bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne, milan ki khushi bhi zahir hue aur birha ki tadap ka ahsaas bhi karvaya...har ahsaas khoob lga...aapki yeh tazza-tareen poetry hame behad pasand aaye..hamesha ki tarah.
asli roop me,.n matlab? main hardum asli roop mainhi rehta huu.n
khair! mazaaq ki baat ek taraf , yeh kavita aap ko achchhi lagii, jaan kar behad khushii huii... skoshish karuunga ki aage bhi aise hii kuchh na kuchh gaahe-ba-gaahe pesh karta rahuunga...
daad aur pasandagii ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah!