................
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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24th November 2007, 01:32 AM
thanks kashif...
thank u very much 4 ur suggestion.
i will be carefull 4 the next time.
thanks again .
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salam neha! -
24th November 2007, 03:59 AM
acha likha hai aap ne mujhe aap ki poetry achi lagi.
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25th November 2007, 08:19 PM
bahut khub....bahut pyara likhi hai app...keep it up
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26th November 2007, 05:54 PM
waah mazaa aagaya aapki shayri padkhkar
lagta hai aapko shayri ki baarikiyon ka achi tarhaan se knowledge hai
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28th November 2007, 04:09 PM
wah neha ji,, bahut khub likha hai aapne,, bas aise hi likhte rahiye,,
best of luck.
"Laut kar khud to kabhi aata nahi,is duniya mai koi..
par yaad bahut aata hai,, chhodkar jaane wala.."
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28th November 2007, 07:02 PM
jat_indori ji aapne galti se yeah naayab words mujhe likh bheje hain plz inhein neha ko forward kar dijye kyunki she is the one who deserve such words.
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29th November 2007, 09:39 PM
Jab pyaar ki baat adhoori ho..
jab beech me thori doori ho..
jab milna bohut zaroori ho…
per milne mein majboori ho..
tum dil me yaad jaga lena..
kuch pyaar ke deep jala lena..
jab mujh se milne aa na sako..
aur yaad se bahar jaa na sako…
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jab pyar -
29th November 2007, 09:42 PM
Jab pyaar ki baat adhoori ho..
jab beech me thori doori ho..
jab milna bohut zaroori ho…
per milne mein majboori ho..
tum dil me yaad jaga lena..
kuch pyaar ke deep jala lena..
jab mujh se milne aa na sako..
aur yaad se bahar jaa na sako…
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29th November 2007, 09:43 PM
UTRA THA CHAND HUMARE ANGAN ME,
PAR SIRRON KO GAWARA NA THA,
HUM TOH SITRON SE BHE BAGAWAT KAR LATE,
PAR KIYA KARE WO CHAND HE HUMARA NA THA.
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29th November 2007, 10:16 PM
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khuwab ki chadar aurdh ke main ne raat guzari bin tere
kanch ka anchaL tham ke main ne zeast ha kati bin tere
zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai
marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....
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acha likha hai aap ne............u hi likhte rahiyega.........dad kabul farmaye.......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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Ankhe taras gai meri .................. !! -
29th November 2007, 11:06 PM
Ankhe taras gai meri ek jhalak paane ko teri ,
jindgi veeraan ban gai yaad me teri !
kis kadar byaan karoon main haalat apni ,
bejaan saa padaa hu chhahat me teri !
ab kyon or tadfaate ho e-sanam ,
palke bichhaaye bethaa hu tere intjaar o-sanam !!
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har koi -
30th November 2007, 11:39 AM
Har koyi har kisi ka yaar nahi hota,
Har dost wafadaar nahin hota...
ye to dil milne ki baat hain,
warna saat feron main bhi pyaar nahi hota...
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~*~4 GuLL khana... -
1st December 2007, 05:37 PM
hi n wasalam.
thanks k apko meri poetry achi lagi
sorry 4 late reply.papers main busy hon.thats y,late hogae.
thanks again.
bye
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Thanks $imi ji "SIMRAN" -
1st December 2007, 05:42 PM
hi n salam...
thanks apne reply kia.1 reply "apki 1 post par" main ne bhi kia ha aur us post par hi apke reply ka wait kar rahi hon....so...
where r u???
always b be happy dear.
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~*~4 Minchy -
1st December 2007, 05:51 PM
hi...pawan or minchy...
what ever...
i dont know ur name...
plz clear it whats ur name? main kya keh kar apko reply karon?well thanks apko meri poetry achi lagi...apki tarif ka andaz muje buhat acha laga.
thanks.
hamesha khush rahen.
take care bye...
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~* 4 Jit_indori ji -
1st December 2007, 06:00 PM
thanks 4 ur compliment...
well kya naam ha apka...?
kya kahon apko?
thank u 4 ur reply.
aur kia send kardia ha apne pawan ko "k jo according 2 pawan main deserve karti hon"mje send kardijiyee.
waiting...
thanks again
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...4 Lamha... -
1st December 2007, 06:08 PM
hi ....
thanks.
apki dad tu main ne qabool karli ab app mera shukriya qabool kar lijiyee
wese jo shairana andaz apne tarif karne k liye use kia muje wo buhat pasand ha isliye main ne bhi apko usi andaz main thanks kaha.
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hi.... -
1st December 2007, 06:15 PM
hi
singhmar
n
dineshdharvi
wese apne mere ly kuch likha tu nahin phir bhi u have read it so thanks.
muje tu laga ap dono appas main hi 1 dosre se bat kar rahe hain.
thanks
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1st December 2007, 09:57 PM
Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho
Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho
Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge
Ye ehsas janna ho to dil haar kar dekho
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2nd December 2007, 01:28 PM
hum kisi se baat nahi kar rahe hai but humne sab padha to hume bhi laga ke hum bhi reply kare aur kuch dil ke armaan hum bheje.
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3rd December 2007, 11:00 PM
Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,
sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai,
Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar,
To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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4th December 2007, 09:52 PM
Kyun pyaar karne ki hadein hoti hein,
Kyun dil dene ki waje hoti hein,
Kyun jazbaaton ko dabana padta hai,
Kyun iss dil ko samjana padta hai,
Kyun har dil ko ye mehsoos nahin hota,
Kyun sabko ye manzoor nahin hota,
Kyun dil se dil nahin milta,
Kyun pyaar ka phool nahin khilta,
Kyun dil ke naghme dil nahin gaata,
Dil mein kya hai ye keh nahin pata,
Kya dil dene ki yahi saza hai,
Kya pyaar karne mein yahi mazaa hai?
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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6th December 2007, 12:55 PM
HELLO NEHA JI
KALAM UTHATA HOON KALLAM LIKHTA HOON
LIKHNE SE PEHLE TUMHE SALAAM KARTA HOON
KYA KHOOB DARD VRI DASTAN LIKHA HAI AAP NE
ZINDAGI NAHI MUJHE DOSTI SE PYARI
DOSTI PE HAZIR HAI JAAN HAMARI
ANKHON ME HAMARE AANSU.. HAI TO KYA
JAAN SE PYARI HAI MUSKAAN AAP KI.
O K NEHA JI ALLAH HAFIZ
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4 "MD sharfe ALAM" -
10th December 2007, 02:35 PM
asalamualekum n hi
thanks a lot....
tareef karne k liye shukriya....shyd reply karne main late hogae.
sorry...actually i m busy in my papers....so
take care n ALLAH hafiz...
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Bahut khub -
5th February 2008, 11:47 AM
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khuwab ki chadar aurdh ke main ne raat guzari bin tere
kanch ka anchaL tham ke main ne zeast ha kati bin tere
zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai
marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....
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its getting intresting bhaut achi hai aap ki gazal
Dil se roye magar hoto se muskura baithe, yun hi hum kisi se wafa nibha baithe
Wo hame ek lamha na de paye, Jinke liye hum apni zindagi gawa baithe ..... kaisi lagi hamari koshish
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7th February 2008, 09:25 PM
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its getting intresting bhaut achi hai aap ki gazal
Dil se roye magar hoto se muskura baithe, yun hi hum kisi se wafa nibha baithe
Wo hame ek lamha na de paye, Jinke liye hum apni zindagi gawa baithe ..... kaisi lagi hamari koshish
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thanks really thanksmeri itni purani post apne dhond li main tu khod bhi bhool gai thi.
apne jo kaha tha wo kar ke dikha diya.
apke sare pm bhi main ne parh liyee hain thanks.
u r so nice
take care ji
GOD blessu
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7th February 2008, 09:38 PM
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Dil se roye magar hoto se muskura baithe, yun hi hum kisi se wafa nibha baithe
Wo hame ek lamha na de paye, Jinke liye hum apni zindagi gawa baithe ..... kaisi lagi hamari koshish
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wao buhat buhat khubsorat likha hai apne.
touching my heart.
feeling nice.
keep it up
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8th February 2008, 12:43 PM
Aapne PM padhi to par reply nahi kiya any problem i was expecting your reply
Reply if possible
Tkae care
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9th February 2008, 08:10 PM
Khaatin hai rah-guzr, thori dooR sath chalo bohut karra hai safr thori dooR sath chalo tamaam umr kahaan koi sath dai-ta hai yeh jan ta hooN magar thori dooR sath chalo Nashe mein choor hooN mai bhi tumhein bhi hosh nahin baRRa maza ho agar thori dooR sath chalo yeh aik shub ki mulaqaat bhi ghaNimat hai kise hai kal ki khabr thori dooR sath chalo abhi to jaag rahae hein chiragh rahooN ke abhi hai dooR sahr thori dooR sath chalo tawaf-e-manzil- janah hamein bhi karna hai Azim tum bhi agar thori dooR sath chalo very nice
Anil Arora
Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
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10th February 2008, 07:13 AM
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Aapne PM padhi to par reply nahi kiya any problem i was expecting your reply
Reply if possible
Tkae care
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sorry kardoni reply thora prob tha
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Khaatin hai rah-guzr, thori dooR sath chalo
bohut karra hai safr thori dooR sath chalo
tamaam umr kahaan koi sath dai-ta hai
yeh jan ta hooN magar thori dooR sath chalo
Nashe mein choor hooN mai bhi tumhein bhi hosh nahin
baRRa maza ho agar thori dooR sath chalo
yeh aik shub ki mulaqaat bhi ghaNimat hai
kise hai kal ki khabr thori dooR sath chalo
abhi to jaag rahae hein chiragh rahooN ke
abhi hai dooR sahr thori dooR sath chalo
tawaf-e-manzil- janah hamein bhi karna hai
Azim tum bhi agar thori dooR sath chalo
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11th February 2008, 01:12 PM
hi,really aapki shayri padhke aisa lagta hai jaise,aapke dil main bahut dard hai....bhagwan se prarthna kerta hu ki jaisa main sochta hu waisa no ho.....
aapke shabdh dil ke jhakhmo ko hara ker dete hai.........
aise hi hamare sath apne dil ka dard bantate rehna....
from....yash
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11th February 2008, 01:17 PM
aasma ke tare puchte haihamse,
"kya tumhe aaj bhi intezar hai uske laut aane ka...
or ye dil muskurake kehta hai
"muje to ab tak yakin hi nahi usake chale jane ka"
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11th February 2008, 03:08 PM
Assalam alaikum
Hey neha
Who is this in photo is it you reply soon will give u comment on photo
Allah hafiz
Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath
Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko
Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna
s@L@uddinSuh@n...
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11th February 2008, 05:15 PM
Gairon se kuch gila nahi
apno se kuch mila nahi
hum wo gam ki kitaab hai aye dost
jo tumne abhi tak padha nahi
zindagi itni dard bhari kyun hai
Dard aapko hai to tkaleef hame kyun hai
mere pal pal ke khbar rakhne wale dost
Tu aaj mujhse bekhabar kyun hai
Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath
Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko
Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna
s@L@uddinSuh@n...
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15th February 2008, 03:22 PM
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aasma ke tare puchte haihamse,
"kya tumhe aaj bhi intezar hai uske laut aane ka...
or ye dil muskurake kehta hai
"muje to ab tak yakin hi nahi usake chale jane ka"
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very nice choice
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15th February 2008, 03:25 PM
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Assalam alaikum
Hey neha
Who is this in photo is it you reply soon will give u comment on photo
Allah hafiz
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wa salam
kese hain?
plz no comment on it!...its my favourite
this is not me...main asi nahin hoon
bye
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