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mujhay appsay to koi shikiyat nahi,.......... -
3rd July 2006, 05:46 PM
dosto yeh taza gazal appki nazar karta hoon umeed hai appko pasand aiyegi.......
mujhay appsay to koi shikiyat nahi, mere naseeb main he mohabbat nahi...... umar qaid ho jayegi pyar karkay, yeh wo juram hai jiski jamanat nahi...... hum aksar dil say intqaam lete hai, humay appsay to koi adabat nahi........ meri taqdeer likhkay khuda bhe mukar gaya, mere gilay pay bola yeh meri likhawat nahi....... meri chhahat hamesha chhahat he rahegi, is main khudgarzi ki milawat nahi....... tera khyaal aiye ,mera sar na jhukay, itni bebas to meri ibadat nahi....... tere dil main beshak nahi pyar lakin, teri aankho main bhe mere liye nafrat nahi....... main shoonk say tanhai main laut jaounga, bass ek baar keh do humay appsay ulfat nahi..... dunia bhar ki buraiya hongi mujh main, gar nahi hai to 'veer' main sharafat nahi....... appka dost raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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hello hi raj -
5th July 2006, 10:31 PM
app ki poetry bohat hi hit hoti hay bohat shock say pherti hoon mein.
umeed hay app hamysha likhty rahen gaye bye take care |
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mujhey appsay |
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mujhey appsay -
7th July 2006, 01:47 PM
raj bhai sach mai app bhoot acha likhty ho
apne hame dewana bana diya hai apni shayri ka ase hi likhte rahiye |
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7th July 2006, 02:07 PM
meri taqdeer likhkay khuda bhe mukar gaya,
mere gilay pay bola yeh meri likhawat nahi....... wah raj kya sher likha hai,kasam se lafz nahi hain mere pas tareef karne ke liye.u r tooooo good. bahut kuchh sikhne ko hai aapse.ummid hai aapke kalam perker main bhi kuchh achha likh paoon. |
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Re: mujhay appsay to koi shikiyat nahi,.......... -
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appki shayri sach mai bahut badiya hoti hai, appka naam dekh kar bina padey aagey jaya hi nahi jatta. aur agar kush accha padney ko milta hai to uski tareef karni hi chahiye. hum likh to nahi saktey par padna bahut accha lagta hai, aur agar dil mai dard ho to shayri aur bhi acchi lagti hai, dawa se mahsoos hoti hai. hamesha yu hi lkhtey rahna, saflata appke kadmo me hogi. appki dost.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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10th July 2006, 02:38 PM
tooooooo gooooooood
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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12th July 2006, 07:31 PM
phir se ek achi paishkash,acha laga padhkar.yeh lines achi lagi.
mujhay appsay to koi shikiyat nahi, mere naseeb main he mohabbat nahi...... umar qaid ho jayegi pyar karkay, yeh wo juram hai jiski jamanat nahi...... likhte rahiye yunhin' |
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shukria -
19th July 2006, 01:50 PM
sheeba ji app meri post par i or meri gazal ko pasand kiya main tahe dil say appka shukarguzaar hon....umeed karta hoon app yu he mujhay parhti rahogi........raj.....
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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hi raj ji |
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hi raj ji -
19th July 2006, 09:43 PM
mujhay appsay to koi shikiyat nahi,
mere naseeb main he mohabbat nahi...... umar qaid ho jayegi pyar karkay, yeh wo juram hai jiski jamanat nahi...... hum aksar dil say intqaam lete hai, humay appsay to koi adabat nahi........ meri taqdeer likhkay khuda bhe mukar gaya, mere gilay pay bola yeh meri likhawat nahi....... meri chhahat hamesha chhahat he rahegi, is main khudgarzi ki milawat nahi....... tera khyaal aiye ,mera sar na jhukay, itni bebas to meri ibadat nahi....... tere dil main beshak nahi pyar lakin, teri aankho main bhe mere liye nafrat nahi....... main shoonk say tanhai main laut jaounga, bass ek baar keh do humay appsay ulfat nahi..... dunia bhar ki buraiya hongi mujh main, gar nahi hai to 'veer' main sharafat nahi....... app ki har nazam dard-e-dil par dawaa ka kaam karti hai, issi liye to ye 'kirti 'app ko rozz parhti hai, milte nahi hai lafz apki tareef mai , ho na jaye koi guystakhi isi khata sai darti hai. app ki dost .......................... |
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hi -
6th October 2006, 04:27 PM
raj bhai sach mai app bhoot acha likhty ho
apne hame dewana bana diya hai apni shayri ka ase hi likhte rahiye mukesh kumar mukesh ji appko raj ka bhut sara pyar or namaskaar....app meri post par aiye usko itne pyar se parha or pasand kiya iske liye main appka abhari hoon umeed karta hoon yu hee app mere hum qadam ban ke saath rahoge.....take care......raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Re: mujhay appsay to koi shikiyat nahi,.......... -
6th October 2006, 08:03 PM
dunia bhar ki buraiya hongi mujh main,
gar nahi hai to 'veer' main sharafat nahi....... e lo ji kon kambakhat kahata hai veer me sharafat nahi..........mujhe to lagta hai khuda jab jab sharafat bant raha thha tab aap sabse pichhe khade thhe, aur aapke age koi khada nahi thha mean sari sharafat aapko mili.............hmmmmmmm..........kaash mein hoti uss time....hahaha joking meri taqdeer likhkay khuda bhe mukar gaya, mere gilay pay bola yeh meri likhawat nahi....... ye do line bahot achhi lagi......unhi sharafat i mean khayalat bant,te rahiye.... grazie aapke shetan chhotu ki sangat me rahakar shetan ho gai me,, aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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7th October 2006, 07:58 AM
veerji bahut hi badhiya likkha hai aapne.
"meri taqdeer likhkay khuda bhe mukar gaya, mere gilay pay bola yeh meri likhawat nahi......." bahut hi accha laga aapke shabdon ka upyog best regards aarya |
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hi -
16th October 2006, 07:48 PM
meri taqdeer likhkay khuda bhe mukar gaya,
mere gilay pay bola yeh meri likhawat nahi....... wah raj kya sher likha hai,kasam se lafz nahi hain mere pas tareef karne ke liye.u r tooooo good. bahut kuchh sikhne ko hai aapse.ummid hai aapke kalam perker main bhi kuchh achha likh paoon. nandita ji appko raj ka namaskaar......app meri post par i mujhe parha iske liye main tahe dil se appka shukarguzaar hoon.....umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath milta rahega.....take care......raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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16th October 2006, 07:55 PM
mere big b namaskaar
aapki peshkas abhi padhi maine achha laga padh ke ise aapne bahot achha likhahai har bar ki tarha aur mujhey aapse bhi koi shikayat nahi mere big b aur hamesha kosish karenga aapka ye chhotu k aapko bhi mujhse koi shikayat na ho kabhi basuhi aap likhte rahiye meri dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga aapka chhotu dhaval |
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shukria -
30th October 2006, 04:53 PM
raj ji
appki shayri sach mai bahut badiya hoti hai, appka naam dekh kar bina padey aagey jaya hi nahi jatta. aur agar kush accha padney ko milta hai to uski tareef karni hi chahiye. hum likh to nahi saktey par padna bahut accha lagta hai, aur agar dil mai dard ho to shayri aur bhi acchi lagti hai, dawa se mahsoos hoti hai. hamesha yu hi lkhtey rahna, saflata appke kadmo me hogi. appki dost Sunita Virender Singh sunita ji ko raj ka saprem namaskaar.....aap ka meri post par aana mujhe bhutacha lagta hai kiyonki aap mujhe bhut dil se parti ho....or app jaise parne wale jiske paas ho.....uske likhne me to sudhaar hoga hee....apne meri gazal ko pasand kiya iske liye main tahe dil se appka shukria aada karta hoon...umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath milta rahega.....take care.....raj.... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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11th December 2006, 06:14 PM
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dil ko choo gayi hai aapki yeh ghazal, yun hi hamesha likhte rahiyega. bye take care. umar bhar is baat ne humko rone na diya !!! |
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