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Main royi thi....... - 31st July 2010, 02:23 AM

Ghazal

Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi

Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi

Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi

Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi

Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi

kam-goi,,,silent nature

Razia Yasmeen RAZ
   
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31st July 2010, 02:38 AM

Raziyaa jee AadaaB!

Ek manzar sa ankhN ke samne khade ho gaya tha padhte waqt .... bahut achchi gazal hai aapki yeh bahut umdaa.... Dil se daad kabool kijiye..

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31st July 2010, 08:32 AM

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Ghazal

Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi

Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi

Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi

Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi

Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi

kam-goi,,,silent nature

Razia Yasmeen RAZ
Razia Ji.....Aadaab ! Sameer Sahab se main sehmat hoon....aapke sabhi ashaar koi manzar sa aankhon ke saame le aate hai......bahut maasoom se lage sabhi ehsaas.....nice creation......dil se daad !

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31st July 2010, 09:06 AM

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Jawan hote hai,Shabad ban ke dhalte hai'n.

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31st July 2010, 11:28 AM

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Ghazal

Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi

Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi

Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi

Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi

Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi

kam-goi,,,silent nature

Razia Yasmeen RAZ

Very good razia.. bahut achcha likha likha hai


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Ghazal

Gudiya maerii jab khoyi thi
Bilak,bilak kae main royi thi

Subah hoi to,ghayeb thi wo
Saath hi uskae,main soyi thi

Mujhko rota daekh kae maan nae
kee maerii dil-joyi thi

Bhagii,bhagii khud sae hi main
Jaesae khud main,aur koi thi

Lagti thi khaamoash,sada RAZ
Samjho maeri,kam-goi thi

kam-goi,,,silent nature

Razia Yasmeen RAZ
razia jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob



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[QUOTE=kwahish;404339]Raziyaa jee AadaaB!

Ek manzar sa ankhN ke samne khade ho gaya tha padhte waqt .... bahut achchi gazal hai aapki yeh bahut umdaa.... Dil se daad kabool kijiye..

Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... [/QUOTE
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