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31st July 2010, 02:23 AM
Ghazal
Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi
Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi
Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi
Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi
Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi
kam-goi,,,silent nature
Razia Yasmeen RAZ
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31st July 2010, 02:38 AM
Raziyaa jee AadaaB!
Ek manzar sa ankhN ke samne khade ho gaya tha padhte waqt .... bahut achchi gazal hai aapki yeh bahut umdaa.... Dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez......
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31st July 2010, 08:32 AM
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Originally Posted by yasmeenraaz
Ghazal
Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi
Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi
Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi
Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi
Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi
kam-goi,,,silent nature
Razia Yasmeen RAZ
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Razia Ji.....Aadaab ! Sameer Sahab se main sehmat hoon....aapke sabhi ashaar koi manzar sa aankhon ke saame le aate hai......bahut maasoom se lage sabhi ehsaas.....nice creation......dil se daad !
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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31st July 2010, 09:06 AM
Apki kam-goi me hi aapke ahsaas palte hain,
Jawan hote hai,Shabad ban ke dhalte hai'n.
subhan allah...........................................Go lden daad is ahsaas pe
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Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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31st July 2010, 11:28 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by yasmeenraaz
Ghazal
Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi
Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi
Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi
Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi
Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi
kam-goi,,,silent nature
Razia Yasmeen RAZ
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Very good razia.. bahut achcha likha likha hai
"salika ho gar bhigi aankho ko padhne ka to.....
aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!"
Tarang
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31st July 2010, 12:42 PM
ahsaas dil ke kareeb rahe.......................!
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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31st July 2010, 01:05 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by yasmeenraaz
Ghazal
Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi
Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi
Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi
Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi
Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi
kam-goi,,,silent nature
Razia Yasmeen RAZ
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razia jee
radhe radhe
bahut khoob
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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31st July 2010, 03:43 PM
[QUOTE=kwahish;404339] Raziyaa jee AadaaB!
Ek manzar sa ankhN ke samne khade ho gaya tha padhte waqt .... bahut achchi gazal hai aapki yeh bahut umdaa.... Dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... [/QUOTE
SHukriya tumhara
Is bazm maeri tamaam adhoorae khwahishaat poorae hoyae
Maeri aek pehchaan mili
goya maerae khalam ko sahara mila
Shukriya,karam aur meherbani
khush baash kerdi zindagani
lagti hai ab mujhko ae zeest
tuhfa jaesae aasmani
razia
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