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16th March 2005, 12:03 PM
Aadaab DostoN!
Kaiiiiiiiiiiii dino baad yahaan aaye hain.. naye chehre hain, puraane saathi bhi... achha lag raha phir se pariwaar me aakar! Kaii dino baad kuchh likha hai.. chhota sa.. pesh kar rahe hain.. umeed hai likhna bhool nahi gaye hoN!  ________________________________ Khwaab rehte the jo kabhi palkoN pe, Moti bankar aankhoN se jhhaR gaye. Daav par hote hain dil o jaan yahaan, Ulfat ke ye saude mehenge paR gaye. Dhundhle raaste, manzil bhi anjaani si.. Rukte kadam phir aage baR gaye. Na jeet hui, na haari baazi humne.. Kabhi khudse, kabhi kismat se laR gaye. _________________________________ |
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16th March 2005, 12:11 PM
Khwaab rehte the jo kabhi palkoN pe,
Moti bankar aankhoN se jhhaR gaye. Daav par hote hain dil o jaan yahaan, Ulfat ke ye saude mehenge paR gaye. Waaaaahhh...Kya baat hai! Pehla Sher itna khoobsurat... Perfect size 2.... Amazinggg!! Dhundhle raaste, manzil bhi anjaani si.. Rukte kadam phir aage baR gaye. Na jeet hui, na haari baazi humne.. Kabhi khudse, kabhi kismat se laR gaye. WaaaH! Didi! Its always a pleasure to read you... and this one is no different.. Behad khhobusrati aur saadgi se apne ehsaas bayaan kiya hain aapne... Mujhe Behad pasand aaya aapka yeh kalaam bhi... Chhota hai, too achha hai naa  U know why? Bus yunhi thhoda thhoda waqt nikaal kar kucch post karti raha karo... humara bhi mann laga rahega.. aur traffic bhi chalta rahega...  Meri Daad to humesha apni behen ke saath ahi.. phir bhi... Dher saari daad on writing this wonderful kalaam... Aur ek kahaavat hai naa.. Form is temporary, Class is permanent LOL... aur yahan to itne dino baad likhne ke baad bhi form apne peak par hai... Likhti Rehna aur apna acche se khyal rakhna... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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16th March 2005, 12:23 PM
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afshan dost ... sabse pehle to aapka swagat karta huN ek baar phir se apne parivaar maiN se aa mili hai ... bohat accha laga tumhe yahaN dekkh ke .. sahi kaha .. tumne bohat se naye .. bohat se purane chehre sab dekhne ko mile tumhe ... aur khushi ka hona lazmi hi hai ... aur kuch naya naya sa mehsoos hona bhi ... bohat accha laga aapko wapas pa ker ... sach to ye hai ,... ki maiNe to aapko yaad kiya .. jab jab sunday special likha tab tab chaliye aaj ke kalaam pe aate hai ...yun to har sher ki kahani alag si lagi ... par ye kuch jyada accha laga .... Daav par hote hain dil o jaan yahaan, Ulfat ke ye saude mehenge paR gaye. kuch arz kar duN ya chup rahuN ... samajh nahi aa raha... kabhi kabhi koi cheez wakai jindgi se jyada bhari padh jati hai ... bohat khub likha hai aapne ... meri daad teh dil se kabool kareN ... umeedoN ka daman humne kabhi chora nahi kaise bhi hai rishte ye, muh humne mora nahi... lagta kyuN jahan na apna mita kyun "saccha_pyar" bujhte diye jindgi ke, armano ko phir bhi tora nahi.... bas yahi likh paya aapke samne .. umeed hai aap samjhengi maiN kya kehna chahta huN aapka dost kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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16th March 2005, 03:19 PM
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meri afshan, kai din baad aaj tumhe fir se padhna achha laga........ yunhi aati rahna .... raste bhi dhundhle ho aur manjil bhi anjani fir bhi kadam aage badh gaye....... yahi to tumhari kalam hai. |
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16th March 2005, 04:16 PM
Afshan ji.....
aaj aap apni hi mehfil mein kaffi dinon ke baad aayi hain.....dekh kar khushi hui..... aur phir se ek aache kalam se hume nawaza hai..... dil se daad kabool kijiye...... aapka dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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16th March 2005, 04:31 PM
Hi Afshan Ji,
Wow, it feels sooooooooooo good 2 cu back here after sooooooooo long. Hmmmm lag raha tha yaha ke sabhi azeem shayr aur shayra chhutti pe chale gaye hai Hmmmm, kalaam toh humesha ki tarha damdaar. Itne dino baad bhi kalam ki dhaar nahi gayi balke aur bhi tez ho gayi. Bas uhi likhte rahiye aur hume u mast kalaamo se nawaazte rahiye. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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16th March 2005, 06:13 PM
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Khwaab rehte the jo kabhi palkoN pe, Moti bankar aankhoN se jhhaR gaye. Daav par hote hain dil o jaan yahaan, Ulfat ke ye saude mehenge paR gaye. Dhundhle raaste, manzil bhi anjaani si.. Rukte kadam phir aage baR gaye. Na jeet hui, na haari baazi humne.. Kabhi khudse, kabhi kismat se laR gaye. _________________________________ Waah Afshan...aji befikr rahiye..aapke is hunar me koi kami nahi aane waali...kyoNki kuchh hunar waqt ke saath bhi bhulaaye nahi jaate...maslan Cycle chalaana. ........( tum sochti hoNgi...ye kya misaal huvi shaayri or cycle chalane ki...kheir dimaag per jor mat daaliyega...mai eisa hi hooN)HaaN ab baat aapki waapsi ki...to waakai...bahut khushi hui tumhaari waapsi per....bas aasha hai ke yooNhi kuchh waqt nikaal hi liya karogi apni mashrufiyat bhari jindgi se. or hame kuchh parhne ka mauka dogi....ab baat is rachna ki...to waakai...chhota magar bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....DaaNv per hote haiN dil o jaan yahaaN, Ulfat ke saude mehNge ped gaye... bahut khoob raha ye sher bhi. YooNhi likhti raho...meri shubhkaamnaaeiN aapke saath. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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16th March 2005, 06:40 PM
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iss baar aapki gair haazri ki tawaalaat ke tau kya kehne.... magar madame abb aap aa gayee hain to mehfil mein raunak to rahegi hi.. aisa lagta hai jaise koi bohot hi azeez dost .... kafi dino baad aaya ho.. aur iss darmiyaa usne koi raabta na rakha tha iss liye hum usse khafa hai ...dil tau karta hai ke ladaayee karein lekin.... khusi mili tau dostoN se na dua na salaam, yeh kya ghazab kiya tune mere dost bata. yeh waapsi aur abb awaarigi puraani si, aa saare shikwe bhulaa kar gale miloon tujhse. issi liye aap ka istakbaal karta hoon aur ummeed hai ke ek ke baad ek.. zabardast kalaam pesh karti rahenge aap..so get going. Talib. |
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17th March 2005, 04:23 AM
Na jeet hui, na haari baazi humne..
Kabhi khudse, kabhi kismat se laR gaye. Bahut khuub! Afshan ji... beshaq hamesha kee tarah ek umda kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne...aur yeh sher tau kaafi dil azeez raha...aap ko itne arse baad dekh kar bahut khushi ho rahi hai...yoonhi apni kalam se hamein lubhate rahieygaa...aapka salaam meena ji ke through Delhi mein mila thaa...uske baad ab aap nazar aayin hain paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th March 2005, 03:18 PM
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LOL.. tum copy karne se baaz nahi aaoge! Are, ab to tum khud itna achha likhne lage ho! tumhe kya kami?? Lekin koi baat nahi.. tumhe ye kalaam pasand aaya.. maano ise ek medal mil gaya! Tumhaari shayri ki achhi choice to world famous in shayri.com hai! Hmm.. koshish to rahegi ki yunhi aate rahein.. kuchh na kuchh likhte rahein.. dekhte hain waqt kitni mohlat deta hai.. Thanks for all the encouragement! You take care.. and keep smiling! |
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Hi Kunal.. Kaise ho?? Are tumhe kuchh arz karne se pehle itna sochne ki koi zaroorat nahi.. kyunki tum jo kehte ho, bohat khubsoorat kehte ho. Ab ye kalaam hi le lo! Apne aap me kitni umeed liye hai. Is kadar hausla afzaii karne ka bohat bohat shukria! LOL.. hmmm.. humne to kaii sunday specials miss kar diye!! Koi baat nahi.. kosh karenge ki aage miss na ho! kaii dino se site par nahi aaye the.. bohat kuchh sunna sunaana hai.. dua karna ki yunhi waqt milta rahe. Ek baar phir.. tareef ke liye shukria! Apna khayaal rakhna.. |
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17th March 2005, 07:59 PM
Namaskar Afshan ji
Bahut acha laga aapka qalam padh kar Khwaab rehte the jo kabhi palkoN pe, Moti bankar aankhoN se jhhaR gaye. Daav par hote hain dil o jaan yahaan, Ulfat ke ye saude mehenge paR gaye. Dhundhle raaste, manzil bhi anjaani si.. Rukte kadam phir aage baR gaye. Na jeet hui, na haari baazi humne.. Kabhi khudse, kabhi kismat se laR gaye. A very inspiring poetry..........Na jeet hui,na haari baazi humne.. Kabhi khudse, kabhi kismat se laR gaye.Aapki yeh aakhiri line bahut kuch keh gayi......hamare daad kabul kijeyga Keep Smiling |
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Kunal bhai
Very beautiful words.........Yahin daad de rahi huun jahan tumhara itna pyara sher dekha. umeedoN ka daman humne kabhi chora nahi kaise bhi hai rishte ye, muh humne mora nahi... lagta kyuN jahan na apna mita kyun "saccha_pyar" bujhte diye jindgi ke, armano ko phir bhi tora nahi.... An inspiring Sher .......Bahut khoob.......Keep Smiling Tumhari Di |
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i hav joined ur family recently,i would like to say that....
In sitaro ko ankhon mein mahfooz rakh lo, Bahut door tak raat hi raat hogi, Moosafir hain hum bhi musafir ho tum bhi, Phir kisi mod pe mulaqat hogi... |
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Hi Meena! Hmm.. hume bhi kaii dino baad likhna achha laga Koshish to humesha rahi hai ki site par aate rahein.. Bas.. dua karti rehna..Tumhe kalaam pasand aaya.. hume bohat khushi hui.. Koshish rahe ki raastoN par ye kadam yunhi chalte rahein. |
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Sach, kaii dino baad bazm me aane ka mauka mila tha.. kaii dino baad kuchh likha bhi tha.. aur dekhiye, phir itne din ho gaye, yahaan aana nahi hua.. jawaab dene me bhi kaafi deri ho gayi! Lekin koshish to humesha rehegi ki yahaan aate rahein... dostoN se kab tak koi duur reh sakta hai?? Aapne ye kalaam paRa, use saraaha, tah e dil se shukria! Yunhi hausla baRaate rahiyega! |
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Aur ye to aap dostoN ki nazar hai jo humaare kalaam ko is kadar saraahti hai..warna is duniya me jazbaatoN ka kya mol?? Koshish rahegi ki apna haal e dil yunhi aap sab ke saath baaNTte rahein.. Is hausla afzai ke liye bohat bohat shukria! |
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Hey dost! Kaise ho?? Humne suna hai aaj kal ye Chaand bhi kum hi nikla karta hai shayri ke aasmaan me??.. Hmmm.. masroofiyat to hai.. lekin ek baat to tay hai ki dost bhale hi saaloN saal na milein.. lekin jab mulaqaat hoti hai.. to wahi dosti milti hai jo kabhi hua karti thi... aur yahaan to sirf dost nahi, puura parivaar hai.. yahaan se kahaan jana?? LOL aur misaal koi bhi ho... jab tak baat samajhh me aaye, theek hai!Koshish rahegi ki yunhi aate rahein.. kuchh na kuchh likhte rahein.. aur yahaan aake dostoN ko shayri se torture karte rahein! Tum apna khayaal rakhna.. aur yunhi hausla baRaate rehna! |
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8th April 2005, 04:21 PM
Afshan.. kaisi ho?
shayad tum bhi yahan ab kabhi kabhaar hi aati ho, main nahin samajhta tum kabhi likhna bhool paogi.. ye chand ashaar jo tumne yahan likhe hain bahut pasand aaye.. baaki zindagi mein kya chal raha hai.. Shaadi ho gayi kya? waqt mile to batana.. Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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Aaj na to shabd hain kuch kehne ke liye na hi vakt... Bahut khoob.... Take care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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11th May 2005, 01:10 PM
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bahut khoob acha laga padh ke sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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