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8th April 2005, 01:51 PM

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Originally posted by Chaand
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Khwaab rehte the jo kabhi palkoN pe,
Moti bankar aankhoN se jhhaR gaye.

Daav par hote hain dil o jaan yahaan,
Ulfat ke ye saude mehenge paR gaye.

Dhundhle raaste, manzil bhi anjaani si..
Rukte kadam phir aage baR gaye.

Na jeet hui, na haari baazi humne..
Kabhi khudse, kabhi kismat se laR gaye.

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Waah Afshan...aji befikr rahiye..aapke is hunar me koi kami nahi aane waali...kyoNki kuchh hunar waqt ke saath bhi bhulaaye nahi jaate...maslan Cycle chalaana. ........( tum sochti hoNgi...ye kya misaal huvi shaayri or cycle chalane ki...kheir dimaag per jor mat daaliyega...mai eisa hi hooN)

HaaN ab baat aapki waapsi ki...to waakai...bahut khushi hui tumhaari waapsi per....bas aasha hai ke yooNhi kuchh waqt nikaal hi liya karogi apni mashrufiyat bhari jindgi se.

or hame kuchh parhne ka mauka dogi....ab baat is rachna ki...to waakai...chhota magar bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....DaaNv per hote haiN dil o jaan yahaaN,
Ulfat ke saude mehNge ped gaye...


bahut khoob raha ye sher bhi.

YooNhi likhti raho...meri shubhkaamnaaeiN aapke saath.

Hey dost! Kaise ho??

Humne suna hai aaj kal ye Chaand bhi kum hi nikla karta hai shayri ke aasmaan me??.. Hmmm.. masroofiyat to hai.. lekin ek baat to tay hai ki dost bhale hi saaloN saal na milein.. lekin jab mulaqaat hoti hai.. to wahi dosti milti hai jo kabhi hua karti thi... aur yahaan to sirf dost nahi, puura parivaar hai.. yahaan se kahaan jana??

LOL aur misaal koi bhi ho... jab tak baat samajhh me aaye, theek hai!

Koshish rahegi ki yunhi aate rahein.. kuchh na kuchh likhte rahein.. aur yahaan aake dostoN ko shayri se torture karte rahein! Tum apna khayaal rakhna.. aur yunhi hausla baRaate rehna!


Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge... Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya...
   
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