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Wo mujhe phir yaad aane lage hai -
14th February 2007, 05:08 PM
Hello Friends..
Sabhi dosto ko Salam ke saath Valentine day ke bahut saari mubarak baad, khuda kare ke aaj ke din sabhi doston ke liye khushiyu bhara ho..
Aaj ka din meri liye bhi yadgare din tha aaj subah subah mujhe kisi ki kami ka ahsaas hua or humun ahsaas ko aap sabhi ke samne kalam band kerne ki koshish ki. or is umeed ke saath ki aap sab humari galtiyun ke maaf kerte hua mere is ahsaas ko samjhege.. shukriya
Bhulne me jine zamane lage thy,
Wo Aaj phir kyu mujhe yaad aane lage hain.
Wo tera mujhese yun milna or sharma ke hasna,
Wo baaton me shokhi or shararat se aankhen,
Wo tera hansta hua chera or urta hua aanchal,
wo bikhre huye geshu or samunder see aankhe.
Bhulne me jine zamane lage thy,
Wo aaj phir kyu mujhe yaad aane lage hain.
Wo tera mujko satana phir cupke se aa jana,
Wo pholon ke baagon me apna ashiyana,
Wo tere honton ka hilna or aankhon me paani,
Wo mere baalon ko chu ker mujhse bicharna.
Bhulne me jine zamane lage thy,
Wo aaj phir kyu mujhe yaad aane lage hain.
SHAAN
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wo mujhe tanah choor gaya to yah yakeen hua,
koi shaksh zaroori nahi kisi ke liye.
Shaan
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14th February 2007, 07:49 PM
Shaan ji...
Behad khoobsoorat Rachna ke saath aap Valentine's Day pe haazir hue...
Aapko bhi V-day ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad...
Pyar se sanni hoti hai har yaad.. jab yaad aati hai.. to kabhi khush kar ke jaati hai, aur kabhi dard de ke jaati hai.,.
Meri daad kubool keejiye..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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14th February 2007, 09:16 PM
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Originally Posted by chaahat123
Shaan ji...
Behad khoobsoorat Rachna ke saath aap Valentine's Day pe haazir hue...
Aapko bhi V-day ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad...
Pyar se sanni hoti hai har yaad.. jab yaad aati hai.. to kabhi khush kar ke jaati hai, aur kabhi dard de ke jaati hai.,.
Meri daad kubool keejiye..
~Priya
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Priya ko shaan ka salam,
hum Shukriya dena chahege jo aap ne meri nazm ko pasand kyaa. or aap ne bilkul sahi kaha hai ki yaad kabhi khushi dete hai to kabhi dheer saare derd or gum..
aap hamesha hansete or mukurate rahe...
Aapka dost
SHAAN
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14th February 2007, 10:32 PM
adaab aur namskaar shaan ji,
aaj ke din aapki yeH yaadoN se juRii hui kosisH ko paRH ke achha laga aapne apni yaad bhare ash'aar ko bahot hi khoobsoorti ke sath pesh kiya hai dua karta huN khuda aapko khus rakheN
aise hi likhte raheN mere dost, apna khayal rakheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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15th February 2007, 09:44 AM
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adaab aur namskaar shaan ji,
aaj ke din aapki yeH yaadoN se juRii hui kosisH ko paRH ke achha laga aapne apni yaad bhare ash'aar ko bahot hi khoobsoorti ke sath pesh kiya hai dua karta huN khuda aapko khus rakheN
aise hi likhte raheN mere dost, apna khayal rakheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
dhaval
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Dhaval ji ko shaan ka salam,Aap ko acha laga jaan ker khushi hui. ye to mere ahsaas the jo humne aap logo ke samne rakhe aap hamare liye zaroor duaa kere or saath hi hum bhi aap ke liye yahi dua karege aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahen...amin
ab ijaazat de
Aapka dost
SHAAN
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19th February 2007, 11:50 PM
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Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi
Hello Friends..
Sabhi dosto ko Salam ke saath Valentine day ke bahut saari mubarak baad, khuda kare ke aaj ke din sabhi doston ke liye khushiyu bhara ho..
Aaj ka din meri liye bhi yadgare din tha aaj subah subah mujhe kisi ki kami ka ahsaas hua or humun ahsaas ko aap sabhi ke samne kalam band kerne ki koshish ki. or is umeed ke saath ki aap sab humari galtiyun ke maaf kerte hua mere is ahsaas ko samjhege.. shukriya
Bhulne me jine zamane lage thy,
Wo Aaj phir kyu mujhe yaad aane lage hain.
Wo tera mujhese yun milna or sharma ke hasna,
Wo baaton me shokhi or shararat se aankhen,
Wo tera hansta hua chera or urta hua aanchal,
wo bikhre huye geshu or samunder see aankhe.
Bhulne me jine zamane lage thy,
Wo aaj phir kyu mujhe yaad aane lage hain.
Wo tera mujko satana phir cupke se aa jana,
Wo pholon ke baagon me apna ashiyana,
Wo tere honton ka hilna or aankhon me paani,
Wo mere baalon ko chu ker mujhse bicharna.
Bhulne me jine zamane lage thy,
Wo aaj phir kyu mujhe yaad aane lage hain.
SHAAN
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wo mujhe tanah choor gaya to yah yakeen hua,
koi shaksh zaroori nahi kisi ke liye.
Shaan
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wah....
dard la ehsass kabhi kabhi kisi pal mein kitna khash hotahai. yahan iski ek jhakal dikhi mujhe.
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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26th February 2007, 04:37 PM
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wah....
dard la ehsass kabhi kabhi kisi pal mein kitna khash hotahai. yahan iski ek jhakal dikhi mujhe.
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Thanx sakhi ji jo aapne humare ehsaas ko samjha, aapne bilkul sahi kaha hai Her wo pal jo kisi apne ke saath guzara gaya ho bahut khaas hota hai.. aap sub ki reply hi hume kuch likhne ka hausala deti hai
hum dua karege ki aap khush rahe or muskurate rahe
take care
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28th February 2007, 06:20 PM
shaan ji mana aaj aapki rachna padhi bahut pyarri lagi.
starting hi itni achi hai kya kaha aga.
bass uhin likhta rahiya.
~saloni
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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28th February 2007, 06:31 PM
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shaan ji mana aaj aapki rachna padhi bahut pyarri lagi.
starting hi itni achi hai kya kaha aga.
bass uhin likhta rahiya.
~saloni
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Thanx saloni ji,
Aapsub ne hi mujhe hosla diya hai kuch likhne ke liye. werna hum is kabil kaha thy. thanx aap isee tarah hume perte rahe.
Aap hameshaa hanste or muskurate rahe
keep smile..........
take care
SHAAN
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2nd March 2007, 06:03 AM
aaye haaye, ek thandi aanh bharne pe majboor karti hai kahiN na kahiN aapki ye rachna, aur behad khubsurati se aapne ise bayaaN v kiya hai, khushi hui aapko padh kar, guzarish yahi rahegi ki aage v yuNhi likhte rahiye aap...!
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aaye haaye, ek thandi aanh bharne pe majboor karti hai kahiN na kahiN aapki ye rachna, aur behad khubsurati se aapne ise bayaaN v kiya hai, khushi hui aapko padh kar, guzarish yahi rahegi ki aage v yuNhi likhte rahiye aap...!
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Thanx ghayal shayar ji, Aapko humari post itnee pasand aai. ye to aap sab ki mahobat or haosla afzai hai jo hum apne ahsaas ko aap ke samne pesh ker paate hain. aap esee trah hume parte rahe hum koshish karenge ki kuch or likh sake. thanx
Hamesha khush rahe or muskurate rahen
take care
SHAAN
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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24th October 2008, 09:33 PM
Assalam-o-Alaykum Tariq Sahab
Aapki yeh Gazal pata nahi kese main padh nahi paya aaj is umda Gazal par nazr padhi to bahut acchi lagimeri daad hazir hai
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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Assalam-o-Alaykum Tariq Sahab
Aapki yeh Gazal pata nahi kese main padh nahi paya aaj is umda Gazal par nazr padhi to bahut acchi lagimeri daad hazir hai
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W. Assalam kashif bhai der k maafi chunga.. bhut achaa laga aapki reply ko padh kar...
aapki ye 4 line bhi bhut kuch byan karti hai.......
yun hi likhte rahe
Allah Hafiz
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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