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1st September 2004, 11:25 AM
Dil use chahta hi nahi
to kya karu,, pyar uske liye aata hi nahi to kya karu.. vo din raat dekhe meri surat mujhe uski surat na bhai to kya karu.. bandishe hai jo nibhaye jati hu.... jazbaat magar saath hi nahi to kya karu.. raat raat bhar jaag jaag kar vo dil ko dukhaye to kya karu.. kaise shaant rakhu khud ko.. vo jabardasti kare to kya karu.. us-se kabhi pyar hua hi nahi to kya karu... dil kabhi uski taraf jhukta hi nahi to kya karu.. Vo chahta hai bahut janti hu.. vo dhyan rakhta hai manti hu... vo magar vo nahi jo main chahti hu... vo bhagta hai jimmevariyo se ... vo nibhata hai rishte... vo chalta hai apni soch se.. vo magar pasand nahi hai mujhe.. na vo pasand hai na uski baate.n na uski chahat hai na jaroorat magar zindgi bandh gai hai uske sang... jab tak zinda hai nibhana hai ye bandhan... koi khushi nahi uske sang...koi tammanna bhi nahi.. hai to bas sard mausam hai...Ant-heen....Be-maksad jeena bhi mushkil hai u is tareh be-rang.. kabhi us per pyar na aaye to kya karu.. kabhi man uske sang khush na ho paye to kya karu.. kai baar din-rat rulata hai vo.. kai baar man ko ashant karta hai vo.. kai baar samjhati hu khud ko.. kai baar bikher jaati hu tooT kar.. kai baar roti hu...apni kismat par.. magar kya karu...kya karu.. kaise nibhaoo ye bandhan.. kaise chalao zindgi ki gaari ek pahiye k sang... kaise....? Kaise.......? kaise apna banaoo use... kaise us-se pyar kar loo...? kaise aayegi khushi lab per kaise muskuraigi zindgi us-sang...? UDAS  ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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1st September 2004, 11:44 AM
Dear Udas,
Ab maloom pada aap udas kyon hai! Bahut dard hai aapki yeh shayari me. Ek geet yaad aa raha hai: Mukesh ka gaya hua hai: Bahut diya denewale ne tujhko Aanchal hi me na samaye to kya kije Beet gaye jaise yeh din raina Baaki bhi kat jaaye dua kije.......... Jo bhi dede maalik tu kar le kubul Kabhi kabhi kaanto me khilte hai phool Waha der bhale hai andher nahin hai Ghabhra ke tu gheela mat kije Bahot diya...... |
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1st September 2004, 11:57 AM
Gauri Prakash ji.........Namaskaar!!
Pehli baar aap se baat ho rahi hai...kabhi aapki-hamari baat nahi hui... gauri ji pehli baat to ye ki mujhe is post ke response ki kissi se umeed hi nahi thi...kyuki ye jo bhi likha hai bine shabdo ko unke sanche me dhale likha hai yanit tuta-futa....aap ka response pa kar hairani aur khushi dono mili....thanx aapne response diya....aap ne jo geet likha vo maine kabhi suna to nahi...magar acchha hai...aur isme chhupa hua jo aapka sandesh hai vo bhi mehsoos kiya....magar us per amal karna itna aasaan nahi...haa kisi ko samjhane ki jab baat aati hai to shayad main bhi kuchh isi tareh likhti...magar gauri ji...zindgi ke kanto ko itni lighty to nahi le sakte aur vo kante jo khas kar poori zindgi....chubhne k liye hi ho.n aur uske uper ye tusharapaat ki unhe sir pe bhi sazana ho...magar mazboori hai .....isliye nibhaye ja rahe hai......main neeche likhti bhi hoo....kuchh is tareh...ki.. DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GA LETE HAI.........Theek hai na gauri ji...........ZINDGI GAM KA SAGAR BHI HAI.....ISKE US PAAR JANA PAREGA...........!! UDAS ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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1st September 2004, 06:03 PM
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA LETI HOO
ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO Sunita ji..aap hi ki lines likhi hain....kitna dard ..kitn adukh samete hain aap....bas kuch kaha nahin ja raha mujhse... chalti hoon.. tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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2nd September 2004, 11:59 AM
Hi Udas kya kahaoun yaaar aisa lagta hai ke hum dono ek hee kashti ke sawaar hain.Aapki ghazal padke sab poorane dard nikal aaye nice man real nice ghazal
Take care n keep posting goody ones bye bye Fareed. |
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2nd September 2004, 12:22 PM
Hello...Fareed Ji.........thanx for replying...& tareef..
kuch apne baare me khul kar likh sake to pls. i am near with you. u can post urself on my private msg. box. udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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3rd September 2004, 12:01 PM
Hai roops......
thanx to read this..... urs -udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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4th September 2004, 12:20 AM
Jaanti thi koi to baat hai,
Jo Tu is kadar udas hai.. Na socha Tha is kadar hoga tere sang.. Tuhje khushi dene ka mera har prayaas hai.. Aapki nazm padh ke bahut dukh hua Sunita ji.. ab to aisa lagta hai aapko console karne ke liye mere paas shabd bhi khatam ho gaye hain.. bhagwaan aapko shakti de... aapki dost.. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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4th September 2004, 12:05 PM
Priya.........
o priya.......tumhe itna dukh hua........mujhe afsos hai ki mere dukh ne tumhe itna bura ehsaas diya.... priya samajh sakti hoo ise par kar aapke man me aise vichar aane bhi laazmi hai.....ham shayer logo ka dil aisa hi nazuk hota hai ki dusre k dard ko jaan kar khud bhi dukhi hone lagta hai aur mehsoos bhi karta hai...aur ham kosish bhi karte hai ki ek-dusre ko console kare....magar chahne se sab kuchh nahi hota.....aapne itna kaha mujhe sakoon mila....aap pareshaan mat howo.....ye gam to bachpan se mere liye hai aur inhe jhail rahi ho....kuchh aadat si par gai hai...inhe sehen karne ki.....aur kehte hai na umer k saath saath thehraav sa aa gaya hai.....vahi mere saath hai...ye gam peete peete kuchh thandi si par gai hoo....anyways.....these r my part of life......kuchh kat gai....kuchh kat jayegi....dekhna ek din zindgi u hi fisal jayegi.... baaki tum sab & ye shayri.com hai na mere saath mera nayaab tohfa... thanx to all of u.. urs udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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