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A thought...! - 16th December 2005, 08:14 PM

Hi Friends,

Saw some ppl very close to me go thru some incidences which made me write this...We all boast of being modern...but still many of us have those century old ideology....

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Jhoote sapne aankhon me kab tak hum sajaayenge
Toot jaane par unke fir aansoo hum bahaayenge

Hain hum insaan, Insaan honaa khud me ek sazaa
Jaane kis roz hum yeh baat samajh paayenge

Jeena humko hai khokle rivaazon ko nibhaate hue
Dharm-o-mazhab ke isi bandhan me jiye jaayenge

Hote jo pancchi naa baandh paati sarhadein bhi humen
Hain jo insaan, bebas bin pankhon ke kahaan jaayenge

Reh jaayegii yeh zindagii bhii ek samjahautaa bankar
Jaankar bhi hum kucch naa kar paayenge...........!
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16th December 2005, 08:25 PM

pulkit ji chan panktiyo mein bahut kuch kaha hai aapne dil ko chu gaya hai...............


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16th December 2005, 08:35 PM

I agree Pulkit buddy...

Modern pehnave se ya rehan sehan se nahi hota... magar apni soch se hota hai... jis din hum yeh samjh jaayenge to hum modern ho jayenge... kehne ko bahut kuch hai abhi itna hi kahoonga... logon ko shayad sochna chahiye.... ki kya unki soch modern hai??...


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Re: A thought...! - 16th December 2005, 10:02 PM

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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Hi Friends,

Saw some ppl very close to me go thru some incidences which made me write this...We all boast of being modern...but still many of us have those century old ideology....

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Jhoote sapne aankhon me kab tak hum sajaayenge
Toot jaane par unke fir aansoo hum bahaayenge

sahi kaha..

Hain hum insaan, Insaan honaa khud me ek sazaa
Jaane kis roz hum yeh baat samajh paayenge

waqt hi bataa sakta hai..

Jeena humko hai khokle rivaazon ko nibhaate hue
Dharm-o-mazhab ke isi bandhan me jiye jaayenge

hmm.. sacch hai..

Hote jo pancchi naa baandh paati sarhadein bhi humen
Hain jo insaan, bebas bin pankhon ke kahaan jaayenge

jahaan raahein le jaayein....

Reh jaayegii yeh zindagii bhii ek samjahautaa bankar
Jaankar bhi hum kucch naa kar paayenge...........!

sacch kucch nahi kar paayeinge..
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Pulkit,

bahut hi pyara or accha likha hai...

har shabd mein ik sacchayi hai.....

likhte raho yu hin...


SHWETA


jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...


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hi - 16th December 2005, 10:28 PM

Hey pulkit,
Very nice and deep thoughts..I really liked it.Well I was really worried about u since long..u should have replied me at least once..
Take care and always be happy,
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16th December 2005, 10:34 PM

jab aaye hi ho
to kijiye kuch jindo.N ki tarah

murdo.N ki tarah jiye
to kya khak jiye.


as you write more and more personal
it becomes more and more universal.
   
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16th December 2005, 10:59 PM

very nice...pulkit bhai...wonderful
take care


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Dekhna chahta hun..
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16th December 2005, 11:42 PM

bahaut badhiya likkha hai pulkit aapne...

Hote jo pancchi naa baandh paati sarhadein bhi humen
Hain jo insaan, bebas bin pankhon ke kahaan jaayenge

bilkul sahi bayaan kiya hai aapne.......bahaut umda likkha hai.


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17th December 2005, 02:38 PM

Pulkit mere yaad, raha nahi gaya...tumhaari is rachna ne sochne per mazboor kar diya.

Bahut khoob mere yaar...


Jhoote sapne aankhon me kab tak hum sajaayenge
Toot jaane par unke fir aansoo hum bahaayenge


bilkul sahi kaha mere dost....sapne sapne hi hote haiN...agar wo mann behlaaein to achchha per wahi sapne agar sir-dard ban jaayeiN..to unke saath jeena bewkoofi hi hoti hai...kyoNki reallyti ...kitni bhi badsoorat ho...kam-s-kam jhoothe sapnoN se behtar hoti hi hai.

Khush raho...yooNhi likhte raho..

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17th December 2005, 03:35 PM

Hello Pulkit ji........aaj aapki baaton jaise hila kar rakh diya ......aapka har alfaaz asar karta chala gaya......

Aur kya Kahun Aapse .......bas Likhte Jaayiye.......
   
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17th December 2005, 05:57 PM

Pullu bhai

Har sher apni kahani aage badhata sa dikha ... umda khayal umda rachna ko janam dete hai aapki rachna padh ke shumaar ho raha hai aisa

likhte rhaiye ... panne kale karte rahiye.,...

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Re: A thought...! - 17th December 2005, 06:24 PM

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Hi Friends,

Saw some ppl very close to me go thru some incidences which made me write this...We all boast of being modern...but still many of us have those century old ideology....

======================================
Jhoote sapne aankhon me kab tak hum sajaayenge
Toot jaane par unke fir aansoo hum bahaayenge

Hain hum insaan, Insaan honaa khud me ek sazaa
Jaane kis roz hum yeh baat samajh paayenge

Jeena humko hai khokle rivaazon ko nibhaate hue
Dharm-o-mazhab ke isi bandhan me jiye jaayenge

Hote jo pancchi naa baandh paati sarhadein bhi humen
Hain jo insaan, bebas bin pankhon ke kahaan jaayenge

Reh jaayegii yeh zindagii bhii ek samjahautaa bankar
Jaankar bhi hum kucch naa kar paayenge...........!
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oh! Bhaiya,

sapne to adhikaansh hote hi hai jo ki toot jaate hai.. kuchh nahi tootata to wo hai haqiqat.. aur jab sapno ko haqiqat me laane ka dhirdh sankalp ho jaaye to wo bhi nahi toot paata.. sirf sapne dekhane jaroori nahi hai.. unako haqiqat me badalne ki himmat bhi honi chahiye..

hmm Insaan hai yo isame bhi apna hi ek maza hai tabhi to har bhaawnaao ko samajh paane ki kshamata hai..

well is baar par sehmat hoon, lekin in khokhale riwaajo ko toda jaa sakta hai..aksar hum darr jaate hai.. samaj kya kahega.. koi kya kehaga etc.. lekin ye nahi soch paate ki harek naye raaste ke liye ek leader chahiye jo lead kar sake.. samaj khood usaki taraf chal padega.. bas wo leading ki himmat aa jaaye..

haan ye mai bhi sochati hoon kaash mai ek pankchhi hoti mai bhaiya se milane ud ke chali jaati.. is baat ka koi jawaab nahi hai.. sehmat hoon aapse..

nahi nahi.. ye zindagi bas ek samjhauta nahi ho sakati.. ise to jeena hai..pure hosh-o-hawaash me zindadili ke saath jeena hai..


jyaada bol gayi..

aapne bahoot bahoot achha likha hai bhaiya.. aise hi likhate rahiye lekin khush hokar.. have faith and confidence then start ur work.. every element of this nature are with u.. they are only and only for ur help.. justmake urself to take their help

fir jyaada ho gaya.. waise mai bol sakti hoon aapko aapki gudiya hoon na.. apna achhe se khayaal rakhiye..

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20th December 2005, 12:07 AM

Hi Mehul,

Gald that u liked my expression... do keep encouraging me like this bro.. TC....!


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20th December 2005, 12:10 AM

Rohin,

Sahi kaha tumne..Oopari pehnaave se ideology nahi badalti....We can just hope that ppl will try to think over it...!

Gald that u liek it buddy... Keep encuraging me.. Do TC


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Shweta,

Gald that u liked it buddy... Apne aaspaas kucch aisa dekha ke aankhne bhar aayin....bass apni helpleness paper par express akrne ki koshsih thhi....u kep supooting me like that.. Tc...!


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Pari,

Are baba... mujhe pakadna ho to best is to leave a Pm on the site... I keep on checking it... Hav been going a bit too busy yaar.. so ghar aakar messenger login hi nahi kiya...!

Khair... Swar ka mama apni gudiya se regulartouch me rahega.. promise

Tumhe accha laga...khushi hui...bass yun hi likh diya thha dil ke ehsaas ko...!


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20th December 2005, 12:31 AM

jab aaye hi ho
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murdo.N ki tarah jiye
to kya khak jiye.


Kyaa baat kahi hai aapne paplu bhai...Sach jiyo to zindadili se... Aise hi saath det rahiyega bhai...apna khayal rakhiyega...!


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20th December 2005, 12:32 AM

Hi karthik,

Glad that u liked the expression... Aise hi saath dete raho...Do Tc..


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Hi Farhana,

Glad that u liked the effort buddy....Haan agaar aap mujhe aap kahnegi to mujhe bhi aap hi kehna padhega... which i dont like...so tum i think is better...!

Do TC...!


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20th December 2005, 12:36 AM

Chaand bhai,

Ise badhi khushi mere liye kyaa hogi ke aapko meri rachna itni pasand aayi... Bhaai sach hai ke jhoote sunhere sapnon se hakkekat acchi hai... magar aankhon me sapne naa ho to bhi to woh veeran rahengi.... to yeh to humaari aadat hai ke Sapne dekhnege bhi...aur too jaane par aansoo bhi bahaaynge...!

Aise hi saath dete rahiye...apna khayl rakhiyega...!


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21st December 2005, 11:12 AM

Dearest Pullu,
Bahut hi accha likha hai tumne. Some lines really made me think... esp.

Jeena humko hai khokle rivaazon ko nibhaate hue
Dharm-o-mazhab ke isi bandhan me jiye jaayenge

Thoda kiddish hai par man kiya...

Kab tak hai zingadi na maloom humein phir bhi
Kal ki soch mein ghutkar marte hi jayeinge

Kya hai pana, kiun sochoon mein
Jo bhi ho, har pal huste bitayeinge

Ab tum husna mat...


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Sandhya JI,

aapko accha laga jaankar khushi hui...Bass jo dil me aaya wohi likhne ki koshsihs ki thhi... Saath deti rahiyega.. apna khayal rakhiye...!


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21st December 2005, 02:14 PM

Kunal,

Dil ke ehsaas bayaan kiye thhe...tumhe pasand aaye accha laga...

Saath dete rehna...Do TC....!


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Re: Re: A thought...! - 21st December 2005, 02:26 PM

Dearest Gudiya,

A re baba yeh maine apne oopar nahi likha hai... kuchc aur log hain.. jo itna kareeb hain ke unka dard bhi apna hi hai...!

Confidence bhi thhek hai... sab kucch thheek hai... but at times u become helpless... aap to confidence bhia dikhate ho...aur efforts bhi karne ko taiyyar ho...Still aise factors ho jaate hain ke kucch nahi kiya jaa sakta except Compromise....!

Zindagi compromise ban hi jaati hai gudiya...hum usse compromise karke hansna seekha hi lete hain....!

Tum chinta naa karo...This is not on me...kabhi baat hogi tab bataoonga...apna khayal rakhna acche se...


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Dear Shalini!

Welll...Tum koshish kar sakti ho khud ko samjhaane ki, kal ki soch dil me naa lane ki...but wont it be a compromise?

Mujhe hansi nahi aayi...apna khayal rekhna...Take good care...


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Re: A thought...! - 21st December 2005, 05:24 PM

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Hi Friends,

Saw some ppl very close to me go thru some incidences which made me write this...We all boast of being modern...but still many of us have those century old ideology....

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Jhoote sapne aankhon me kab tak hum sajaayenge
Toot jaane par unke fir aansoo hum bahaayenge

Hain hum insaan, Insaan honaa khud me ek sazaa
Jaane kis roz hum yeh baat samajh paayenge

Jeena humko hai khokle rivaazon ko nibhaate hue
Dharm-o-mazhab ke isi bandhan me jiye jaayenge

Hote jo pancchi naa baandh paati sarhadein bhi humen
Hain jo insaan, bebas bin pankhon ke kahaan jaayenge

Reh jaayegii yeh zindagii bhii ek samjahautaa bankar
Jaankar bhi hum kucch naa kar paayenge...........!
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Dear pulkit,

well tumhare thought padhe bahut achchhe lage.. likhate rah kero.. meri vyastata din b din badhati ja rahi hai.. es vajah se main regular nahi rah pa raha hoon. abhi phir jana ho raha hai..bas kahunga khud ka kheyaal rakhe..


Akant...


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21st December 2005, 07:12 PM

Hmmm Shalini,

Accha likha hai...aur sochj bhi sahi hai... samjhauta karna hi hai to hanske karlo...neways...tusi khayal shayal rakhna....TC..


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Re: Re: A thought...! - 21st December 2005, 07:14 PM

Akant bhai,

Kaise hain? ummeed hai acche se hi honge aur Anshi bhi maze me hogi...!

Bhaai aapko pasand aaye ehsaas jaankaar khushi hui...Aapki daad humesha se khaas hai.. kyunki aap ne hi baarekiyan bataayi hain mujhe likhne ki...Saath dete rahiyega...apna khayal bhi rakhiye...!

Bhai mashroof hain acchi baat hai... magar kabhi kabhi aate rahiye aise hi...Do Tc..!


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21st December 2005, 09:00 PM

Pulkit bhai.....

shayad samajh gaya hoon.....magar zindagi to samjhauton ka naam hai......kai sarhaedein insaanon ne banayi hain to kayi is dil ne jise laanghna kai dafa namumkin hota hai.....aur ye gam kahein ye phir khushi ....ta-umr saath rehti hai.......

ehsaas pasand aaye....daad kabool karna......

khush rahoo....

tumhara bhai.....



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Re: A thought...! - 26th December 2005, 12:58 PM

U have totally changed buddy!!!ur shayri style....evrythin!!!these lines r easy 2 rem but ......"bhed ye gahara..baat zaraa si"......

Dharm-o-mazhab ke isi bandhan me jiye jaayenge
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pulkit ji - 26th December 2005, 04:47 PM

bhaut hi achha likha hai aapne ek ek sabad dil ki gharee se aa raha hai . uhi likhte rahiye aur logon ke dilon ko chute rahiye ,apna dhyaan rakhiye

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pulkit ji - 26th December 2005, 04:48 PM

bhaut dno se aapko padne ka muka nahi mila mante hai aap busy hain par kuch samay nikal kar mujhe padkar agar aap kuch likhe to mujhe bhaut achha lagega ,aur jo bhi aapko lage ki sudhar yaha hona chahiye plz behichak bataye taki main bhi apni kavita mai wo gharee laa sakun aur aapki hi tarah dilon ko chu sakun
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Re: A thought...! - 26th December 2005, 07:28 PM

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Hi Friends,

Saw some ppl very close to me go thru some incidences which made me write this...We all boast of being modern...but still many of us have those century old ideology....

======================================
Jhoote sapne aankhon me kab tak hum sajaayenge
Toot jaane par unke fir aansoo hum bahaayenge

Hain hum insaan, Insaan honaa khud me ek sazaa
Jaane kis roz hum yeh baat samajh paayenge

Jeena humko hai khokle rivaazon ko nibhaate hue
Dharm-o-mazhab ke isi bandhan me jiye jaayenge

Hote jo pancchi naa baandh paati sarhadein bhi humen
Hain jo insaan, bebas bin pankhon ke kahaan jaayenge

Reh jaayegii yeh zindagii bhii ek samjahautaa bankar
Jaankar bhi hum kucch naa kar paayenge...........!
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Itne depressed bhi nahi hote bhaiya...
har raat ki subah hoti hai.... be positive n keep smiling..

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Pulkit bhai.....

shayad samajh gaya hoon.....magar zindagi to samjhauton ka naam hai......kai sarhaedein insaanon ne banayi hain to kayi is dil ne jise laanghna kai dafa namumkin hota hai.....aur ye gam kahein ye phir khushi ....ta-umr saath rehti hai.......

ehsaas pasand aaye....daad kabool karna......

khush rahoo....

tumhara bhai.....
Aman bhai,

Manaa zindgi samjahuton ka naam hai....haan woh sargadin paar karna namumkin ho jata hai...

Khair tusi te asi saath hain naa... pakde huwe...fir ki tension hai...

khayal rakhna apna...


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Thanks buddy...!


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Re: Re: A thought...! - 26th December 2005, 09:38 PM

Dear Judwa,

Nahi kahan change hua hoon main...i am the same as before... see my 32... ....

Tum kahyal rakho apna...acche se... Keep Smiling...!


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Re: pulkit ji - 26th December 2005, 10:14 PM

Hi Shrdh,

Thanks a lot for the appreciation...Aapko aacha laga jaankar khushi hui... I wasnt in town for three days.. so replying late..

Well...I am none to suggest you... yahaan bahut se aise log hain jinse main seekh raha hoon...Paras hain, Meena di hain... unse suggestion ljiye... will definielty help u...!

Aur mera maanna to yeh ahi ke jab aap dil se likhneg to dil ko chho hi lenge...Likhte rahiye...Do TC..!


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27th December 2005, 10:36 AM

pulkit mere bhai

akser dost mujh se kehte hain, mushi bhai khayal afreeni kyaa hoti hai, zehen ki pakeezgi kyaa hoti hai, to un doston ki khidmat mein aap ka yeh kalam pesh kiyaa jaa sakta hai, achchi soach, nek khayalaat se dil ko munawwer kerna aur hamesha insaaniyet aur bani noh-adam ka soachna yeh hi ek achchay insaan ki nishaani hai, aur insaaniyet ki daleel hai.

meri bhai pulkit bohat bohat daad qabool karo, apne kalam ki naheen balke apne khoobsurat khayalaat ki, aur zahen ki pakeezgi ki.

meri dua hai ke hamesha aisa hi achcha soacho, achcha likho aur aise hi paighaam-e-mohabbat aur akhu-at duniyaa mein phailayo,

meri duayon ko hamesha apne saath paayo ge.

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