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4th June 2009, 01:08 PM
~~Bachpan ki yaad,vo narm ehsaas jo saari duniya se laDne ka housala mujhe deta raha hai,ummeed hai aapko pasaNd aayega~~
Woh bhi kya din the jab bus khilone tuta karte the, Girtey they aansu, par do pal ko rootha karte the... khilkhila kar haNsti thi khushiyaaN, alvida keh kar bhi kahan chhoota karte the... Baras ke sawan hume.n haNsaya karta tha, pyara sa bachpan hardum khushiya lutaya karta tha... papa ke kaNdho.n par baith dekhte the duniya, sara jamana hum par sir jhukaya karta tha.... woh din vo bachpan bahut yaad aata hai, Woh Zindgi fir jeene ko dil lalchaata hai... Sawal tujhse aye khuda! aur niyati se bhi, Kyo.n itni jaldi ek baccha bada ho jata hai... >>R!tu<< Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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4th June 2009, 05:22 PM
Kya Baat hai Ritu jii........
Yeh bahut hi sukhanwar ahsaas hai rally bachpan ki yaaden so amazing.. Agar khuda ne meri suni to main zindagi bhar bus bachpan hi chahunga.. aapke in ahsaason se mujhe Jagjeet jii and chitra Jii ki gazal yaad aa gayi.. Yeh doulat bhi le lo yeh shoharat bhi lelo Bhale chin lo mujhse meri jawani magar mujhko lauta do bachpan ka sawan woh kagaz ki kashti woh barish ka paanii Per aaj kal aap sirf ahsaas hi likh rahi hai, ise kisi gazal ka ya nagme ka roop de deti aur bhi achcha lagta........ well keep posting .... keep smiling............ 
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5th June 2009, 12:44 PM
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namaskar sameer jee, shukriya apna keemti waqt dene ke liye, sahi farmaya aapne aaj kal na jaane kyu koi bhi rachna bus ehsaas hi ban pa rahi hai,kuch hai jo ghazal likhne nahi de raha... par ab koshish karungi jald hi kuch ghazal pesh karu.n mehfil me.n.. aapne pasand kiya iske liye bahut bahut shukriya... yun hi saath dete rahiye khush rahiye aapki dost ritu  Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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9th June 2009, 09:40 AM
 YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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26th June 2009, 12:45 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya naresh jee...... khush rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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excillent...ladaai band aaj se..hahaha |
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bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai,sach padhte hai bachpan yaad aa gaya..tareef kerne k liye koi words nahi hai mere pass.per yeh zaroor kahoonga..ki kisi sher mein kisi word mein kahi bhi tumne koi kami nahi rakhi...aur haa agar tum jaise achchhi shayra se agar yaha koi galati ho jaati toh..yaha bhi is post per kkkhantahir......kkkhatarnaak..saabit hota..excillent ...very good...bahut achchi koshish...saare ehsaas bahut khoob.. ...Socho mere jaisa insaan ise padhker muskuraha raha hai..woh wakai'atan yeh kitni behtreen shayri hongi...Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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16th July 2009, 01:25 PM
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actually thoda busy thi in dino.n....... ~~~~ aur ye kya?? ladai band? kyu bhai kyu?  tum khatarnaak hi bane raho......  meri is choti si kahani ko itni tavajjo dene ke liye dil se shukriya khush rahiye aur khatarnaak bane rahiye....... khuda hafiz Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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17th July 2009, 10:32 PM
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Apne bachpan ke dinoN ka bayaaN bahot hi khoobsurti se kiya hai............ beshak bachpan ka daur hamari zindigi ka sabse pyara daur hota hai...........lekin jab hameN iska ehsaas hota hai tab tak woh daur khatm ho chuka hota hai.............. jeeti rahiye kH Apka dost Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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18th July 2009, 06:46 AM
Ritu Ji,
Mujhe mera bachpan lautane ka shukriya........................... Kis zuban se shukriya ada karun smajh nahi aata, behad khubsurat likhahai apne............... jazbaat, alfaaz, sabhi kamal................ Reps++ for you Quote:
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe  Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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18th July 2009, 09:34 AM
Sawal tujhse aye khuda! aur niyati se bhi, Kyo.n itni jaldi ek baccha bada ho jata hai... Reetu ji vakai bachpan kab gujar jata hai pta hi nahi chalta... nice post.. |
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28th July 2009, 01:36 PM
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hi faizan.. kaise hain aap? maaf kijiyega kuch jyada busy thi in dino.n isliye aa nahi paii.. aapne ek baar fir mere ehsaaso.n ko saraha usske liye bahut bahut shukriya. God bless you. aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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28th July 2009, 01:39 PM
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namaskaar nalin jee, sabse pehl to sorry,late reply karne ke liye.. aapne to mujhe speechless kar diya. tah-e-dil se shukriya is choti si koshish ko padhne ke liye.. khush rahiye God bless you. aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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28th July 2009, 01:45 PM
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namaskaar ababbu ji, apna naam jarur bataiyega... maaf kijiyega aapse pehli baar ru-ba-ru ho rahi hu aur vo bhi late reply ke sath... aapne in ehsaaso.n ko paDha,reply kiya.. bahut accha laga. dil se shukriya.. yun hi sath dete rahiyega. shukriya ek baar fir se.. take care God bless you aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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